VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[treechild1]

Yes

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[grarg]

Yes
The gang needed a guilt free reason to look into Bella's secret room without her permission. Derek's reckless tendencies have been firmly established and the tip of a finger crosses the line to serious territory while the worst case consequences remain relatively small. It's actually quite a neat way to bring that plot point to all paths. The only shitty part is having to wait for the next episode

What?

Those two things have nothing to do with each other. Bella's door being unlocked is completely unrelated, and everyone is there because Sage wanted to have a family/party, and Bella invited everyone over for Christmas. The fact the door is unlocked makes 0 sense.

The realistic behaviour of chopping off a finger with a champagne sabre is just silly. They're made dull. And even if it was really sharp, that takes a lot of leverage and a certain angle to cut through a thumb's finger bone, which would've been slowed down by scoring down the neck of the bottle. (As well, the angle of the bottle and hand doesn't even work.) At worst, he'd have gotten knicked; but, gotta create an immediate conflict for cliffhanger hijinks.

It's actually quite a neat way to bring that plot point to all paths.

What paths? No choices change or modify this outcome.

And which plot point? This doesn't change anything in the plot, aside from whatever Derek can or can't do in the future.

Claiming this is clever or good writing? It's just Derek being Derek to drum up temporary conflict. And the locked door that is in the vicinity is magically unlocked and opened just because Maya was randomly looking for towels/a bathroom?

 

[treechild1]

What?

Those two things have nothing to do with each other. Bella's door being unlocked is completely unrelated, and everyone is there because Sage wanted to have a family/party, and Bella invited everyone over for Christmas. The fact the door is unlocked makes 0 sense.

The realistic behaviour of chopping off a finger with a champagne sabre is just silly. They're made dull. And even if it was really sharp, that takes a lot of leverage and a certain angle to cut through a thumb's finger bone, which would've been slowed down by scoring down the neck of the bottle. (As well, the angle of the bottle and hand doesn't even work.) At worst, he'd have gotten knicked; but, gotta create an immediate conflict for cliffhanger hijinks.


What paths? No choices change or modify this outcome.

And which plot point? This doesn't change anything in the plot, aside from whatever Derek can or can't do in the future.

Claiming this is clever or good writing? It's just Derek being Derek to drum up temporary conflict. And the locked door that is in the vicinity is magically unlocked and opened just because Maya was randomly looking for towels/a bathroom?

I still think it’s something stupid and simple. For example, Bella has her gifts for everyone in there. Maybe they’re not all wrapped or are big and were never going to wrapped. Surprise! You saw your awesome gifts too early! I mean, people want this to be a big reveal on Bella’s past, James, or something else to create drama. I just don’t believe it’s going to be that deep. Just my opinion.

 

[hakuna-matata]

The worst part is it's a cliff hanger and we'll have to wait about two years before this gets resolved. The "room" has been a ongoing discussion since around episode 3 and the "Christmas" incident has been hyped up since episode 9. Unless Bella is pulling a Norman Bates, or has fully dedicated BDSM room, the reveal is going to be a major let down.

What's most likely going to happen..... "Bella, why didn't you tell me you have a crypto mining room!?!" Then MC runs off like a pussy and sulks in a corner for a weeks.

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

The realistic behaviour of chopping off a finger with a champagne sabre is just silly. They're made dull. And even if it was really sharp, that takes a lot of leverage and a certain angle to cut through a thumb's finger bone, which would've been slowed down by scoring down the neck of the bottle. (As well, the angle of the bottle and hand doesn't even work.) At worst, he'd have gotten knicked; but, gotta create an immediate conflict for cliffhanger hijinks.

Guess you are an expert, and I don't doubt that at all. I bought the premise that in order to cut corners Derek bought a sharp sword instead of a dull sabre and held the bottle close to the top instead of the bottom, where the hand's supposed to go.

 

[hakuna-matata]

Derek never had the makings of a Varsity Athlete.

 

[Bootyman92]

Maybe, but I feel like it would've happened by now. Episode 10 was a good spot for it, her last solo hangout. Or even during anal, like having her wear the ballgag could've been a DIK choice.

Josy sorta started out CHICK lite, but definitely lands on the DIK side now. But not overly so, like early Sage.

That jockey scene with the ball gag had me feeling all kinds of hot. It was definitely a DIK sort of position, but Josy also likes a tad of gentleness, so she's a bit of a neutral girl to me.

 

[Bootyman92]

Playing my way through Jill's path, and maaaaan, DPC is a special kind of twisted dangling Bianca in front of us like that ‍

 

[Roger-a-Dale]

What?

Those two things have nothing to do with each other. Bella's door being unlocked is completely unrelated, and everyone is there because Sage wanted to have a family/party, and Bella invited everyone over for Christmas. The fact the door is unlocked makes 0 sense.

