VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[360 Danny DeVitos Later]

So, I don't see how DPС would plan lewd content at all amidst the large amount of dark foreshadowing of the ending.
1) Sage finds out her parents are getting divorced. Turns out her father never loves her and she wasn't a wanted child at all.
2) Josy wants to break up with Maya as early as ep11.
3) Riona's kidnapping
4) Maya's student loan uncertainty.
5) DIKs find out who's been cutting up the posters.
6) Probably starts a witch hunt in the fraternity to try to find the traitor.
7) Quinn and Winnie confront each other.
8) Bella continues to track down who cheated on the exam.
9) Is Lily an enemy or a friend?
10)Probably a new crisis between Josy and Maya.

We all hate to wait, but probably because there are so many dark foreshadowings every preview of ep11 will give some food for thought. And the wait for ep11 will go much faster than last cycle when ep9 basically ended with nothing.

I think the main girls at a minimum will all get a scene and probably Madame because we live in the worst fucking timeline. I don't think it's particularly hard to find reasons for it to happen Sage looking for comfort, JaM wanting to fuck Fuckface straight through the bed in happiness for getting the docs etc. Riona and Quinn are really the only ones that would be a no go depending on just what happens.

It's just about structure and timing the big dark shit and less serious moments so the tone doesn't shift too quickly.

As long as he doesn't say anything negative about his beloved Quinn I think he will be fine

Considering Quinn may die next episode and Rio will perhaps do the haka upon her coffin as revenge for been nabbed maybe brutally slandering his waifu is the compassionate thing to do for KARAMBA? To prepare him for the trauma. It's the compassionate thing to do .

 

[Sun of Rome]

Are you saying there shouldn't be lewd content this episode? Most of the time DPC knows what he doing take the start of episode 7 Patrick has shown up plus Josy and Maya aren't getting along to good a lot tension but then we get to sleep with Josy and the scene is handle so beautifully. Other than madame scenes or Bella getting anal before Josy DPC usually gets it right

The end of ep6 just didn't have a lot of cliffhangers like it does now.
I'm not saying there shouldn't be lewd scenes. There will be and there will be a lot of them, but I don't see how he can justify them after the depressing ep10.

 

[Darkwen]

The end of ep6 just didn't have a lot of cliffhangers like it does now.
I'm not saying there shouldn't be lewd scenes. There will be and there will be a lot of them, but I don't see how he can justify them after the depressing ep10.

The ending was heavy and makes me think that was just the start but I'm sure the whole episode won't be 100 percent everyone sad and worry about Rio, or the loan stuff and what ever else happens. Most episodes have a good a mix between the light hearted and more mature things sure it could be harder this time around but will be fun to see how it plays out

 

[Deleted member 2673354]

Other than madame scenes or Bella getting anal before Josy DPC usually gets it right

There should be a CHIK route for Madame Rose...

One where her family puts her in the retirement home that MC is volunteering at. Sparks fly.

Okay, she's not that old. Though seriously, I wonder how old she's supposed to be? She looks like she's in her 50s.

She could be in the same age bracket as MC's grandparents on his mother's side. She looks much older than Neil.

 

[felicemastronzo]

The end of ep6 just didn't have a lot of cliffhangers like it does now.
I'm not saying there shouldn't be lewd scenes. There will be and there will be a lot of them, but I don't see how he can justify them after the depressing ep10.

Yes, but then what happened in chapter 7? little and nothing in comparison to the twist.

And it was pretty much always like that.

The end of ep6 just didn't have a lot of cliffhangers like it does now.
I'm not saying there shouldn't be lewd scenes. There will be and there will be a lot of them, but I don't see how he can justify them after the depressing ep10.

