VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[soprano31]

So Josy has the best character arc

 

[ChipLecsap]

Josy did not notice, in fact she ran to copy something interesting

the point is that one asshole was enough for Josy to unbalance her, make her insecure, and cause her a little existential crisis. But if this lead her that her new Hobby gonna be MMA with MC, than bring it.

 

[Darkwen]

The ironic thing is that there is no Maya story without Josy either.

Which is why I say Maya is the sidekick, there also no Maya story if she could read

 

[KАRАMBA]

If you think about it, DPC put almost all the characters in a bad light in episode 10. With the exception of Derek who received special attention, the rest of the characters left a bitter taste in the player's mouth in some way.

I do not know what the characters left in your mouth...
No one left anything in mine.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Madame is Josy's mother, that's gonna be the story

You know, it can be truth.

In dramatic theory, a character arc is not just adding information, revealing her personality (what he/she always was). A character arc means the character has a problem but, due to some flaw (hamartia), can't solve the problem. Thus, the arc is the overcoming of this flaw (which doesn't need to be something evil or immoral but only something that hinders he/she from solving his or her problem).

So Josy has the best character arc. She has a flaw: the incapacity of saying "no" to people. And what's her problem? Maya! So, her character arc would be overcoming her flaw and getting rid of Maya; a problem I'm happily willing to help her overcome.

No wonder "Maya", in Indian philosophy, means "illusion" and "overcoming the veil of maya" is one of the main tenets of Indian philosophy. Josy's arc is the overcoming of the veil of Maya.

Maya is Josy's story and not the opposite. Maya's troubles are just hers and something that stalls the main plot. And I don't see any "Maya's character arc". She's just the same except she likes cock more than she used to like in the beginning. She isn't solving her own problems. If Mr. DPC didn't create an entire entourage to help her, she would be helpless because she can't overcome her flaw: facing her father.

I also think that Josy needs help getting rid of Maya. So I have a Throuple route where I steal Maya for a solo. This way Josy will get rid of this problem and get her own line.

 

[Dr.Slime]

In dramatic theory, a character arc is not just adding information, revealing her personality (what he/she always was). A character arc means the character has a problem but, due to some flaw (hamartia), can't solve the problem. Thus, the arc is the overcoming of this flaw (which doesn't need to be something evil or immoral but only something that hinders he/she from solving his or her problem).

So Josy has the best character arc. She has a flaw: the incapacity of saying "no" to people. And what's her problem? Maya! So, her character arc would be overcoming her flaw and getting rid of Maya; a problem I'm happily willing to help her overcome.

No wonder "Maya", in Indian philosophy, means "illusion" and "overcoming the veil of maya" is one of the main tenets of Indian philosophy. Josy's arc is the overcoming of the veil of Maya.

Maya is Josy's story and not the opposite. Maya's troubles are just hers and something that stalls the main plot. And I don't see any "Maya's character arc". She's just the same except she likes cock more than she used to like in the beginning. She isn't solving her own problems. If Mr. DPC didn't create an entire entourage to help her, she would be helpless because she can't overcome her flaw: facing her father.

yeah you know we could kill Maya and Josy the game will be smooth ride except with Quinn being drug deals and stuff
but imagine a game were you go to University do mini games for classes bang a teachers do drugs and bang more girls
while planning party for you frat
as much i hate to say it it will be boring
but what we all wish for is this Loan thingy ended in ep11 with everything related and everything left is Others like Rio kidanap and Quinn drug deal ending in ep12
while teasing us with family issue for mc and every mystery we havnt solve yet from 13-16 episode

 

[saynotoNTR]

I do not know what the characters left in your mouth...
No one left anything in mine.
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yeah some emotional lesbian players's mouth . I played, Josy x Maya, others and Sage, and I didn't found any bad taste, or saw any of them in bad light. and I dont know what Bella did, but her Anal scene what I watched on pornhub definitely makes up for it whatever it was.

I think only Zoey's scenes annoyed me a bit, but I don't care about her so Jacob can have her

What I wanted to say is that it wasn't just the main girls like Josy who disappointed some players in some way in episode 10 but others characters too.

• The DIKs distrusting the MC;
• The Jocks planning to break the deal with the DIKs;
• Jill believing that the MC stole her pair of panties and claiming to not know who the MC really is;
• Zoey as always running (literally) from problems when they arise;
• Jacob hitting on Zoey indirectly even against the MC's wishes;
• Maya revealing that she has no idea what she actually signed;

 

[KАRАMBA]

She doesn't have to. She is.

No, no...
She's not you.

 

[ChipLecsap]

What I wanted to say is that it wasn't just the main girls like Josy who disappointed some players in some way in episode 10 but others characters too.

• The DIKs distrusting the MC;
• The Jocks planning to break the deal with the DIKs;
• Jill believing that the MC stole her pair of panties and claiming to not know who the MC really is;
• Zoey as always running (literally) from problems when they arise;
• Jacob hitting on Zoey indirectly even against the MC's wishes;
• Maya revealing that she has no idea what she actually signed;

Yeah and I'm sure some where upset that Rio flirted with Leon and Jamie, to make MC jealous

 

[Tremonia]

No, no...
She's not you.

Dude, did you just make the "whoever says it is himself" argument from kindergarten kids?

 

[KАRАMBA]

Yeah and I'm sure some where upset that Rio flirted with Leon and Jamie, to make MC jealous

She sucked their cocks.
Who cares about flirting

Dude, did you just make the "whoever says it is himself" argument from kindergarten kids?

