VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Mechaforce]

Definitely, I cannot understand who says MC is overreacting.. I mean Maya and Josy are the two Love Interests which was introduced at the earliest in the story. You have to take the story into progress, season 1 went by MC being romantically involved in these two girls. Add to that he is a teenager which did have very intimate moments with both of them. You might be thinking clearly and saying "just ignore them lol why cry", it does make sense to MC feel like this in the story.

I feel like people needs to empathize with MC more. He felt something for Josy, learned she had a partner but still she clung onto him. Then he met Maya, which was a like a friendly relationship which became something more later on both living in the same room.. Until someone else came to that room and secrets revealed. I honestly felt sad for the MC most of the time. Most people say he is not faultless or similar stuff, but you don't think like that in a moment of pain..

I even wished he had a harsher option to choose at the end of the library dialogue.

When I say he overreacted, I don't mean he shouldn't feel hurt with the whole situation. Of course it was really upsetting. I was feeling really sad when I finished playing episode 3. But sad, not angry. I remember when I was 16 or 17, I was at a birthday party of my crush, found out she had a boyfriend, I pretty much excused myself in the middle of the party. I remember how upset I was, so I fully empathize.
What I'm saying, he shouldn't just blame the girls for everything and be angry with them. The situation sucks, but it's not all their fault. No more than his fault.
It's ok to feel hurt. It's not ok to snap at people because you feel hurt.

I don't think people hate on the MC for being upset about it as much as they think that he was upset about it for way to long. Which is also supported that after the dorm scene you can say you overreacted and then the story continues to make you overreact anyway and draw out the drama way farther than it probably needed to be. I don't really have a problem at all really how the drama itself went I was more so upset that Maya and Josy became connected like that. Don't get me wrong the twist at the end of episode 3 was CRAZY but I just didn't like that they stayed together anyways. I wanted to gain a relationship with them individually and not a package deal. I'm a simple dude and threesomes never really interested me. I only want one chick at one time. Now Jill is always my favorite but Maya interested me and I liked helping her with her tasks and seeing the relationship grow between her and the MC and Josy is kind of in the way of that.

I'm sorry but I didn't write that very well organization wise and with correct punctuation, but I got tired and lazy and I didn't want to go back and fix it

 

[EZ8lt]

You should work for DPC as a writer. I think you would really add some contrast and improvements to what he may be thinking. You would do really good!

He isn't wrong tho. Writing has several issues at ep 4.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Seriously, DPC should fish one or more editors out of this forum. There are a lot of more cringe aspects of last and others episodes which could've been, if not entirely solved, massively toned down by simply having someone point to him "This scene is too dense, spread the burden a little with that other one" or "you're pushing this point too far, step down a little", like many users have. Plus, I'm sure many would be pleased to give back months/years of free entertainment.

*not that ep4 or others were bad, far from it.

I think the "Great Summer Waifu Wars of 2019" may have scared him away from here to be honest. It was a crazy time. Someone even made a big map with borders and continents and shit dividing up the countries between the girls.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

He isn't wrong tho. Writing has several issues at ep 4.

And considering this was the first episode after going pro and that going pro would mean more time for better scripts and proofreading...

 

[Mormont]

Someone give this man a blow job


Take a wild guess


That so...you

When it comes to a female in need I'm right there I just have to soft a heart at times

Yup,with Quinn there`s just nothing to redeem,she`s perfect the way she is


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Well I thought I'd be nice with Quinn but yeah I'd have her as a Li the Dik route needs more than just Sage and Quinn fits in nicely and also to see people have a meltdown because of it

 

[android3231]

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[look_skywalker]

I think the "Great Summer Waifu Wars of 2019" may have scared him away from here to be honest. It was a crazy time. Someone even made a big map with borders and continents and shit dividing up the countries between the girls.

Damn, I wanna see that. I wanna know which girl's continent i'm living in.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

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I hate to break it to you, but Tybalt is too fucking limp-wristed to even hold a gun, let alone shoot one with any degree of accuracy.

 

[Mechaforce]

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Best ending ever

 

[jamdan]

Live shot of Tybalt trying to shoot up the school

 

[Queckor]

Apart from that, I also hope this three-way scenario will not be the only romance path for them in the future.

only threesome scenario would be the worste shit ever

 

[Traitus]

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Nah, it's gonna be Jill yandere mode the one with the gun.

 

[look_skywalker]

only threesome scenario would be the worste shit ever

Of course you're saying that. You want Josy all for yourself. But it's fine. You can have Josy and I'll go with Maya.

 

[Mormont]

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He'll hire a hitman or pay one of the Jocks to take him out not knowing how skilled the MC actually is and it will backfire big style

 

[Esp``]

You should work for DPC as a writer. I think you would really add some contrast and improvements to what he may be thinking. You would do really good!

Thanks man, that means a lot. I'm just very compassionate about the game which most of us here are aswell. We only criticize it because we know this game stands way above than the rest. So every minor flaw seems like big to us. I also like to write so I spend extra time about writing comprehensive posts about the things in my head. Criticism is road to perfection.

I was more so upset that Maya and Josy became connected like that. Don't get me wrong the twist at the end of episode 3 was CRAZY but I just didn't like that they stayed together anyways. I wanted to gain a relationship with them individually and not a package deal.

Yeah feeling is mutual. I never cared about Josy after bench in the woods. But developer kept bringing her back to the mix. Maya on the other hand was the main interest for me since start and in 0.3. Plot twist was immense but still I had hopes about the relationship. After 0.4, I'm just baffled at how did it turned out. Them choosing each other, making up in a matter of seconds in the room. Then the decision in the library, blew my mind.

 

[Heroes Killer]

Dr. PinkCake is probably the only one who can make me repeat half of the game...

I am DIK as hell, but...

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[Queckor]

Of course you're saying that. You want Josy all for yourself. But it's fine. You can have Josy and I'll go with Maya.

i would call that a deal

 

[M.Sato]

Damn, I wanna see that. I wanna know which girl's continent i'm living in.

https://f95zone.to/threads/being-a-dik-v0-4-0-dr-pinkcake.25332/page-1713#post-2651884

A Darkmetal production.

 

[name88 - King of Hearts]

I'm actually in two minds about that and I think it's been missed by a lot of people but Derek seems to have an issue with not keeping his mouth shut and pretty much telling Rusty of the MC troubles. Is he as trustworthy as we think.

I think he is going to be on his sister side first and foremost...as he should but also think his friendship is genuine.

And considering this was the first episode after going pro and that going pro would mean more time for better scripts and proofreading...

Idk...ep 3 had some problems with keepin` consistency,4 feels like going back on track...except for 1 but major problem of giving a taste of Quinn to everyone who did not pursued her before...

When it comes to a female in need I'm right there I just have to soft a heart at times

AT TIMES

 

[KKona]

If you could make one side girl a main LI, who would it be and why?

For me, it's close between Quinn and Riona, but I'll go Riona. Probably because Quinn already seems like a main LI to me, and I would like to learn more about Riona. Also, she's hot and I'd suck peanut butter from each and every one of her toenails.