Patrick secretly arriving at the BR is a huge twist. could have taken Maya away or worse.

and we also begin to uncover Burke's role in the BR's illegal dealings.

and to that add to that Mona leaving (track completely abandoned)

to me it doesn't seem at all like a weaker ending than the last chapter

 

[ChipLecsap]

So, I don't see how DPС would plan lewd content at all amidst the large amount of dark foreshadowing of the ending.
1) Sage finds out her parents are getting divorced. Turns out her father never loves her and she wasn't a wanted child at all.
2) Josy wants to break up with Maya as early as ep11.
3) Riona's kidnapping
4) Maya's student loan uncertainty.
5) DIKs find out who's been cutting up the posters.
6) Probably starts a witch hunt in the fraternity to try to find the traitor.
7) Quinn and Winnie confront each other.
8) Bella continues to track down who cheated on the exam.
9) Is Lily an enemy or a friend?
10)Probably a new crisis between Josy and Maya.

We all hate to wait, but probably because there are so many dark foreshadowings every preview of ep11 will give some food for thought. And the wait for ep11 will go much faster than last cycle when ep9 basically ended with nothing.

 

[KАRАMBA]

Considering Quinn may die next episode and Rio will perhaps do the haka upon her coffin as revenge for been nabbed maybe brutally slandering his waifu is the compassionate thing to do for KARAMBA? To prepare him for the trauma. It's the compassionate thing to do .

Nice...
It's nice that you take care of me.
I'm really touched.

But I know that Quinn will be fine.
And I am calm, happy and glad.

I am more confident in her well-being than in ours.
Because as you rightly pointed out, we live in the worst fucking timeline.
I guess nothing bad will happen to Riona either.
Fuckface will lose money...
It's OK.

 

[Darkwen]

Yes, but then what happened in chapter 7? little and nothing in comparison to the twist.

And it was pretty much always like that.

For the most part that is true but nothing compares to what just happen, episode 11 isn't going to start with rio walking into her room or waking up from a dream something is actually has to happen solve that or if nothing happens that would could actually mean Rio is dead.

 

[felicemastronzo]

For the most part that is true but nothing compares to what just happen, episode 11 isn't going to start with rio walking into her room or waking up from a dream something is actually has to happen solve that or if nothing happens that would mean Rio is dead.

the only one who knows that Riona has been kidnapped is Quinn, who has no reason to spread the news. in theory if MC is in her path she could share the news with him, but still this storyline will remain frozen for most of the episode, if not all of it, if anything becoming the finale of the new episode

 

[Sun of Rome]

Patrick secretly arriving at the BR is a huge twist. could have taken Maya away or worse.

and we also begin to uncover Burke's role in the BR's illegal dealings.

and to that add to that Mona leaving (track completely abandoned)

to me it doesn't seem at all like a weaker ending than the last chapter

There hasn't been such a dramatic rise in rates there. It literally happened all at once.
Even if we accept that the Rio problem is minor and Riona is just let go, there are other events that could just as easily lead to bad consequences.
My main point was that a lot of bad things happened in a short period of time. Things are getting too unpredictable.
DPC could have just focused on Riona's kidnapping and call it a day, but that's just the tip of the iceberg.

 

[Sun of Rome]

the only one who knows that Riona has been kidnapped is Quinn, who has no reason to spread the news. in theory if MC is in her path she could share the news with him, but still this storyline will remain frozen for most of the episode, if not all of it, if anything becoming the finale of the new episode

Even if we assume MC is at Neil's house all weekend and doesn't just know what's going on on campus, as early as the first school day, Sage is already stirring up a hornet's nest all over campus to find Riona.

 

[Joshy92]

I don't like this whole Riona storyline.
Especially because it means we won't get any romantic scenes with her for a long time.

 

[Sun of Rome]

Or a message is received from Rio's phone to the HOTs and Fuckface telling them she's quit B&R, Cam is worried (as she was about Mona) especially as all her stuff is still in their room, but everyone else takes it at face value. Cliffhanger at the end of the episode is someone (probably Cam or Fuckface) discovering some sort of proof that something else has happened, for example finding her shoe and some blood where she was grabbed. That leads to my expected end of season cliffhanger of a confrontation with Vinnie resulting in a shot being fired and the screen going black.