You ? Perhaps.
I'm not.

 

[saynotoNTR]

Yeah and I'm sure some where upset that Rio flirted with Leon and Jamie, to make MC jealous

Damn it!
I have reached the reaction limit!
I'm going to come back here just to give a Red Heart! We can't miss the chance to tease the cucks.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Everything I say is a fact. I'm always right and never wrong.

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[ChipLecsap]

You know, it can be truth.

I also think that Josy needs help getting rid of Maya. So I have a Throuple route where I steal Maya for a solo. This way Josy will get rid of this problem and get her own line.

you confuse pity with love Chick player. I hope you know that in deep down that is what you feel for Maya. pity, your new found like toward her is dishonest, like I'm dishonest with Jill after I make out with Rio, and grabbed Bianca's ass

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

DPC responds to this.

Oscar accuses her of being a generic character, of having the most generic characterization possible.
Josy searches the Internet for the best hobbies for girls.

I would say everything has been said

p.s. I don't understand why DPC keeps putting LIs in a bad light, it seems to me to be a suicidal move in an AVN

Even this would be more interesting than her official line. What the DPC offers with the standart Josy route is so boring that I continue to create new routes where I cuck her, at least for some kind of intensity of passions.

 

[-VQueS-]

Quinn - a dark route of drug trafficking and prostitution, a girl raised by the hood. Potential redemption arc. The story of a weak and vulnerable woman inside, who hides under the mask of a rude bitch.

Redemption arc will be in BaDIK's sequel to "Prison Break".Unless she escapes before then. Michael Scofield and Tremolo are both engineers. Coincidence? I don't think so!

 

[ReallyNotTimmy]

The problem I raised was Josy (being taken) trying to seduce an MC who recently started a relationship with someone else and Josy knows about it.

You said that the problem I raised applies to other girls... Mention me a girl who, upon learning that the MC is in a relationship, tries to seduce him by wearing lingerie or in any other way. Give me just one. Only one.

Maya, obviously.

If you’re playing the game on another LI’s route, and you choose or are obligated to hang out with Maya for “movie night,” she shows up wearing a wet see-through top, and thigh-high stockings which she knows are Tremolo’s fetish. She offers to let him touch them, and of course he goes right for where the fabric meets the flesh, just inches from her pussy. Then she confesses that ASMR turns her on, and lets him whisper sexy things to her—and “peanut butter sandwich,” which gives her a girl-boner too.

I have an Others route where Maya without Josy is the endgame, and after all this flirting I had Tremolo confess he’s still into her—though he felt like shit for saying so because she’s with Josy and he’s fond of her. But at the barbecue Maya confessed she was into him too. Because of course she is, and not just because he’s the main character.

• He’s her only real guy friend, other than her brother.
• He’s the only guy she’s ever had heterosexual feelings for.
• He helps her with all her HOT hazing, her homophobic father shit, and her “math.”
• She’s a moviebuff, and he got her a TV. A broken one, but still.

If he’s not in a throuple with her and Josy, her relationship with Josy no longer has him as a stabilizing influence (and, obviously, object of lust) and is therefore doomed. Both Maya and Josy kinda know it. That’s why, whenever you put Tremolo in their path, they’re both angling for Tremolo to become their rebound guy. When they eventually split, I expect he’ll get to choose one or the other.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

you confuse pity with love Chick player. I hope you know that in deep down that is what you feel for Maya. pity, your new found like toward her is dishonest, like I'm dishonest with Jill after I make out with Rio, and grabbed Bianca's ass
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Lol, I making it to having fun and watch the world burn, shhhush fanboy

 

[ChipLecsap]

Damn it!
I have reached the reaction limit!
I'm going to come back here just to give a Red Heart! We can't miss the chance to tease the cucks.

out of reaction too, so here a thumbs up to you,
and speaking of cucks :
The only one that players were not disappointed is Johnny Boy, who practically Begging MC to Fuck his Girlfriend while he Watch

 

[Darkwen]

Maya, obviously.

If you’re playing the game on another LI’s route, and you choose or are obligated to hang out with Maya for “movie night,” she shows up wearing a wet see-through top, and thigh-high stockings which she knows are Tremolo’s fetish. She offers to let him touch them, and of course he goes right for where the fabric meets the flesh, just inches from her pussy. Then she confesses that ASMR turns her on, and lets him whisper sexy things to her—and “peanut butter sandwich,” which gives her a girl-boner too.

I have an Others route where Maya without Josy is the endgame, and after all this flirting I had Tremolo confess he’s still into her—though he felt like shit for saying so because she’s with Josy and he’s fond of her. But at the barbecue Maya confessed she was into him too. Because of course she is, and not just because he’s the main character.

• He’s her only real guy friend, other than her brother.
• He’s the only guy she’s ever had heterosexual feelings for.
• He helps her with all her HOT hazing, her homophobic father shit, and her “math.”
• She’s a moviebuff, and he got her a TV. A broken one, but still.

If he’s not in a throuple with her and Josy, her relationship with Josy no longer has him as a stabilizing influence (and, obviously, object of lust) and is therefore doomed. Both Maya and Josy kinda know it. That’s why, whenever you put Tremolo in their path, they’re both angling for Tremolo to become their rebound guy. When they eventually split, I expect he’ll get to choose one or the other.

On Throuple Maya even says she feels more comfortable with Mc than Josy that's pretty much proof there break up is coming, of course the best choose is Josy give me pillow forts over peanut butter sandwich