VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[lipe2410]

Riona is a pretty kitty


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This making out session during halloween party was one of the hottest scenes of last episode.
She just ask him to come with her to movie room and without any warn or words, just a playfull smile, she just tackle him and go for what she want. Fucking awesome.
Few things tell a girl is really into someone than something like that.

 

[Dr.Slime]

the difference between maya and Mona

 

[Dark Silence]

yeah and?

That sheet only proves that her student loan was approved and that her first semester has been paid for. It's not because that's the first image you see from Burke fiddling in, that it's a scholarship application sheet. That's just a payment status sheet.

Dali, man! You know I love you, but now you're trying too hard m8.

Read it correctly. Scholarship is written above and not study credit.

This is the same scholarship application that Mona has, with the difference that Mona's scholarship was not approved.

Damn it! As much as I like Dali, I hate agreeing with him. This time he's correct. Wallace Resources has a scholarship available for Maya. All he had to do was click approved probably. Damn it, Dali! Don't make me agree with you again.

 

[Dr.Slime]

Damn it! As much as I like Dali, I hate agreeing with him. This time he's correct. Wallace Resources has a scholarship available for Maya. All he had to do was click approved probably. Damn it, Dali! Don't make me agree with you again.

yeah i'm now reloading the game to check i guess there is something we miss

 

[Dark Silence]

yeah i'm now reloading the game to check i guess there is something we miss

Your screen was the clincher. Mona's says Pending, Naya's says Available.:

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Read it correctly. Scholarship is written above and not study credit.

This is the same scholarship application that Mona has, with the difference that Mona's scholarship was not approved.

So that whole song and dance Maya gave the MC back in her dorm about how she was tricked by her father on her student loan was all made up? Because if Maya had an actual scholarship, then money wouldn't be a problem for her, nor would her father be a problem about it either. Because with a scholarship, the money comes from a "sponsor" and needs zero approval or management from her father or any other parent. All management of those scholarship funds will be managed by the sponsor(s) and the administrative department of the College. Parents will have nothing to do with it and Maya would have to find something else to 'dramaqueen' about.

That detail you're pointing out seems to be a detail DPC has overlooked, nothing more.

 

[Dr.Slime]

Your screen was the clincher. Mona's says Pending, Naya's says Available.:
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the pending for Mona even for her after many time she works for quinn etc.. and all that time still she has pending status but for maya it was there for her
check this



as soon she asks he said there is indeed money for her so

now that i redo this part i think priscilla is someone connected to the rummer because this is not the eyes you have when you talk to someone have power over you

 

[Dark Silence]

So that whole song and dance Maya gave the MC back in her dorm about how she was tricked by her father on her student loan was all made up? Because if Maya had an actual scholarship, then money wouldn't be a problem for her, nor would her father be a problem about it either. Because with a scholarship, the money comes from a "sponsor" and needs zero approval or management from her father or any other parent. All management of those scholarship funds will be managed by the sponsor(s) and the administrative department of the College. Parents will have nothing to do with it and Maya would have to find something else to 'dramaqueen' about.

That detail you're pointing out seems to be a detail DPC has overlooked, nothing more.

Her scholarship just says available. All it was waiting for was to be approved. Burke is the deciding factor in it.

 

[Dark Silence]

the pending for Mona even for her after many time she works for quinn etc.. and all that time still she has pending status

The pending was due to the fact that Mona told Burke to fuck off and he marked it as pending. So, unless Mona fucks Burke her scholarship is dead.

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Her scholarship just says available. All it was waiting for was to be approved. Burke is the deciding factor in it.

Up 'til this point, it just sounded like Dali was trying to tell me that Maya had a scholarship from the start. Which is what I was trying to clarify. But if this has something to do with Mona leaving and Burke about to set Maya up to take Mona's spot, that I can see happening.

 

[Dr.Slime]

No, it won't be the Royce. Why? Jill wants to get the Royce lawyer for Maya.

Hence my theory, so that Maya intentionally mentioned the HOTs and also the HOTs rumor in order not to get this scholarship. Derek says to the MC that he made it worse than it ever could have been made. My CHICK MC, only did one thing and yet Derek says that.

One is so that Maya fell in love with the MC and that's reason why Maya didn't want this scholarship. If the MC found out about this, he wouldn't trust Maya anymore.

There are several possibilities for the worst.
- If the HOTs rumor is true, then it could be so that the MC doesn't trust Maya anymore.
- If the scholarship is related to the MC's family, the MC will no longer trust Maya.
- If the Royce lawyer looks at Maya's loan agreement and discovers irregularities, there will be a dispute in the Bailey family.
- There could be an increased investigation into the HOT rumor and the HOTs will be torn apart or several HOTs will have to leave the college.

I don't think Maya know anything really (like us) because the way she said it it was desperate to get it right after burke said we can't you can see the eyes of saddnes in her but
the thing it was there for here from the get go like just a bush of button so someone behind the scene want to help maya

 

[Dr.Slime]

The pending was due to the fact that Mona told Burke to fuck off and he marked it as pending. So, unless Mona fucks Burke her scholarship is dead.

yeah thats the point he was willing to pay for Mona if she fucks him but Maya has the money already so no need for fucks or scared to fuck her ( maybe?)

