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These three things stood out to me the most.
1. Nothing is difficult when I make stories.
Most writers see things as individual elements of a story they work on with specific hardships and effort to use. Many can tell you where they struggled, where they had blocks, and why certain things didn't feel right. They can also tell you when things worked out well, and how much of a "flow" they got into for making a scene, writing or otherwise.
This tells me he's hiding or giving a nonsense answer, or he's actually not trying. Playing it safe, even. I get that you need to cut the fat, that's part of editing. But making scenes? This should have a series of answers of good/bad, easy/hard, fun/painful to go through. Either he didn't do it, or he's hiding something.
2. Only Main Girls are relevant to the main plot.
Tell me how Maya or Josy are relevant to the Main plot. Or Bella. Or Jill.
Sage at least is related to the Burke's and HOTs, that I can see being relevant. But how the heck are those other 4 related as MGs? What pivotal scene did Josy do? Or Maya? Bella? Jill?
Wait, what pivotal scene was Sage in? Again, a few had their stories in certain episodes...but how are they Main Girls?
And then there's Zoey. Who isn't a main girl? But can come in and ruin all the relationships? So she's not a Main Girl? What is she then, just a technical experiment made into a character?
What is the main story/Main Girl role exactly?
3. DPC doesn't do lazy writing.
Josy's main dialogue wah moment from Episode 11 with Maya:
There are plenty other dangling threads (Mona, restaurant/prostitution ring/Cathy relapse, etc.) but to say he isn't lazy is either a lie, he's ignorant, or has no idea how to write a beginning-to-ending plot. All of these threads could have been addressed throughout the series, at least lampshaded, alluded do, maybe even addressed and developed. But you just don't introduce elements and then forget about them for years and then proclaim "I don't do lazy writing".
1. Nothing is difficult when I make stories.
Most writers see things as individual elements of a story they work on with specific hardships and effort to use. Many can tell you where they struggled, where they had blocks, and why certain things didn't feel right. They can also tell you when things worked out well, and how much of a "flow" they got into for making a scene, writing or otherwise.
This tells me he's hiding or giving a nonsense answer, or he's actually not trying. Playing it safe, even. I get that you need to cut the fat, that's part of editing. But making scenes? This should have a series of answers of good/bad, easy/hard, fun/painful to go through. Either he didn't do it, or he's hiding something.
2. Only Main Girls are relevant to the main plot.
Tell me how Maya or Josy are relevant to the Main plot. Or Bella. Or Jill.
- Maya had her time, but then what? (She might blow open the prostitute ring?)
- Jill had her arc, but then what? (Unless it's later connected to drugs/Quinn?)
- Bella? She just resolves whatever crap the MC was in that episode.
- But...Josy? The hell? She's worthless. Take her out and the main plot/conflict goes by just fine.
Sage at least is related to the Burke's and HOTs, that I can see being relevant. But how the heck are those other 4 related as MGs? What pivotal scene did Josy do? Or Maya? Bella? Jill?
Wait, what pivotal scene was Sage in? Again, a few had their stories in certain episodes...but how are they Main Girls?
And then there's Zoey. Who isn't a main girl? But can come in and ruin all the relationships? So she's not a Main Girl? What is she then, just a technical experiment made into a character?
What is the main story/Main Girl role exactly?
3. DPC doesn't do lazy writing.
Josy's main dialogue wah moment from Episode 11 with Maya:
The only indication she felt this way was asking Heather about being lost in a previous scene, in Episode 11. It comes out of nowhere. Previously likes economics and is taking more courses in it. She's the most thoughtful, honest, and confident girl of the MG's. She's gaga for MC, even when not on her path. This is lazy writing. DPC may think it's not, but he seriously needs an editor (OR 5) to give him a second opinion.
There are plenty other dangling threads (Mona, restaurant/prostitution ring/Cathy relapse, etc.) but to say he isn't lazy is either a lie, he's ignorant, or has no idea how to write a beginning-to-ending plot. All of these threads could have been addressed throughout the series, at least lampshaded, alluded do, maybe even addressed and developed. But you just don't introduce elements and then forget about them for years and then proclaim "I don't do lazy writing".
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Darkwen
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Josy is the reason the loan gets solve and the whole first season is about her. There is no main plot without Josy just Maya being sad
katzenstreu
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josy is my fav main girl too, but you have to face it that she is pretty much useless besides being cute.
Darkwen
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Josy is the only mg to move the story forward the mayavanger is because of my sweet Goddessjosy is my fav main girl too, but you have to face it that she is pretty much useless besides being cute.
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I hate that he didnt awnser any questions about the Magnar video.... I also hate that we arent getting 24 episoded total
Darkwen
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if we got 24 eps everyone including DPC would be dead before it ever got there
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felianMDR
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yes, I agree she important. thx to her I go to gym, find out Chad secret and help best girl Sage to resolve her problems and be happy with me
Lagunavii
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Shockingly his low estimate is also lower than the one he previously gave and is now at 13...
d2dacameron
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The main plot will probably mostly be wrapped up in 12. 13/14 is probably a sweet-spot to not outstay its welcome tbh
felianMDR
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well we should be thankful. maybe in that age this will be only thing to make our pole go north
I wonder if he is tired of the story, or maybe if it has just gotten away from him and he doesn't see a good route to ending it.
Seems a bit odd to have the MC just entering college, a fertile ground for storytelling, and then end the game in under a calendar year.
Darkwen
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Your best girl admitted my best girl is the mastermind, Sage is smart she knows who da bestyes, I agree she important. thx to her I go to gym, find out Chad secret and help best girl Sage to resolve her problems and be happy with me
katzenstreu
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i hope DPC is doing a sequel after being a dik and we get to play as Neil when he starts to work as a construction worker.
Lagunavii
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I said something similar around the 9th March after I was done with 11. Most didn't like that. Also given he's said again "he thinks season 4 won't be typical" tells me he knows the story is ending at 12 and he's just not saying for spoiler reasons.
Darkwen
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DPC said: "I won't answer questions that would require me to spoil story elements."