VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[shazba]

Honestly, it's kind of working for me. You know, attitude is half the battle and she's got it in spades. She's in pretty good shape for her age...I'd almost call her a mature spinner. If she let's her hair down, loses the glasses, and gets a better makeover then she's totally salvageable. You can even nut inside worry free. Chin up Derek.

If you need to "go to a happy place" when you're having sex, something is wrong...

 

[felicemastronzo]

I think most queries have been deliberately set up and will be resolved, the ones I think are due to overactive imaginations and may never be answered are:

• Who is Sage's family? (it may not be important - assuming it's not the Burkes - and may never be answered)
• Who is in the other picture frame seen in Jade's home at the start of Ep 3? (could just be another family photo and not important)
• Is the guy with the man-bun Sage's Dad? (Sage's family may not matter and we may never see this guy again)
• What happened to Quinn's Dad? (It could just be implied that he's gone and not addressed again)
• Who was outside the MC's room? (While it probably was the traitor, it could have just been some random lighting issue with the render and amount to nothing)

The rest will be answered either specifically or just by matter of fact, but those above may not be important to the story and may never be answered.

it seems to me that many apparently important issues have been resolved in a highly anti-climatic way, not solving and not explaining anything

Mc's mother's letter looked like it should change MC's status quo, but we'll have to wait for the last page of the diary to establish that it was just a moment of good feelings, and the grand legacy didn't thrill even that poor MC.

how will Maya get past the scavenger hunt? cheating
and how is she going to keep Quinn from noticing? not showing her anything

the great mystery of the ultimatum of Maya's father was dragged on for 6 episodes and in the end the substance was revealed to us by Maya after 15 minutes that we had met her, the rest were only complications narratively useless and not very credible.

I repeat: it is not a thriller, there is no Kaiser Soze

the big questions right now are just the blackmail of Chad and Bella's husband, the others are questions that will perhaps be resolved between one scene and another.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

To me the bar is very high for Jill so far. While her "lewd" (they're not very lewd really,) scenes are tame in comparison to every other sexual encounter, I find them the most sensual of all, so I wonder how DPC will pull off a Jill sex scene without it coming across like just another scene (assuming she's not the mc's aunt and the sex scene has a green light).

Simple; the MC makes good on saying he'd climb up to her balcony because she avoids throughout Ep 7 and Jill is so taken by this gesture that she finally gives in because it's the most romantic thing anyone has ever done for her. It's also very "Romeo and Juliet" as, setting aside how that story ends, it was a measure of how much Romeo loved Juliet that he would risk so much for her in that story, and this would be the MC risking a lot for Jill.

I honestly think this is the best way to break down Jill's defenses completely.

• Who was outside the MC's room? (While it probably was the traitor, it could have just been some random lighting issue with the render and amount to nothing)

This was definitely more than than a "lighting issue". The images are labeled in the game files as "surprise" and there are 2 images where 2 lights appear to be obstructed by something in front of them.



On one in particular, by increasing the brightness and contrast, it would appear to be a person blocking the light.



So really the question is, who is this and what were they sneaking around for? Also, if this person was sneaking around here, perhaps they were also sneaking around when he was with Bella and it could come back to bite him.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Honestly, it's kind of working for me. You know, attitude is half the battle and she's got it in spades. She's in pretty good shape for her age...I'd almost call her a mature spinner. If she let's her hair down, loses the glasses, and gets a better makeover then she's totally salvageable. You can even nut inside worry free. Chin up Derek.

a fan of dentures?

 

[shazba]

it seems to me that many apparently important issues have been resolved in a highly anti-climatic way, not solving and not explaining anything

Mc's mother's letter looked like it should change MC's status quo, but we'll have to wait for the last page of the diary to establish that it was just a moment of good feelings, and the grand legacy didn't thrill even that poor MC.

how will Maya get past the scavenger hunt? cheating
and how is she going to keep Quinn from noticing? not showing her anything

the great mystery of the ultimatum of Maya's father was dragged on for 6 episodes and in the end the substance was revealed to us by Maya after 15 minutes that we had met her, the rest were only complications narratively useless and not very credible.

