VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[felianMDR]

You know what would be absolutely hot tho?

Jill giving fuckface a ruined orgasm.
OMG just the thought.
Like idk if she found out he is cheating on her with Bianca.
I can hear the internal dialogue of fuckface regretting introducing her to sexuality as a whole...
"I've created a monster"

no way Jill touch his pencil if she found out he is cheating

 

[Better Cock Spock]

You know what would be absolutely hot tho?

Jill giving fuckface a ruined orgasm.
OMG just the thought.
Like idk if she found out he is cheating on her with Bianca.
I can hear the internal dialogue of fuckface regretting introducing her to sexuality as a whole...
"I've created a monster"

You know what would be hotter? A Jill/Bianca threesome

Jill: You wanted to fuck Bianca this whole time?
View attachment Whiplash Fletcher Then Why the Fuck Didn't You Say So.mp4

 

[Bazsa4]

no way Jill touch his pencil if she found out he is cheating

Maybe she could play it off on a "which one of us gives better head?" Thing

 

[felianMDR]

Maybe she could play it off on a "which one of us gives better head?" Thing

we talk same Jill? if she found you cheating it will be bonus 2 episodes of talking how painful it is for her and mc act like dummy talking he didn't think blahblah.
anyway if we dreaming why we just not make 1v1 pvp Jill v Bianca with few categories. bj, ride, etc.

 

[Ant13]

I am in Isabella house and cannot find the way to the swimming pool can someone help me with that ? Thanks

 

[Better Cock Spock]

I am in Isabella house and cannot find the way to the swimming pool can someone help me with that ? Thanks

Through the set of double doors, to the left of these three.

 

[Jacowboy]

we talk same Jill? if she found you cheating it will be bonus 2 episodes of talking how painful it is for her and mc act like dummy talking he didn't think blahblah.

Too true... I wish the game would go back to the S1 dumbshit fun and shenanigans... it's too late I know, but damn... DPC lowkey sucks at the whole melodrama thing

 

[grarg]

I find the story satisfying. Zoey and MC were newbies in love matters, they made some mistakes and the relationship couldn't handle long distance. It's very natural and it leaves a wide range of plausible emotions for their reunion. I like the pace of the story. Ep 1-8 build up to the moment of truth, the choice of which path to take. The relationship you are in gets more serious. It's far from done, but the chosen girl has practically won against all the competition. It's the ideal moment for the ex to enter the stage.

The ex is both an obvious character to include and very tricky to get right. Zoey has the ex's advantage of years against everyone else's mere months and she has the disadvantage of heartbreak. The advantage is lessened by the immature aspects of their relationship and the disadvantage is softened by the circumstances of the heartbreak so neither is so overwhelming that the result would be obvious from the start.

It's natural that Zoey is MC's metric for relationships. The relationship failed, so any potential relationship has to be better than that, yet it did well enough for that to be a challenge. It did so well that getting back together is not at all foolish. It's also plausible to play the story in a way that makes it clear that MC has moved on, but even if you do that the relationship is still a significant part of his past. Just about every time a player might wonder why MC is the way he is the answer is: "because Neil", "because Lynette" or "because Zoey". The kind of person Zoey turned out to be justifies that answer.

I don't mind Zoey's looks. She's at least on the same level as the majority of girl characters. The tattoos, piercings and hair are all parts of a whole that works and none of them are deal breakers for me, though I understand how they could be for some.

I particularly like the Sage vs. Zoey situation that is brewing. It's fitting because Sage is the main girl who is most like Zoey in personality. There are some big differences of course, but if you compare any of the other four to Zoey the gap is much wider than it is for Sage. Sage is competitive so she naturally will compare herself and Zoey and the similarities are bound to be worrying to her. How much of MC feelings for her are based on that familiarity? Does he do and say those things because they worked with Zoey? Is she just Zoey's replacement? Would he go back to the original if he had the chance?

On the other hand Jill is perhaps the one most different from Zoey. You can reverse all Sage's worries for Jill. How much of their relationship is based on her being the anti-Zoey? There is plenty of potential there too, but it didn't get as much attention as Sage's.

