VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[DavDR]

let's say the LIs basically ignore each other, particularly in the fourth chapter where Jill, in any case, and Sage or Bella, depending on whether chosen as a refuge, know about MC's emotional turmoil but decide to never delve into it

Josy takes 3 chapters to ask MC if he's still seeing Jill, and she's the only one who interacts with him in that regard anyway

in the sixth chapter both Maya and Josy show some jealousy towards Sage, but it seems more motivated by the immediate choice to have lunch with Sage than by any precedent

if Sage and Josy were even vaguely aware of each other the choice to take turns romancing with MC during the same HOTs party in the garden would be pretty fearless

Yes, it's one of the false notes in the story. Especially glaring if the MC later enters the M/J relationship at the end of episode 4.

I know they have that ridiculous picnic scene where Maya basically gives MC permission to fuck around but, it just seems weird that they wouldn't be concerned that the MC is already in some kind of relationship with Sage. And Josy is also aware that MC is dating Jill as well. It all just heightens the impression that the MC isn't really a part of their relationship and is in fact a 'boy toy' for them to play with.

 

[DirtyMario]

It all just heightens the impression that the MC isn't really a part of their relationship and is in fact a 'boy toy' for them to play with.

I fail to see the problem in this. MC is just as much of a whore as some of the girls are, unless you somehow have a monogamous playthrough, which means you're correct, but also boring af.

 

[AchedCroissant]

How about the best bro in the game - Magnar?

You know, the only guy on the campus that has a bigger dick than MC’s.

Mc with King Magnar

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It is the only one that has received 5/5 with Sage

 

[AchedCroissant]

It's fucking coming.

• Bella has been jealous from the get go, staring daggers in Jill's direction while simultaneously trying to set her up with the mc:
  
  Spoiler: Here she's just heard that the mc has organised a date with Jill

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• Maya is jealous of Josy before she even knows it's Josy:
  Spoiler: Who are you trying to convince, us or you?

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• Quinn's jealous of Sage:
  
  Spoiler: Could Quinn look any cuter with those doe eyes betraying her sudden rush of jealosy

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• Jill is jealous of Sage and Josy:
  Spoiler: It's possible she's the only girl in the room that hasn't had some of that throbbing cock!

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• Heather is jealous of Nicole:
  
  Spoiler: She's heard the stories, she wants to be sitting in that lap.

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• Josy is jealous of Maya:
  
  Spoiler: She doesn't like being left out of the loop

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At this point Sage is missing I don't know if that's good or bad

 

[felicemastronzo]

Yes, it's one of the false notes in the story. Especially glaring if the MC later enters the M/J relationship at the end of episode 4.

I know they have that ridiculous picnic scene where Maya basically gives MC permission to fuck around but, it just seems weird that they wouldn't be concerned that the MC is already in some kind of relationship with Sage. And Josy is also aware that MC is dating Jill as well. It all just heightens the impression that the MC isn't really a part of their relationship and is in fact a 'boy toy' for them to play with.

I wouldn't make it about Maya and Josy, it applies to all of them.
they pretend nothing happened

Bella knows about Jill, should have figured out about Maya and Josy (expecially if Mc went to her in the forth), and should have too some suspicions about Sage

Jill knows about Josy and therefore Maya, she may have suspicions about Bella.

Sage is the one who's a bit more on the sidelines, she can only know about Josy and Maya if Mc went to see her in the 4th.

 

[DirtyMario]

I wouldn't make it about Maya and Josy, it applies to all of them.
they pretend nothing happened

Bella knows about Jill, should have figured out about Maya and Josy (expecially if Mc went to her in the forth), and should have too some suspicions about Sage

Jill knows about Josy and therefore Maya, she may have suspicions about Bella.

Sage is the one who's a bit more on the sidelines, she can only know about Josy and Maya if Mc went to see her in the 4th.

Does... does anyone in school know about Josy and Maya except for MC and Derek? I really can't recall if they ever made that public.

 

[hakuna-matata]

They should have all the LIs fight for the MC. The winner of the elimination chamber match should be then found worthy for the MC.

 

[shazba]

Does... does anyone in school know about Josy and Maya except for MC and Derek? I really can't recall if they ever made that public.