I repeat: it is not a thriller, there is no Kaiser Soze

the big questions right now are just the blackmail of Chad and Bella's husband, the others are questions that will perhaps be resolved between one scene and another.

Definitely, each answer isn't a big reveal, but they are still things we want to know. Some are probably meant to be mind fucks, the rest are just curiosity.

Simple; the MC makes good on saying he'd climb up to her balcony because she avoids throughout Ep 7 and Jill is so taken by this gesture that she finally gives in because it's the most romantic thing anyone has ever done for her. It's also very "Romeo and Juliet" as, setting aside how that story ends, it was a measure of how much Romeo loved Juliet that he would risk so much for her in that story, and this would be the MC risking a lot for Jill.

I honestly think this is the best way to break down Jill's defenses completely.

I was thinking more like 69'ing on the way down to earth while skydiving from 10,000 feet. But your way could work too...

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

I think most queries have been deliberately set up and will be resolved, the ones I think are due to overactive imaginations and may never be answered are:

• Who is Sage's family? (it may not be important - assuming it's not the Burkes - and may never be answered)
• Who is in the other picture frame seen in Jade's home at the start of Ep 3? (could just be another family photo and not important)
• Is the guy with the man-bun Sage's Dad? (Sage's family may not matter and we may never see this guy again)
• What happened to Quinn's Dad? (It could just be implied that he's gone and not addressed again)
• Who was outside the MC's room? (While it probably was the traitor, it could have just been some random lighting issue with the render and amount to nothing)

The rest will be answered either specifically or just by matter of fact, but those above may not be important to the story and may never be answered.

I agree with you that Sage's family may not play a role in this, but Sage's drama has to go somewhere, and with Chad out there are I think only three options. Still Chad and his secrets, the HOTs powerhungry members and the vague hint about her not being completely ok with her family.

 

[Kellermann]

a fan of dentures?

If you've never had a gumjob, you ain't been living.

 

[shazba]

I agree with you that Sage's family may not play a role in this, but Sage's drama has to go somewhere, and with Chad out there are I think only three options. Still Chad and his secrets, the HOTs powerhungry members and the vague hint about her not being completely ok with her family.

I'm wondering what will maintain the impetus for the next few episodes. Getting into the DIKs, getting to know the characters, passing Hell Week - all of that was gold material, but now we know everyone, possibly already fucked everyone, there just seems to be a bunch of loose ends to tie up, fuck Jill and make Riona cum and then we're done. I think it needs a hot springs episode...

If you've never had a gumjob, you ain't been living.

Never been happier to count myself among the dying.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I agree with you that Sage's family may not play a role in this, but Sage's drama has to go somewhere, and with Chad out there are I think only three options. Still Chad and his secrets, the HOTs powerhungry members and the vague hint about her not being completely ok with her family.

the issue of blackmail in Chad is not yet resolved

and until it is resolved Chad will not be able to leave the scene, and until Chad does not go out of the scene Sage will be the abandoned girlfriend

If you've never had a gumjob, you ain't been living.

I have so many reasons to say that I have not lived, that one more or one less makes no difference

 

[felicemastronzo]

If you've never had a gumjob, you ain't been living.

I have so many reasons to say that I have not lived, that one more or one less makes no difference

 

[moskyx]

Simple; the MC makes good on saying he'd climb up to her balcony because she avoids throughout Ep 7 and Jill is so taken by this gesture that she finally gives in because it's the most romantic thing anyone has ever done for her. It's also very "Romeo and Juliet" as, setting aside how that story ends, it was a measure of how much Romeo loved Juliet that he would risk so much for her in that story, and this would be the MC risking a lot for Jill.

I honestly think this is the best way to break down Jill's defenses completely.



This was definitely more than than a "lighting issue". The images are labeled in the game files as "surprise" and there are 2 images where 2 lights appear to be obstructed by something in front of them.

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On one in particular, by increasing the brightness and contrast, it would appear to be a person blocking the light.

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So really the question is, who is this and what were they sneaking around for? Also, if this person was sneaking around here, perhaps they were also sneaking around when he was with Bella and it could come back to bite him.

