VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Jimayo]

Okay so....instead of complaining about it, go play those games.

Or, I can do whatever the fuck I want. Including complaining about the writing. And you can suck it up princess.

And the sad thing is I actually like this game. The only reason I complain about it is because people overrate it to a ridiculous degree.

 

[Paco Loco]

can you get more music of ep 8 please

I already did, but the soundtrack has not nammed (track by track) yet.

 

[shazba]

Before I get started on this post, to those Jill fans who struggle with criticisms of her, let me extend an olive branch and state:

Spoiler: In this animation Jill is, arguably, the most perfect specimen of a human being!

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But let us rewind a bit, to that fateful encounter with Jill after she had shot Tybalt down in flames.

Spoiler: There she is, channelling her inner Doc from CoBD, dare I say a worked up Jill is a cute sight...

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Spoiler: And a pouting, tearful Jill, I'm pretty sure my rocks could get off to that...

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Spoiler: But then the mc had to go an cheer her up...

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Spoiler: And she started to smile...

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Spoiler: And it was time for the mc to run for his life!

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DPC, what the fuck? I mean What... The... Fuck...? Zoey comes in outta nowhere, and she pulls off the:

Spoiler: Best fucking animated smile and facial expression this game has seen so far!

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I mean she fucking nailed it. For all we know, she just crawled outta a homeless shelter, but her disarming smile and gorgeous expression has already won the hearts and minds of mcs all over the world.

But Jill... This is the 8th fucking season DPC, the 8th fucking season! Are we to accept that by design, the lovely Jill just looks like a possessed goblinoid whenever we can see her teeth? I mean she is consistently horrendous every time those pearly whites are on display.

Maybe it's time to accept that Jill is an ugly smiler. They exist. I mean she can't be perfect, right? A rich, gorgeous, virginal babe can't be all perfect. In her case the paper bag is only required when she's happy. The good news is, after applying the paper bag she'll probably go back to pouting Jill. I can live with that.

It is a bad thing. Soap operas are worse than reality t.v. Trash television at it's finest. May be good for a porn game(and it really is) but it's not the end all be all that people itt make it out to be. I could name a number of games on this site that are way better written.

I dunno, if you take away all the soap opera elements of the game, what's left? It's all the drama that keeps everyone talking. There is so much more discussion in this thread than any other game on this forum (it has double the comments compared to the next highest thread, and this thread has been purged a number of times).

So yeah, if you don't like the drama, I don't know what about this game lures you in, because I'd say the story (for better or worse) is the strongest draw card here.

 

[JamieSadistic]

Or, I can do whatever the fuck I want. Including complaining about the writing. And you can suck it up princess.

And the sad thing is I actually like this game. The only reason I complain about it is because people overrate it to a ridiculous degree.

Dude ever since you've composed your first message on this thread, you've been absolutely nothing but abrasive and negative. You call me princess but you're the one with the little pink panties on wedged high in your asscrack. Take your 3rd grade insults and suck em up that same ass. Get the fuck outta here with your negative shit and stop trying to pick fights with people on an internet forum.

 

[Deleted member 4298851]

Before I get started on this post, to those Jill fans who struggle with criticisms of her, let me extend an olive branch and state:

Spoiler: In this animation Jill is, arguably, the most perfect specimen of a human being!

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But let us rewind a bit, to that fateful encounter with Jill after she had shot Tybalt down in flames.

Spoiler: There she is, channelling her inner Doc from CoBD, dare I say a worked up Jill is a cute sight...

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Spoiler: And a pouting, tearful Jill, I'm pretty sure my rocks could get off to that...

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Spoiler: But then the mc had to go an cheer her up...

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Spoiler: And she started to smile...

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Spoiler: And it was time for the mc to run for his life!

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DPC, what the fuck? I mean What... The... Fuck...? Zoey comes in outta nowhere, and she pulls off the:

Spoiler: Best fucking animated smile and facial expression this game has seen so far!

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I mean she fucking nailed it. For all we know, she just crawled outta a homeless shelter, but her disarming smile and gorgeous expression has already won the hearts and minds of mcs all over the world.

