I took the last scene has Quinn called the police but didn't give her name she not working with them but watching what happens once it over and knows what the score is she leaves the hot and drops out of college to keep an eye on things because either Vinny or Buddy will be out for blood.
ok i see your POV. personally i think that would undermine the whole ermine sub story. ermine turned rat has some weight to it and "rat" is term for someone who works with police (at least where i am from. its a slang for a snitch, an informant)
yes it is POSSIBLE that she just made annonimous tip but thats a weak angle cause its not like police doesnt know about drug trafficking in the area. its just that its done so hush hush they have no evidence and annonimous call wont make any difference. If Quinn really want to take buddy and vinny down and destroy their organization she will have to work with police and give them full cooperation.
She is most probably taking her stuff cause she is moving to "witness protection"
Alright
devil's advocate, lay your explanations on me. Give me your reasons for why you swapped Spock's girl for Jill's deceased sister.


ok so...
Redesign - Maya - self-explanatory, just fix her skin, make her look better
Rewrite - Josy - just remove the throuple angle and focus on the fact she is tommy's sister for "complications and drama" and have her just be a good friend to Maya. Honestly very little would change outside the throuple drama. instead of the whole nonsensical cringe attention seeking while everyone is helping Maya, having insecurities and seeing how much people care for maya and are willing to help her would encourage josy to speak up about her own problem that she kept silent about the whole time. I think josy would be much better character if she was not forced to be third wheel.
Remove - Kathy... oh wait he already did. Jokes aside remove Oscar - I think this is also self-explanatory, guy have little to no relevance to the story and literally anyone can replace him in the scene where MC kicks him out during halloween party. And with oscar out of the picture Tara is fair game so win-win

Replace - Bella for Lana. Ok so bella's plot is "hot librarian", "jill's friend", "katty's replacement as teacher"
Lana's plot is "jill's sister" "dead via overdose and main source of jill's distaste for drugs"
so hear me out. Make lana the librarian who later replace katty as a teacher and have bella appear in few flashbacks as the best friend who died from overdose.
Why? Well, with Lana the librarian being the Main girl, her connection to Jill is not as random as bella's. ( i am not saying bella being friends with jill is random, i am just saying lana being her sister just feels better for the plot )
If you go for both librarian and jill the scene where jill catch you feels more dramatic and impactful and jills jealousy and agenda make more sense ( again, i am not saying the way it is make no sense, i am just saying given the power you gave me, putting lana here feels better ).
When M&J kick MC out of the dorm, having Lana let him sleep in her house would not take away anything narratively (like, there is nothing bella did or could do during this period that would feel weird or wrong for lana), BUT this would also open new options. As Lana is Jills sister you could use this time to learn about jill stuff that you could not learn anywhere else, stuff that would make sense a sister would know that would make less sense for bella to know
And i know what first thing people would point out. "oh but without bella we would not get the locked room thing", well yeah and if this question was asked after next episode then that would change things, but as of now we dont know what is in the room and how important for the plot its going to be. So right now i could say that Lana can easily have locked room with shady stuff in it. Maybe that locked room is where Lana goes to vent her frustrations as she is secretly jealous of Jill "the perfect daughter". or maybe its just all the body parts she cut of the jills exes or pursuers (disregard the whole room banter, this whole room bit is a joke)
On the other hand, bella the best friend being the one who died instead of Lana definitely lessens the impact of death as it is not a family member who died, but it is still impactful and it could also shape the story for what it is.
Currently, Bella just happens to work in this school and just happens to become jills best friend because of how much time jill spends in the library. Replace bella with lana, and now reason why Lana is librarian is because she was looking for a job that she can do while being close to her sister.
TLDR i can find lot of good and positive angles that would make story better (IMO!!!!!) and more interesting for both CHICK and DIK MC, and for both LOYAL and/or CHEATING playthroughs.
And there is also another factor which is, not many characters in the game that are removed or not involved enough to justify replacement that i care for. Mona was fine and i liked her but once she was removed i did not miss her at all. Same with Katty, honestly i would not take any of the current girls out to bring katty back no matter how much i liked her.
and since i wanted to give you serious answers i was looking through all the characters that are not actively ingame and it was either bringing lana from the dead or replacing josy with zoey but i think josy is fine outside the throuple drama so just rewriting her a bit is better.
Honestly, give it some thought, Lana being librarian and potential main girl would not only be better for drama but could also make jill's playthrough better too.
go on and feel free to roast me now