It would be really repetitive for all paths to do their version of vs. Zoey so I'm glad it's just Sage and Jill and I hope Bella, Josy and Maya won't make a big deal about Zoey's confession if MC rejects her just like I hope that Sage and Jill will make a big deal out of it.

Choosing to go back to Zoey is obviously going to be a big deal on all four main paths and I already feel guilty for what I must do for the sake of completion there, though I must admit to a certain macabre curiosity on just how pissed off Sage can get.

The only Zoey game I'm looking forward to is through Others, but I'm undecided on if it should be through the monk approach or the manwhore approach.

And that's really all there is to say. Unless you want me to go into details on what I have planned for the harem fanfiction.

I find the story with Zoey the Destroyer retarded.

The interlude was a waste of time, resources, and expectations. What was technical in it that we needed an aside? Her backstory shows she has a backstory. The MC is dripping in women that you can build relationships with -- which is the point of AVNs -- and that's just thrown away because some past friend figures out surfing and finding herself was less important than her most intimate relationship. It invalidates any concept of romance or relationship in the story, because some old "friend" can come back and declare their love. Ooh, we can make her be a DIK or Chick! Who cares? Is she a 2nd MC? Whose entire DIK system has been pointless since the DIK Sage path likes Chick options now.

No writer, especially not a romance one, would do this in the way it was done in a story of finding a lost love. This could not have worked, as DPC threw a giant wrench into everything he created.

Rejecting Zoey should be mandatory; perhaps some kind of writer fetish message from their past, failed girlfriends. (We certainly know the Interlude was. Ooh, what if I pursue my dream of finding myself and abandon the guy I play with most important person in my life , then perch around him for months, as I work up the courage like a poor-me retard to tell him my feelings?)

Meanwhile: Sage, Bella, Maya, x24+, etc.

 

[Roger-a-Dale]

I find the story with Zoey the Destroyer retarded.

The interlude was a waste of time, resources, and expectations. What was technical in it that we needed an aside? Her backstory shows she has a backstory. The MC is dripping in women that you can build relationships with -- which is the point of AVNs -- and that's just thrown away because some past friend figures out surfing and finding herself was less important than her most intimate relationship. It invalidates any concept of romance or relationship in the story, because some old "friend" can come back and declare their love. Ooh, we can make her be a DIK or Chick! Who cares? Is she a 2nd MC? Whose entire DIK system has been pointless since the DIK Sage path likes Chick options now.

No writer, especially not a romance one, would do this in the way it was done in a story of finding a lost love. This could not have worked, as DPC threw a giant wrench into everything he created.

Rejecting Zoey should be mandatory; perhaps some kind of writer fetish message from their past, failed girlfriends. (We certainly know the Interlude was. Ooh, what if I pursue my dream of finding myself and abandon the most important person in my life guy I play with, then perch around him for months, as I work up the courage like a poor-me retard to tell him my feelings?)

Meanwhile: Sage, Bella, Maya, x24+, etc.

Sorry, but I seriously don't understand how this is so difficult for you to understand.

 

[felianMDR]

Whose entire DIK system has been pointless since the DIK Sage path likes Chick options now.

I like that actually. It shows how Sage could change if get some love and not just status bs like it was with Chad (at least that's how I see it).
Overall right now I like Sage path most because of how she try work on herself and change to better version.
I feel other should get at similar point in their storys too. Funny that currently Mel is second one who look like changing to interesting person and not just "one of that 2 side hots", while main girls just stay same somehow.
Jill always need talk some sad bs and be pure angel. She not work on herself same way as Sage because she already kinda perfect. But she try change mc insteed.
Josy chase mc and almost don't give a shit for Maya I feel like. at least she try find herself lately.
Maya just afk while doing her contract stuff. You talk to her - she answer. You not - she don't care. wtf is this?
Bella go cougar mode in last ep but I feel she ready to drop everything if you disapoint her even once just because she so mature and mc so dummy.
Zoey = trolling from dev. She drop mc, go surf. find it is not so fun. back. see mc who already happy trying build something new. start pushing herself as one who should be with him (don't care about mc AGAIN). and I must even consider her as an option because she was first who touch my pencil? what a clown fiesta.