But Jill... This is the 8th fucking season DPC, the 8th fucking season! Are we to accept that by design, the lovely Jill just looks like a possessed goblinoid whenever we can see her teeth? I mean she is consistently horrendous every time those pearly whites are on display.

Maybe it's time to accept that Jill is an ugly smiler. They exist. I mean she can't be perfect, right? A rich, gorgeous, virginal babe can't be all perfect. In her case the paper bag is only required when she's happy. The good news is, after applying the paper bag she'll probably go back to pouting Jill. I can live with that.


I dunno, if you take away all the soap opera elements of the game, what's left? It's all the drama that keeps everyone talking. There is so much more discussion in this thread than any other game on this forum (it has double the comments compared to the next highest thread, and this thread has been purged a number of times).

So yeah, if you don't like the drama, I don't know what about this game lures you in, because I'd say the story (for better or worse) is the strongest draw card here.

I will admit, as a Jill super-fan, and even though I have nearly 2800 screenshots of her (included in a collection of nearly 35,000 total) the only thing I don't like about her is her smile; when she pouts or puts her lips together, or looks worried, I love, but I will agree on that smile.

She looks cute and beautiful many times during the game and after she tells Tybalt off, but the vampire smile afterwards is hard to ignore.

 

[AchedCroissant]

in my top 3 best girl

 

[AchedCroissant]

Spoiler: And she started to smile...

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Spoiler: And it was time for the mc to run for his life!

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Jill reminds me of the female version of Alice Cooper

 

[Yaman492]

This is gonna throw the discussion real off track but I just recently found out that if you choose to stay as friends on JM route (always chose the throuple), they have some pretty character defining moments. I found out that Josy basically admits to you that she wanted the throuple but was too scared to say it as she didn’t want to lose you or Maya. I was just wondering what scene or episode that’s in.

 

[sixart]

Or, I can do whatever the fuck I want. Including complaining about the writing. And you can suck it up princess.

Sure... Complaining about the writing ?!? On a pirated games message board ?!?

Or you can make an ass outta yourself for absolutely no reason !

And the sad thing is I actually like this game. The only reason I complain about it is because people overrate it to a ridiculous degree.

Sooo... sad or not it doesn't matter... you like the game as you stated... if you like something you don't complain about anything ( minor differences don't warrant complaint ! ) and since you do you are not even sure whether or not you like this game ! Overrated to a ridiculous degree... that might be right might be wrong ! You could always ignore it... if you really wanted to that is Everybody is entitled to make decisions about their own shit so basically your reason for complaining is no reason at all !

 

[shazba]

This is gonna throw the discussion real off track but I just recently found out that if you choose to stay as friends on JM route (always chose the throuple), they have some pretty character defining moments. I found out that Josy basically admits to you that she wanted the throuple but was too scared to say it as she didn’t want to lose you or Maya. I was just wondering what scene or episode that’s in.

I just "jizzed in my pants" to the idea that Jill looks like Alice Cooper, so I think your throwing the discussion off track is more than welcome!

The scene you're talking about is in episode 5 after the prep party when Josy's dad has found her and delivered her suitcase and she takes it to her room. You can choose to follow Maya (because she's looking a little upset for some reason) or help Josy with her bags (because she's hotter than Maya so why wouldn't you help her).

When you go with Josy she starts talking about the whole discussion the three of them had and she starts to admit that while she's happy with Maya, she thinks she'd be happy with the MC too.

That whole discussion is the catalyst that has so many holding out for a Josy solo relationship. Let us hope it is not in vain!

 

[TimHawk]

This is gonna throw the discussion real off track but I just recently found out that if you choose to stay as friends on JM route (always chose the throuple), they have some pretty character defining moments. I found out that Josy basically admits to you that she wanted the throuple but was too scared to say it as she didn’t want to lose you or Maya. I was just wondering what scene or episode that’s in.

EP 5 after the Prep Mansion when you go with Josy after she meets her dad. Maya has the same reaction if you choose to follow her inside instead.

