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It might be so that my expectations have already risen too high, because the game is approaching the legendary status, but imho somehow interlude felt too long, and, I hate to say this out, kind of uninteresting.

In the end Zoey changes her mind pretty suddenly so maybe a hint now and then that her mind is about to change would make the story smoothier. Maybe a little bit of compressing too for the interlude story.

Anyways, keep up the good work.
Yup felt it could've easily been condensed down into a short prologue for episode 9... Was totally uninterested in the drama with the tattoo chick and her "friends"... 15 minutes focusing on Zoey's grandmothers death, her moving away, her struggling over there then coming back would've been enough instead of an hour long thing. The most interesting part for me was seeing them three girls in the episode 9 teaser :LUL:
 
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hakuna-matata

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Jill's angry face is certainly scary, but I don't think she will risk telling everyone that a student fucked a teacher.
It wouldn't shock me if she did. She is a "Dudley Do Right" and she is extremly angry the guy she fell in love with and best friend both played her. She has that "I am going to stab you over 50 times to death, chop your dick, watch you bleed to death and eat your organs angry face going on.
 
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LOL, such a mouth lol. Never said I hated it. Not even once. Grow up? Small fry, I have probably forgotten more in my life time than you will know in yours. Hey, you knock yourself out there small fry. I like your gusto! lol!!
Oh? Am I mistaken in saying that I didn't quote any of your posts and yet you wrote this juvenile response putting words in my mouth that I never said? You never said you hated it and I never said you said that you hated it, so it seems we are at an impasse. Why did you think I was talking to you? Who are you anyway? I don't know your ass from a can of paint. Where did you come from? Why don't you go back there?
 
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