Nope, they've kept it a secret. Even at the end of ep7 when Maya is talking with Sage, she doesn't trust her enough at first to tell her. Not sure if she finally does.

At this point Sage is missing I don't know if that's good or bad

Spoiler: Don't believe her, it's a trap!

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[felicemastronzo]

Does... does anyone in school know about Josy and Maya except for MC and Derek? I really can't recall if they ever made that public.

I'd say no, at most the girl who was with them at the camp.

Tommy doesn't seem to know anything about it either, or Becky who is the only ex-schoolmate of the two we've met

 

[DirtyMario]

They should have all the LIs fight for the MC. The winner of the elimination chamber match should be then found worthy for the MC.

Yes. And do it like that one Joker scene in The Dark Knight, make them all gather and then throw a stick in the middle.

Spoiler: Don't believe her, it's a trap!

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Yep it definitely is now but I don't think it was back when she said it.

 

[DavDR]

I wouldn't make it about Maya and Josy, it applies to all of them.
they pretend nothing happened

Bella knows about Jill, should have figured out about Maya and Josy (expecially if Mc went to her in the forth), and should have too some suspicions about Sage

Jill knows about Josy and therefore Maya, she may have suspicions about Bella.

Sage is the one who's a bit more on the sidelines, she can only know about Josy and Maya if Mc went to see her in the 4th.

M/J were just the particular examples that I was siting based on that one glaring incident, that seems to have never happened.

Just look at all of the examples that Shazba just posted.

Maya get's obviously jealous of a girl she's never seen but completely ignores MC's relationship with one of the hottest and most socially prominent women on campus. A woman BTW that Maya blames for not rescuing her from 'persecution' in the scavenger hunt.

Josy get's jealous of Maya while completely ignoring Sage. She does react to MC dating Jill but then there's that text where she basically says sorry, not sorry and anyway I'm back with Maya now.

Just doesn't make a lot of sense.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Spoiler: Don't believe her, it's a trap!

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statistically at least for a couple of years she should not notice.....

 

[felicemastronzo]

M/J were just the particular examples that I was siting based on that one glaring incident, that seems to have never happened.

Just look at all of the examples that Shazba just posted.

Maya get's obviously jealous of a girl she's never seen but completely ignores MC's relationship with one of the hottest and most socially prominent women on campus. A woman BTW that Maya blames for not rescuing her from 'persecution' in the scavenger hunt.

Josy get's jealous of Maya while completely ignoring Sage. She does react to MC dating Jill but then there's that text where she basically says sorry, not sorry and anyway I'm back with Maya now.

Just doesn't make a lot of sense.

I think it's the way the epilogue of the first season is badly written, which creates a nonsensical situation.
it is that passage from ALL IN that makes everything difficult to understand

 

[Warscared]

Yes. And do it like that one Joker scene in The Dark Knight, make them all gather and then throw a stick in the middle.

the problem with that is that the stick they are fighting over is the MC`s dick and girls when fighting use nails and bite so i am not sure you want the end result of that stick blowing up... it might be the last time it does!

70 years later you have the MC with his grandkids that look suspiciously alot like Tybalt... "and that kids is the last time my dick blew up on a bitches face... right in front of the other 4... right before they bited it off and all i was left was a micropenis and your grand mommy Jill god rests her soul for dieing of an heroin overdose... damm you Q! you took everything away from me!"

and the kids going "dad grand dad is going senile again!"

 

[DavDR]

I think it's the way the epilogue of the first season is badly written, which creates a nonsensical situation.
it is that passage from ALL IN that makes everything difficult to understand

At this point the whole story is a nonsensical situation

 

[JessVM]

No incest or bestiality. Dont bother.

Not yet...

 

[sorco2003]

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[RCDL]

Look at this boy having a good time

 

[seniorboop]

Damn, thought beta would've started by today. At least I have a decent bit of work now.

Back to checking in on Fridays.

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Look at this boy having a good time

What do you call a 6-person sex act? A sixsome? Regardless, we need that.

In before Waka follows this up with more Madame spam

 

[Petro28]

Damn, thought beta would've started by today. At least I have a decent bit of work now.

Back to checking in on Fridays.



What do you call a 6-person sex act? A sixsome? Regardless, we need that.

In before Waka follows this up with more Madame spam

Everything that goes beyond four people is a an orgy. At least in my book.