Lagunavii

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No, I don't think so, I thought the same thing would happen during the scene when tommy discovered the mc with josy and nothing happened apart from a blow to the balls with a book.:HideThePain:
That's actually a fair point and given I barely play the Thruple path, not something I considered.

But thinking about the path I do play, Bella's, Nick leaving obviously opens up the "will he spill there secret" which doesn't apply to any rest of the paths. So really, what benefit to the story does conflict with Nick bring?
 

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That's actually a fair point and given I barely play the Thruple path, not something I considered.

But thinking about the path I do play, Bella's, Nick leaving obviously opens up the "will he spill there secret" which doesn't apply to any rest of the paths. So really, what benefit to the story does conflict with Nick bring?
Drama, lots of drama, remember DPC is a drama queen at heart. :KEK:
 

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Yeah, lots of "potential" Drama on one path, where as the rest get shite.

Send Nick to the Fire with the Walrus. Im saving neither.
I'm not too excited, I'll have to wait for the chapter to come out and see what happens.:HideThePain:
 

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Drama, lots of drama, remember DPC is a drama queen at heart. :KEK:
He just follow the basic writing lessons. I remember once listening a podcast, where writers or peoples who work at hollywood said, that the first thing they teach them, is if you have 2 character in a scene, creat conflict and Drama, Drama Drama

There is a scenario in Chuck tv show, Chuck bitching that Sarah not said I love you yet, and when she finally said it, that time Chuck learned that the Intersect in his brain might kill him, he planing to be Honest wiht Sarah, but becasue she said I love you, in that moment he deciced to be quite, and kept it from her, for future Drama.

And that is basically the basic for all Drama, characters simply not honest with each others ,
or don't tell basic information like Sage's last name so we can have awesome cliffhangers like the " Fuck , Fuck Fuck " scene :whistle::ROFLMAO:
 

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And that is basically the basic for all Drama, characters simply not honest with each others ,
or don't tell basic information like Sage's last name so we can have awesome cliffhangers like the " Fuck , Fuck Fuck " scene :whistle::ROFLMAO:
I struggle with Sages last name....

On the one hand I don't generally go around introducing myself using my full name, nor do I ever have an interest in other people's.

But on the other, it's fucking college and she's the Deans daughter. How the fuck that doesn't get out is beyond me. Surnames are known in education purposes
 

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He just follow the basic writing lessons. I remember once listening a podcast, where writers or peoples who work at hollywood said, that the first thing they teach them, is if you have 2 character in a scene, creat conflict and Drama, Drama Drama

There is a scenario in Chuck tv show, Chuck bitching that Sarah not said I love you yet, and when she finally said it, that time Chuck learned that the Intersect in his brain might kill him, he planing to be Honest wiht Sarah, but becasue she said I love you, in that moment he deciced to be quite, and kept it from her, for future Drama.

And that is basically the basic for all Drama, characters simply not honest with each others ,
or don't tell basic information like Sage's last name so we can have awesome cliffhangers like the " Fuck , Fuck Fuck " scene :whistle::ROFLMAO:
plot holes all over the place. There is something in DPC's writing that I like to call “schrödinger's common sense”. It consists in that DPC characters can be quite deductive with their common sense in one scene and then in the next scene or chapter they lose their ability to use common sense.:BootyTime:
 
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No, I don't think so, I thought the same thing would happen during the scene when tommy discovered the mc with josy and nothing happened apart from a blow to the balls with a book.:HideThePain:
I so hope we get the chance to get him back for that one, because nude or not, there was absolutely NO WAY I'd let that slide.
 

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I might not a native english speaker, but even I know it is Cake and not Kake :p.
you just taking your daily simping on another level, I thought we moved past that, :rolleyes: stop policing this topic it's not your personal echo chamber, I'm sure you know where to find that place.

or you can put me into your ignore list, and your life would be less stressful (y)
Simping? I was being friendly to the guy you were messing with. Just stop your trolling, dude. It's tiresome.
 

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Yeah that's definately introducing Drama for Dramas sake. "The old I can't tell you why, but stay away from them" Trope
The DIKs wanted him to stay away from her because she's Chad's GF, not because of her parents. She keeps her relationship with them at a distance, not a secret, but she's trying to be independent. The family picture in the paper didn't include her, did it?
 

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Simping? I was being friendly to the guy you were messing with. Just stop your trolling, dude. It's tiresome.
So is people coming here and asking for information like we are some sort of all knowing God's.

It's a pirate site, not his official discord or his patron page.

If the answer was known they'd be able to get it off Google, reddit, anywhere as well as here.
 
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Simping? I was being friendly to the guy you were messing with. Just stop your trolling, dude. It's tiresome.
This shit is sad. When I was young, the flamewars caused emotional scarring. This shit is more like a campfire. This is like moshing compared to slamdancing. GET OFF MY LAWN!!!
 

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Yeah that's definately introducing Drama for Dramas sake. "The old I can't tell you why, but stay away from them" Trope
Yep, and that apply to the big Josy/Maya drama, that is simply happens because of not honest communication. Yeah Yeah Maya has a reason to keep a secret, but the whole drama would have not happen if she say, " I am in a relationship " . instead of the : " I tell the boys that I am in a relationship so they leave me alone, and you should not develop feelings toward me either "

Josy at least in this case was a bit more honest, so MC kind of a hypocrite who despite knowing this still decide to Fuck her, and then later bitching about "Cheating"

But then again, Josy and Maya never talk about why MC was upset in a first place , until MC confront them.

as has it been said, many times during that era, this was always poorly crafted and badly executed drama.

and frankly he did not improve that much in this aspect in the future, just think of the whole Jill , Tybalt blackmail storyline, what only one saving grace was that at least Bella was funny in it. (y) :ROFLMAO:

Oh I must apologize, I might say to many bad thing about the greatest developer of all time, :eek:
and it might sound Trolling, please dont report me , DPC is AWesome and all my criticism is just false and wrong, forgive me
 

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So is people coming here and asking for information like we are some sort of all knowing God's.

It's a pirate site, not his official discord or his patron page.

If the answer was known they'd be able to get it off Google, reddit, anywhere as well as here.
Asking for info isn't trolling if you don't know. Just ignore them, don't give them fake info, that's just mean. And how is it simping that I gave the dude a real answer?
 

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Yep, and that apply to the big Josy/Maya drama, that is simply happens because of not honest communication. Yeah Yeah Maya has a reason to keep a secret, but the whole drama would have not happen if she say, " I am in a relationship " . instead of the : " I tell the boys that I am in a relationship so they leave me alone, and you should not develop feelings toward me either "

Josy at least in this case was a bit more honest, so MC kind of a hypocrite who despite knowing this still decide to Fuck her, and then later bitching about "Cheating"

But then again, Josy and Maya never talk about why MC was upset in a first place , until MC confront them.

as has it been said, many times during that era, this was always poorly crafted and badly executed drama.

and frankly he did not improve that much in this aspect in the future, just think of the whole Jill , Tybalt blackmail storyline, what only one saving grace was that at least Bella was funny in it. (y) :ROFLMAO:
On top of that Derek also knew about Josie and not once did he tell our MC that
A. He is barking up The wrong tree
B. She has a girlriend

I know DPC has said he has some sort of bible and knows where he's going, but a few times I just get the feeling he's adding random ideas for the sake of it.
 
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