 

[ymy42]

I have a question for my friends who are experts in the game...
In the 7th episode, at the HOT party, Tremolo cums quickly while having sex with Sage...

So the scene ends in the garden...
I know they continue in Sage's room, but why can't I see that part?
Why does my character have a premature ejaculation problem, dear friends?
Is Sage so hot ^^

 

[Roger-a-Dale]

I have a question for my friends who are experts in the game...
In the 7th episode, at the HOT party, Tremolo cums quickly while having sex with Sage...

So the scene ends in the garden...
I know they continue in Sage's room, but why can't I see that part?
Why does my character have a premature ejaculation problem, dear friends?
Is Sage so hot ^^

You fucked someone else before fucking Sage. It ruined your stamina.

 

[grarg]

Sorry, but I seriously don't understand how this is so difficult for you to understand.

Well, colour me Bar-Be-Qued! You're certainly doing a fantastic job explaining yourself.

Choosing Zoey is for bored Other's players who go "why not? My mouse works" all because DPC gave them her as an option in Chapter 3, and just happened to be nice to her previously, because they didn't care in the first place.

 

[Justaphase]

I find the story with Zoey the Destroyer retarded.

The interlude was a waste of time, resources, and expectations. What was technical in it that we needed an aside? Her backstory shows she has a backstory. The MC is dripping in women that you can build relationships with -- which is the point of AVNs -- and that's just thrown away because some past friend figures out surfing and finding herself was less important than her most intimate relationship. It invalidates any concept of romance or relationship in the story, because some old "friend" can come back and declare their love. Ooh, we can make her be a DIK or Chick! Who cares? Is she a 2nd MC? Whose entire DIK system has been pointless since the DIK Sage path likes Chick options now.

No writer, especially not a romance one, would do this in the way it was done in a story of finding a lost love. This could not have worked, as DPC threw a giant wrench into everything he created.

Rejecting Zoey should be mandatory; perhaps some kind of writer fetish message from their past, failed girlfriends. (We certainly know the Interlude was. Ooh, what if I pursue my dream of finding myself and abandon the most important person in my life guy I play with, then perch around him for months, as I work up the courage like a poor-me retard to tell him my feelings?)

Meanwhile: Sage, Bella, Maya, x24+, etc.

While Zoey is also not a favourite of mine, like it or not Zoey is a part of the main story here, what little main story it has anyway. It's up to the player if they want to romance her or just be friends, but she isn't going anywhere. Especially now with her coming to B & R, she will most likely become the first female DIK and move into Nick's old room.
Anyway you should find a way to let DPC know your opinion, he loves this kind of feedback!

 

[felianMDR]

It's up to the player if they want to romance her or just be friends

she so pushed it's crazy you think player decide anything

 

[Justaphase]

she so pushed it's crazy you think player decide anything

You decide if you want to pursue her romantically or not, that's the choice/decision. She is a part of the main story however and still one of the MC's best and oldest friends.

 

[grarg]

I like that actually. It shows how Sage could change if get some love and not just status bs like it was with Chad (at least that's how I see it).

You like that the DIK system in the Being a DIK game, and all your choices regarding it, and potentially shaping the MC and Zoey, and the story, are moot?

Like wings on flightless chickens. Apparently, vestigial artifacts like old "friends" just turn Other's manwhore's on, comparatively, when dripping in multiple 10/10 women.

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[felianMDR]

You decide if you want to pursue her romantically or not, that's the choice/decision. She is a part of the main story however and still one of the MC's best and oldest friends.

I just saying I wish there was real choice where you can drop her from your life. currently choice we have is some matrix type "The choice is an illusion"

 

[felianMDR]

You like that the DIK system in the Being a DIK game, and all your choices regarding it, and potentially shaping the MC and Zoey, and the story, are moot?

Like wings on flightless chickens. Apparently, vestigial artifacts like old "friends" just turn Other's manwhore's on, comparatively, when dripping in multiple 10/10 women.

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I was talking I like that there scenario where Sage have feelings to mc even if he go pussy mode. which I feel better then "she just like dik character". if there was just one way it would be boring.
and I don't like anything about Zoey

 

[CCCmantriple]

What's that latest cosmetic poll about?