also in my opinion Maya and Josy's run was rather disappointing in this chapter. tommy's reaction is as coarse as could be expected and the troupe's cover story creates a completely artificial situation. is this really a problem for Maya and Josy? Josy first proposes and then complains about it, Maya surely has other thoughts than being considered a lewd girl...
I didn't like at all that it's Derek who explains us Helen's situation anyway, ok it's a private matter, but the day before we meet her it should be Maya who wants to explain us the situation.
the scene in the library is nice, because it's true enough, but it's not that it's particularly brilliant.
the double date with Maya and Josy are two good segments, but we have to choose another time. there is very little trouple in this trouple run
at the end of the day the most interesting aspect of the whole chapter is the fact that Maya confesses that she feels more comfortable with MC than with Josy (the blameless Josy), which is a total novelty and also opens up to the " solo Maya" in the aftermath of the trouple breakup. i.e. the most interesting thing about the run is a hint of the run's failure: good but not great.