VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[funkymonkeyjedi]

It would simply make the story too predictable.

But doing it how you're suggesting how DPC 'might be' telling it, doesn't have anything to do with being predictable. I think it would have more to do with being a horrible writer. DPC isn't the best writer out there, but he's not a horrible writer either. He's more of an semi-experienced enthusiastic writer. I strongly doubt even he would make such a literary 'faux pas'.

Now, I'll grant you this caveat though, it is clear that the MC still hasn't read the diary completely yet. So the answer may still lie within it's pages for Ep 10 or 11.

 

[dalli_x]

But doing it how you're suggesting how DPC 'might be' telling it, doesn't have anything to do with being predictable. I think it would have more to do with being a horrible writer. DPC isn't the best writer out there, but he's not a horrible writer either. He's more of an semi-experienced enthusiastic writer. I strongly doubt even he would make such a literary 'faux pas'.

Now, I'll grant you this caveat though, it is clear that the MC still hasn't read the diary completely yet. So the answer may still lie within it's pages for Ep 10 or 11.

If we, as players, had read the name Priscilla in Lynette's diary beforehand, it would of course be predictable. Maya's scholarship application was already approved and Stephen Burke calls this Priscilla to explain why he couldn't give Maya the scholarship. Stephen Burke needs to talk.

We would then know that Lynette and Priscilla knew each other. One could then assume that this Priscilla knows the complete story of Lynette, Neil and the MC. So that Maya's approved scholarship application is in some way related to Lynette, Neil or the MC. That would have been too big of a spoiler.

 

[Darkwen]

Exactly
I will work two or even more jobs if I have too
Because coming home to Maya at the end of a long hard day is all I need in this life

2 cents doesn't buy much

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Episode 10 gameplay -Joshy edition. Joshy's MC working hard 24/7 to pay Maya's debt.

 

[frostpaw]

I'm not that well versed in coding and python, but could DPC "mark" his releases to his patreon-subs with numbers or something and afterwards look into "pirated" versions to find who played hero for the people?

 

[Darkwen]

You're assuming that Priscilla is a pseudonym. In fact, we don't know. That's a difference. Priscilla can also be a middle name or a person unknown to us. Maybe we have seen it before, but it would still be unknown to us because we cannot assign the name.

We don't know whether it's a pimp, madam, lawyer, relative, etc.

The only thing we know is that Stephen Burke calls this Priscilla and he has to explain to her why he can't give Maya the scholarship. Please keep in mind that Maya's scholarship application was already approved. So it was just a formality so that Maya could get the degree. Stephen Burke had to decline. Ergo, this Priscilla is above Stephen Burke in the hierarchy, because otherwise he wouldn't have to explain it.

Priscilla could be a lawyer or she could be Quinn. But wait what if there is secret option 47 she both, Quinn is a undercover lawyer and pimp drug dealer then she would have a story instead of just being a ugly lame ass plot device

 

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My preps for Episode 10 in Decmeber be like...

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Maya's scholarship application was already approved

Hmm, a very important distinction that needs a mention.
Last I checked Maya had a student loan, not a scholarship.

One of those has to be repaid. The other, not so much if you pass your schooling.

 

[Ray_D]

how, how, how

Ding! Ding! Ding!

Put her Head in the Toilett and Flush ... Voila, Maya is able to win the Contest.

perfect nothing better than an old school bullying section.

 

[Ray_D]

Jokes on you. He loves that shit. He gets his cummy kisses that way.

you know that joshy92 loves those kisses with an extra cream.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

you know that joshy92 loves those kisses with an extra cream.
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Well, you both managed to save me from spending money on lunch today.
Who knows, maybe for dinner as well...

I suppose this works towards an unneeded diet.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

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yeah and?

That sheet only proves that her student loan was approved and that her first semester has been paid for. It's not because that's the first image you see from Burke fiddling in, that it's a scholarship application sheet. That's just a payment status sheet.

Dali, man! You know I love you, but now you're trying too hard m8.

 

[Dr.Slime]

i think the most logical thing to guess here is the payment for scholarship is asking (stephen ask his higher up in this case)
Royce or rusty family
Priscilla in my eyes connected to one of these family and i lean to royce because i think i saw before screen when the payment for Mona is pending or some other student but for Maya it was weird because it got the happy news fast like the payment was already there for her
so because maybe it was friend with josy who is friend with Jill or something else
maybe i'm wrong but i think we can figure this out in the game ( no need for the update to come so we knew i think)

 

[lipe2410]

Riona is a pretty kitty


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This making out session during halloween party was one of the hottest scenes of last episode.
She just ask him to come with her to movie room and without any warn or words, just a playfull smile, she just tackle him and go for what she want. Fucking awesome.
Few things tell a girl is really into someone than something like that.

 

[Dr.Slime]

the difference between maya and Mona

 

[Dark Silence]

yeah and?

That sheet only proves that her student loan was approved and that her first semester has been paid for. It's not because that's the first image you see from Burke fiddling in, that it's a scholarship application sheet. That's just a payment status sheet.

Dali, man! You know I love you, but now you're trying too hard m8.

Read it correctly. Scholarship is written above and not study credit.

This is the same scholarship application that Mona has, with the difference that Mona's scholarship was not approved.

Damn it! As much as I like Dali, I hate agreeing with him. This time he's correct. Wallace Resources has a scholarship available for Maya. All he had to do was click approved probably. Damn it, Dali! Don't make me agree with you again.

 

[Dr.Slime]

Damn it! As much as I like Dali, I hate agreeing with him. This time he's correct. Wallace Resources has a scholarship available for Maya. All he had to do was click approved probably. Damn it, Dali! Don't make me agree with you again.

yeah i'm now reloading the game to check i guess there is something we miss

 

[Dark Silence]

yeah i'm now reloading the game to check i guess there is something we miss

Your screen was the clincher. Mona's says Pending, Naya's says Available.:

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Read it correctly. Scholarship is written above and not study credit.

This is the same scholarship application that Mona has, with the difference that Mona's scholarship was not approved.

So that whole song and dance Maya gave the MC back in her dorm about how she was tricked by her father on her student loan was all made up? Because if Maya had an actual scholarship, then money wouldn't be a problem for her, nor would her father be a problem about it either. Because with a scholarship, the money comes from a "sponsor" and needs zero approval or management from her father or any other parent. All management of those scholarship funds will be managed by the sponsor(s) and the administrative department of the College. Parents will have nothing to do with it and Maya would have to find something else to 'dramaqueen' about.

That detail you're pointing out seems to be a detail DPC has overlooked, nothing more.

 

[Dr.Slime]

Your screen was the clincher. Mona's says Pending, Naya's says Available.:
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the pending for Mona even for her after many time she works for quinn etc.. and all that time still she has pending status but for maya it was there for her
check this



as soon she asks he said there is indeed money for her so

now that i redo this part i think priscilla is someone connected to the rummer because this is not the eyes you have when you talk to someone have power over you