 

[PashafromRussia]

 

[Afapp]

Cheat Sheet

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[OFT]

I just "jizzed in my pants" to the idea that Jill looks like Alice Cooper

 

[PashafromRussia]

I just "jizzed in my pants" to the idea that Jill looks like Alice Cooper, so I think your throwing the discussion off track is more than welcome!

The scene you're talking about is in episode 5 after the prep party when Josy's dad has found her and delivered her suitcase and she takes it to her room. You can choose to follow Maya (because she's looking a little upset for some reason) or help Josy with her bags (because she's hotter than Maya so why wouldn't you help her).

When you go with Josy she starts talking about the whole discussion the three of them had and she starts to admit that while she's happy with Maya, she thinks she'd be happy with the MC too.

That whole discussion is the catalyst that has so many holding out for a Josy solo relationship. Let us hope it is not in vain!

I think this conversation is just for the drama. MС lets Josie go and starts dating other girls. Pink is just trolling us. I just don't understand in what cases Josie can leave Maya and start dating MС on the way Dik. Of course, at the end of episode 8, if you choose Others, he admits that he still loves her, but there is nothing else.

 

[J.A.L.]

So yeah, if you don't like the drama, I don't know what about this game lures you in, because I'd say the story (for better or worse) is the strongest draw card here.

I would say that the characters and the moments (the sexy one, the romance ones, or just the "slice of live" moments), and the sense of humor, are the strongest points of this game in terms of writing. Details like the conversations in Roster, that make you empathize with the characters.

The story... not so much. At a certain degree, I agree with the other user: too much soap opera material for me: highly unlikely coincidences, clichés, great surprises and revelations that in real life would be resolved with simple questions like, for example, "and... what do your parents do for living, Sage?" or "Dad, tell me about my deceased mom´s family"... It´s a bit too much for me. I´m not saying it is bad writing. DPC seems to have the story already structured in his head, and it´s great to see that some tiny detail in the first chapter, suddenly makes sense in the chapter 7 or 8. But is not great writing in terms of story.

But for me, the worst are the far fetched situations that could be realistic with a bit more of work in writing. For example, the way Sage ask the MC to spy on Chad. It´s absurd that Sage thinks that the MC is going to follow Chad all day in disguise or something, and Sage blackmailing the MC with the guitar is out of character when we know some chapters later that Sage is actually a good person.

Since DPC had decided that the MC was going to spy on Chad at the gym, let´s imagine that Sage, instead of telling the MC "Help me spy my boyfriend", tells him "Do you want a free pass for the gym? I´ll pay it for you. My boyfriend Chad spends half of his day at that gym, and I´m sure he brags with his pals there about the bitch he´s cheating on me with. I´ll call you when he´s there, so you go and are my eyes and ears there. Also, if you get me some prove, you will have a special reward. You know, you scratch my back..." It´s a way more realistic situation, IMO.

Then, when the MC finds out that Sage has his guitar, she could complain about how bad person is his boyfriend, that gives her as a gift a stolen guitar, apologize for him and return the MC the guitar. That way the MC would feel empathy for her and have a better reason for helping her than a clumsy attempt of blackmailing. So, Sage would not be portrayed like an awful person, since just a few days after (into the game) she´s going to reveal herself like an excellent person that helps the MC, and then Maya.

It´s just an example. Wouldn´t that be a more plausible and less cartoonesque situation? And it´s just a bit more work in the dialogues...

 

[BorgiaBou]

I will admit, as a Jill super-fan, and even though I have nearly 2800 screenshots of her (included in a collection of nearly 35,000 total)

Dude are you okay cuz from what you say here you seem a bit lala...

 

[sixart]

Dude are you okay cuz from what you say here you seem a bit lala...

Overboard ?

 

[tg]

OK, this is my first tier ranking. I think this is pretty much how I see them, both within the game, and just visually. That other teir list prompted me to make this one, since I wondered just how difficult it was to decided. Turned out, it's very basic to do an acceptable tier list...

 

[Deleted member 4298851]

Dude are you okay cuz from what you say here you seem a bit lala...

I like to keep screenshots of things in these games, I'm not the first, won't be the last. If that's "lala" to you, fine, but guess what else is fine..more than fine even, is me hitting the Ignore button on you.