 

[Dark Silence]

Up 'til this point, it just sounded like Dali was trying to tell me that Maya had a scholarship from the start. Which is what I was trying to clarify. But if this has something to do with Mona leaving and Burke about to set Maya up to take Mona's spot, that I can see happening.

The scholarship was available at some point. Not sure when, maybe not at the time they got the loan. That part is unclear to me.

yeah thats the point he was willing to pay for Mona if she fucks him but Maya has the money already so no need for fucks or scared to fuck her ( maybe?)

Maya doesn't physically have the scholarship. It's just available to her. Which she has/had no clue about.

 

[doovel]

I;ve just realised where i've seen maya's hair before.... Sindel from Mortal Kombat.........

Her hair looks nothing like Maya's?

Spoiler: Sindel

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[ProxyGist]

So that whole song and dance Maya gave the MC back in her dorm about how she was tricked by her father on her student loan was all made up? Because if Maya had an actual scholarship, then money wouldn't be a problem for her, nor would her father be a problem about it either. Because with a scholarship, the money comes from a "sponsor" and needs zero approval or management from her father or any other parent. All management of those scholarship funds will be managed by the sponsor(s) and the administrative department of the College. Parents will have nothing to do with it and Maya would have to find something else to 'dramaqueen' about.

That detail you're pointing out seems to be a detail DPC has overlooked, nothing more.

Guys in this thread already said that Maya's legal line is too weak and any law school graduate will be able to challenge Maya's student loans or make sure Patrick never came within a hundred yards of her.
I don't know how DPС is gonna get out of this.
It reminds me of the Sage situation. According to her, her last name is Morgan and there's nothing to connect her to the Burke family, but for some reason DPС put it off until ep9 when there was no mystery to her last name. Sage could have introduced herself as Sage Morgan already in ep1 and it wouldn't have hurt the story.
Most likely DPС realized too late that this whole line was too weak and pulled it off in the last episode.
I'm guessing it will be the same in ep10. Jill's lawyer will turn out to know Burke or Patrick and therefore won't help Maya.

 

[Dr.Slime]

The scholarship was available at some point. Not sure when, maybe not at the time they got the loan. That part is unclear to me.



Maya doesn't physically have the scholarship. It's just available to her. Which she has/had no clue about.

i think her father has thing to with this maybe it was his way to forbid her from getting the scholarship and gets with josy so he control her
he maybe knew about the scholarship and let her sign the co contract to control her thats the only option i see

then the girl who burke spoke to is someone related to the rumor of HOT's getting free tuition maybe she was the first one to get it or leaked it somehow

 

[7thOmen]

I feel like I'm the only Maya fan in existence. lol

Nah, you're not.

Omen

 

[Dark Silence]

i think her father has thing to with this maybe it was his way to forbid her from getting the scholarship and gets with josy so he control her
he maybe knew about the scholarship and let her sign the co contract to control her thats the only option i see

then the girl who burke spoke to is someone related to the rumor of HOT's getting free tuition maybe she was the first one to get it or leaked it somehow

Could be a representative of Wallace Resources. No idea. Maybe dalli_x has an actual theory on that.

 

[doovel]

I would like it if there was an ending where the mc gets both Maya & Josy pregnant

And then they break up with the MC and live happily ever after

 

[Dr.Slime]

DPC is said to have overlooked a detail? He re-rendered an image because the reflection in a beer bottle wasn't right. He wrote that himself when he described what his quality control looks like.

What could really have happened?

- In EP8 we find out twice if the MC is DIK so it's half price.
- Maya finds out about Becky in EP8 so the HOTs rumor could be fact. Only Sage won't know. But Maya tells the MC at the dorm party to ask again about this. Sage isn't there and Melanie hasn't spoken to her either. But she talks to Sarah. Sarah said so the MC was half price. What is the full price?
- There was a VIP pass for the winner of the DIK Hell Week. Sponsored by Rusty's father and not by Rusty. The money comes from the father. But did the HOT girl get what won the scavenger hunt. Somehow Girl still won the scavenger hunt.
- The MC is the schnitzel of the HOTs hunt. The girl who can first prove that the MC fucked her gets a scholarship, sponsored by Priscilla.
- Maya found out about this and now the problem. She loves the MC and the sex with him in the classroom was filmed.
- Half price is the scholarship and full price is getting your student loan in order and the MC. That's why Maya mentions to Stephen Burke that she heard HOT's rumor and wants to become a HOT. Maya wants to be rejected because if the MC finds out that he was the schnitzel of the HOTs and Maya got this scholarship, then it's over between Maya and the MC. Maya has to take the hard route via the Royce lawyer. She has no other choice. That's why Derek says, so the MC made it worse. Maya puts the Baileys' family "happiness" at risk.

but why the first one to get fucked by MC gets the reward? i mean why him tho and why the focus on him
i get your point but i don't think it does add up