The realistic behaviour of chopping off a finger with a champagne sabre is just silly. They're made dull. And even if it was really sharp, that takes a lot of leverage and a certain angle to cut through a thumb's finger bone, which would've been slowed down by scoring down the neck of the bottle. (As well, the angle of the bottle and hand doesn't even work.) At worst, he'd have gotten knicked; but, gotta create an immediate conflict for cliffhanger hijinks.


What paths? No choices change or modify this outcome.

And which plot point? This doesn't change anything in the plot, aside from whatever Derek can or can't do in the future.

Claiming this is clever or good writing? It's just Derek being Derek to drum up temporary conflict. And the locked door that is in the vicinity is magically unlocked and opened just because Maya was randomly looking for towels/a bathroom?

Sorry, but I seriously don't understand how this is so difficult for you to understand.

 

[soprano31]

Sorry, but I seriously don't understand how this is so difficult for you to understand.

 

[Better Cock Spock]

I still think it’s something stupid and simple. For example, Bella has her gifts for everyone in there. Maybe they’re not all wrapped or are big and were never going to wrapped. Surprise! You saw your awesome gifts too early! I mean, people want this to be a big reveal on Bella’s past, James, or something else to create drama. I just don’t believe it’s going to be that deep. Just my opinion.

That's too stupid and too simple though, no one's reaction matches that.

The worst part is it's a cliff hanger and we'll have to wait about two years before this gets resolved. The "room" has been a ongoing discussion since around episode 3 and the "Christmas" incident has been hyped up since episode 9. Unless Bella is pulling a Norman Bates, or has fully dedicated BDSM room, the reveal is going to be a major let down.

What's most likely going to happen..... "Bella, why didn't you tell me you had crypto mining room!?!" Then MC runs off like a pussy and sulks in a corner for a weeks.

At this point, I'm going:

1. Baby room
2. James shrine
3. Sex dungeon
4. Embarrassing collection of beanie babies
5. Nothing else

Derek never had the makings of Varsity Athlete.

Small penis, that was his problem.

 

[Darkwen]

That's too stupid and too simple though, no one's reaction matches that.

At this point, I'm going:

1. Baby room
2. Goddess Josy shrine
3. Sex dungeon
4. Embarrassing collection of beanie babies
5. weapons room

Small penis, that was his problem.

 

[Better Cock Spock]

Baby room
Goddess Josy shrine
Sex dungeon
Embarrassing collection of beanie babies
weapons room

Bella would never practice Alady, she has a brain. And besides, an Alady room and the weapons room would be the same thing.

 

[Darkwen]

Bella would never practice Alady, she has a brain. And besides, an Alady room and the weapons room would be the same thing.

Bella loves Goddess Josy she smart she knows Josy the best
Alady Alady Alady

 

[DrAddy]

That's too stupid and too simple though, no one's reaction matches that.

At this point, I'm going:

1. Baby room
2. James shrine
3. Sex dungeon
4. Embarrassing collection of beanie babies
5. Nothing else

Small penis, that was his problem.

Something else has been forgotten.
The Dark Room, where Bella holds her husband, bound and gagged. Bella really does have a dark personality.

 

[Ray_D]

"Christmas" incident has been hyped up since episode 9.

Seeing what actually happened was the most disappointing thing about the whole episode.

What's most likely going to happen..... "Bella, why didn't you tell me you had crypto mining room!?!" Then MC runs off like a pussy and sulks in a corner for a weeks.

You know what? at this point I don't care what happens with that.

 

[TonyMurray]

That's too stupid and too simple though, no one's reaction matches that.

At this point, I'm going:

1. Baby room
2. James shrine
3. Sex dungeon
4. Embarrassing collection of beanie babies
5. Nothing else

Small penis, that was his problem.

It ties in with #3, but #4 should be "Embarrassing collection of Bad Dragon toys."

 

[DIKHammer]

Bella would never practice Alady, she has a brain. And besides, an Alady room and the weapons room would be the same thing.

I can totally see Bella having a Sex Dungeon though, it would make me love her even more

 

[Better Cock Spock]

Something else has been forgotten.
The Dark Room, where Bella holds her husband, bound and gagged. Bella really does have a dark personality.

Seeing what actually happened was the most disappointing thing about the whole episode.

You know what? at this point I don't care what happens with that.
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What do you even care about besides grappling with big sweaty dudes?

It ties in with #3, but #4 should be "Embarrassing collection of Bad Dragon toys."

I can totally see Bella having a Sex Dungeon though, it would make me love her even more

I agree

Don't be an asshole Milton
I know what's in there, check it out: a leaked preview of Episode 12's opening scene!
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And of course, MC's reaction depends on if youre dating Bella or not.
Bella path: Oh hell yeah!
Different path: Fuck, I made the wrong choice!

 

[Darkwen]

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What do you even care about besides grappling with big sweaty dudes?

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I agree

Bella should had cut holes in that newspaper, also that one odd looking paper