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That Bella shot is awfully similar to that one in AL when MC is sleeping in bed with Megan and Melissa. We'll see if it's just a dark joke

 

[shazba]

the issue of blackmail in Chad is not yet resolved

and until it is resolved Chad will not be able to leave the scene, and until Chad does not go out of the scene Sage will be the abandoned girlfriend

Being able to defend Chad during the intervention with Cathy may impact how things pan out with him. I don't think he's out for revenge since he admitted he screwed up by attacking the mc (and realized it wasn't the mc blackmailing him when the other Tri-Alphas saw the Arieth pics), and he's broken up with Sage so he doesn't need to put on a show of fighting for his girlfriend, but maybe they can become friends to some end (like if the mc is looking for some action from the other side of the divide...)

 

[Blades1138]

To me the bar is very high for Jill so far. While her "lewd" (they're not very lewd really,) scenes are tame in comparison to every other sexual encounter, I find them the most sensual of all, so I wonder how DPC will pull off a Jill sex scene without it coming across like just another scene (assuming she's not the mc's aunt and the sex scene has a green light).

Those scenes would be sensual if Jill had a personality beyond the flat 'good girl' that she is. She's not only disadvantaged due to her creepy, almost masculine face, but she's boring as hell too.
EDIT: Matter of fact, there's an inconsistency in her character as the only 'interesting' things she does is attempt to be 'seductive' with MC, while she's prim and proper the rest of the time.

 

[KoolMe]

Yeah that one's been bothering me for a while now...

sometimes LICKING helps .........................................

 

[Jimmy90]

Ep6, in the auditorium scene with Jill, when she asks mc's opinion about the songs she practices, do you believe that the choices we made, will have an importance on her perfomance later, or even more??

 

[KoolMe]

She's not only disadvantaged due to her creepy, almost masculine face,

if this is a creepy, almost masculine face

then...

this is a crossdressing Tybalt

 

[felicemastronzo]

Being able to defend Chad during the intervention with Cathy may impact how things pan out with him. I don't think he's out for revenge since he admitted he screwed up by attacking the mc (and realized it wasn't the mc blackmailing him when the other Tri-Alphas saw the Arieth pics), and he's broken up with Sage so he doesn't need to put on a show of fighting for his girlfriend, but maybe they can become friends to some end (like if the mc is looking for some action from the other side of the divide...)

I don't know if that choice will have big consequences, we should ask the code spies. from a narrative point of view it seems to me more no than yes, Mc's defense is completely irrelevant and for Chad he remains the prime suspect in blackmail.

I don't think Chad's character has a great future anyway, maybe if he really turns out he's gay he'll stay in sight, otherwise I think he'll quickly disappear

 

[SomboSteel]

if this is a creepy, almost masculine face
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then...
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this is a crossdressing Tybalt

i dont think it is unfair to say that Jill's face can seem very different scene to scene, moreso than most of the other girls in the game. idk if its the lighting or whatever, but sometimes she looks beautiful and sometimes she looks kinda off. she is like that two faced girl in that Seinfeld episode.

but many of the girls like Sage and Isabella and Josy and even Quinn look very consistently good throughout the entire story

 

[chronomate]

Imagine if KRJ and Sage are twins

KRJ is too petite for that.

Sage was the twin that sucked up all the nutrients in utero, which is why she has enormous "assets" while KRJ is more petite. Because what's porn without some pre-natal body horror thrown in for fun?

Does your friend ever wake up with soft titties on his back and a ranging thrust up his ass, that leaves him filled with a strange kind of lust???? Just looking to diagnose the actual sexuality of your friend.

Just going to leave this here...

 

[R1viel]

i dont think it is unfair to say that Jill's face can seem very different scene to scene, moreso than most of the other girls in the game. idk if its the lighting or whatever, but sometimes she looks beautiful and sometimes she looks kinda off. she is like that two faced girl in that Seinfeld episode.

but many of the girls like Sage and Isabella and Josy and even Quinn look very consistently good throughout the entire story

I've got to agree, I think Maya and Jill have the most mixed close up shots. both of them have scenes that go from "wow what a gorgeous character" to "nope... nope, I'm out. time to hold ctrl!"
I can't recall any scenes with with the other LI's where I've have wanted to skip dialogue just to so i can stop looking at a particular render.