It's really symbolic that both of Camilla's roommates are missing. First Mona and now Riona.

 

[felicemastronzo]

There hasn't been such a dramatic rise in rates there. It literally happened all at once.
Even if we accept that the Rio problem is minor and Riona is just let go, there are other events that could just as easily lead to bad consequences.
My main point was that a lot of bad things happened in a short period of time. Things are getting too unpredictable.
DPC could have just focused on Riona's kidnapping and call it a day, but that's just the tip of the iceberg.

if you consider the whole episode there is Quinn being robbed (the real beginning of the confrontation with Vinnie) and Tybalt's blackmail (which, however ridiculous, threatened to end the story between MC and Jill, so not insignificant)

I don't see a big difference there.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Even if we assume MC is at Neil's house all weekend and doesn't just know what's going on on campus, as early as the first school day, Sage is already stirring up a hornet's nest all over campus to find Riona.

would it be so strange that Riona went home for a couple of days taking advantage of thanksgiving? it is a time when all students go home

 

[Darkwen]

the only one who knows that Riona has been kidnapped is Quinn, who has no reason to spread the news. in theory if MC is in her path she could share the news with him, but still this storyline will remain frozen for most of the episode, if not all of it, if anything becoming the finale of the new episode

Quinn can't keep that a secret from the HoT's very long and besides when someone is kidnap there a ransom how do we know Vinny would contact Quinn and since Rio was still on the phone with Quinn when it happen she might had heard the name drop to me it make makes sense that Vinny would call Sage or one of the other HoT's. There nothing the mc can do but I don't see people being like where did Ro go oh well the whole time until the truth comes out but I could be wrong. MC did say Thanksgiving weekend was the worse ever part of that has to be about Rio this episode doesn't have to get her back but I would think it has to deal with her kidnapping in some way

 

[felicemastronzo]

Quinn can't keep that a secret from the HoT's very long and besides when someone is kidnap there a ransom how do we know Vinny would contact Quinn and since Rio was still on the phone with Quinn when it happen she might had heard the name drop to me it make makes sense that Vinny would call Sage or one of the other HoT's. There nothing the mc can do but I don't see people being like where did Ro go oh well the whole time until the truth comes out but I could be wrong. MC did say Thanksgiving weekend was the worse ever part of that has to be about Rio this episode doesn't have to get her back but I would think it has to deal with her kidnapping in some way

Sooner or later Riona's kidnapping will come to light, but to get beyond the next chapter, it may be enough for Quinn to hide it for a couple of days.

And what should Vinnie say to Sage? "Hi I'm a drug dealer who kidnapped a student friend of yours, but the important news I want to give you is about Quinn?" did he need to kidnap Riona?

 

[c.mork]

Or a message is received from Rio's phone to the HOTs and Fuckface telling them she's quit B&R.

And left all her stuff behind? Please, nobody would buy that.

 

[Darkwen]

if you consider the whole episode there is Quinn being robbed (the real beginning of the confrontation with Vinnie) and Tybalt's blackmail (which, however ridiculous, threatened to end the story between MC and Jill, so not insignificant)

I don't see a big difference there.

Did Quinn being robbed really have anything to do with Vinny or was she just robbed? The only thing that Tybalt blackmail try is that he failed. But with Rio something did happen she got kidnap I would call that a massive difference

 

[JohnnyCrunch]

Riona has been screwed around by Quinn more than once, so there's been growing tension in that relationship for quite some time. She's slowly started to confide in the MC, and from the talk at the Halloween party & the "date" in this latest episode, we see that Rio is starting to reconsider her life choices. So, this kidnapping appears to just be an event meant to be the wakeup call that will convince her to separate from Quinn's illegal activities for good.