VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[RC-1138 Boss]

are we talking about the same jill, who selfishly puts herself in tybalts blackmail so she dont have to be seen naked in front of the MC? i dunno bout you but she quickly jumps at anything that buys hers virginity more time. hence the self imposed blackmail. she didnt have to accept tybalts offer, shes clearly wealthy and intelligent enuff to battle tybalt legally or otherwise. not to mention shes a female and given more credit over every male in any case all she has to do is spread micropenis rumors on tybalt to bring him down or get em to cave fo HER DEMANDS, but no, self imposed virgin lockdown was her path to avpid mc and his sword of valhalla

The problem is you people are trying to make sense of a story designed to unnecesarily drag drama across multiple episodes. Story is the weakest pillar of this game, you will go crazy if you try to pay too much attention to all the absurd things Dr.Pinkcake added into the game.

This is the same guy who put a student assaulting Cathy in the first episode without any consequence, that made Derek post online pictures of a crime with no repercussion, that made the Protagonist rage over Maya and Josy like they were his long time lovers instead of two women he met a few months/ a week ago and that has been draging the whole prostitution-drug ring-free tuition scam.

My advice is enjoy the game but don't look too hard at its story.

 

[DaBigD]

let me critique the ladys, and this is just my opinion on thier shapes and sizes for this game renders.

jill: deffinate hotty, but her appearance in the library having coffee with josey, made her look like king kong, most of her images are quite appealing and seem highly balancing. but that one.... wtf happened? does coffee make her bloat?

bella: im not sure if you guys noticed this but her dimensions change quite a bit. and sometimes i think its based on if the ms is in the scene or not. perhaps one guy draws bella and another draws the mc, i dunno. but the artist cant seem to control the m4easurement difference between her waist and breasts and hips. and her profile which hides her waistline best, keeps me wondering if shes gonna tip over forward from her huge breasts, or backwards from her huge butt. if any of the girls were to have a bad back,....-points to bella- but in summary, when she jumps on mc in the libary and hes holdering her off the ground, she suddenly loses 80lbs, otherwise mc wouldnt be able to hold her up.

josey: in most all the images shes prolly the most stable size, altho in some scenes she does seem to get a bit shorter/smaller -coffee with jill scene or nearly every scene with jill.

maya: only thing that changes or maya is her bubble butt. sometyimes its well rounded, other times it leans toward flat.

sage: all i can say is something is wrong with her hi hips when haveing sex in her room. and her torso is long in some scenes and shorter in others.

quinn: lovely girl when her makeup is on, but her figure pretty much remains constant. however i after the rain washed off her makeup, i found her to be needing that makeup 24/7 lol. skin tone was way mono. similar to maya skin tone, maybe even identical, is there no sun at this college?

my favorite figure in the game?: camilla. nuff said

 

[Laport Deminis]

The problem is you people are trying to make sense of a story designed to unnecesarily drag drama across multiple episodes. Story is the weakest pillar of this game, you will go crazy if you try to pay too much attention to all the absurd things Dr.Pinkcake added into the game.

This is the same guy who put a student assaulting Cathy in the first episode without any consequence, that made Derek post online pictures of a crime with no repercussion, that made the Protagonist rage over Maya and Josy like they were his long time lovers instead of two women he met a few months/ a week ago and that has been draging the whole prostitution-drug ring-free tuition scam.

My advice is enjoy the game but don't look too hard at its story.

I wanted to talk about this issue from a long time. I dont think story is the weakes part of this game. Yes, you are right in all the logical inconsistencies you point out. And you should be right. But here is the problem: We are in the year of our lord 2021. Coherence is out of the map long time ago.

There are hundreds of youtube channels willing to explain why every single movie or show you like for the past 50 years is full of logical mistakes. If millonaire Cinema productions with hundreds of people working on them dont give a fuck about logical consistencies, and both theaudience and the academy dont give a crap about that, then why we should care about that when we judge a one persona porn game?

This is not the time where Hemingway could mock Fitzgerald because he was wrong about wich kind of fish where in a specific small lake. Now you can put a lake in the driest part of the Sahara and noone will care. This is the time where you can make a Rohirrim cavalry charge across a hill in a fucking 60° degree angle and eveyone will feel an extasis and call you genious. You can make only two people to pilot a XVIII frigate, you can make some independentist islanders to attack another independentist kingdom instead off ally with them, or blown an entire space ship with the size of the moon with a single shot. You can end your story with a roman republican restauration in the II century after Christ. You can make your battle speech to be XIX centurt patriotic nationalistic in a medieval Scotland, and everyone will be happy and call it better war speech, better than Shakespeare San Crispin's. We live in a world in wich you can make time travel story and noone will give a fuck about how none of this stories have 0 sense.

Forget about logical coherence, is buried and we made a party with stripers at its funeral. Now you have spectacle. One logical inconsistencies behind another, all of them made to build strong emotional moments.And story telling is now about that: how can an author to build thoose moments strong and frequently untill we forget about everything else.

 

[drakken]

The problem is you people are trying to make sense of a story designed to unnecesarily drag drama across multiple episodes. Story is the weakest pillar of this game, you will go crazy if you try to pay too much attention to all the absurd things Dr.Pinkcake added into the game.

This is the same guy who put a student assaulting Cathy in the first episode without any consequence, that made Derek post online pictures of a crime with no repercussion, that made the Protagonist rage over Maya and Josy like they were his long time lovers instead of two women he met a few months/ a week ago and that has been draging the whole prostitution-drug ring-free tuition scam.

My advice is enjoy the game but don't look too hard at its story.

Guessing whats next is half the fun. Its like doing a puzzle/puzzle book only a little but different. The fact that not all aspects are grounded in reality, but rather in a world created by the story adds to it because it plays by dpcs rules. There's nothing wrong with theorizing. People do it when people watch suspense movies/TV shows. Its no different.

 

[Tserriednich'sNen]

The problem is you people are trying to make sense of a story designed to unnecesarily drag drama across multiple episodes. Story is the weakest pillar of this game, you will go crazy if you try to pay too much attention to all the absurd things Dr.Pinkcake added into the game.

This is the same guy who put a student assaulting Cathy in the first episode without any consequence, that made Derek post online pictures of a crime with no repercussion, that made the Protagonist rage over Maya and Josy like they were his long time lovers instead of two women he met a few months/ a week ago and that has been draging the whole prostitution-drug ring-free tuition scam.

My advice is enjoy the game but don't look too hard at its story.

Exactly. This whole Tybalt nonsense can be resolved rather quickly by having Jill make it very clear to Tybalt that she isn't interested in him and to leave her alone or else. But that obviously won't happen because the plot demands otherwise.

 

[DaBigD]

The problem is you people are trying to make sense of a story designed to unnecesarily drag drama across multiple episodes. Story is the weakest pillar of this game, you will go crazy if you try to pay too much attention to all the absurd things Dr.Pinkcake added into the game.

This is the same guy who put a student assaulting Cathy in the first episode without any consequence, that made Derek post online pictures of a crime with no repercussion, that made the Protagonist rage over Maya and Josy like they were his long time lovers instead of two women he met a few months/ a week ago and that has been draging the whole prostitution-drug ring-free tuition scam.

My advice is enjoy the game but don't look too hard at its story.

no the problem is were invested in this game and suffering from lack of more of it. creating our own extensions of the game that dpc has done so great at creating , is how we deal with our withdrawels until we get more. we are junkies and dpc is our supplier, but when his drug runs dry, we create our own, or try to, here in this forum. anything, just to ease the cravings. dpc games should be illegal, just kidding bout the illegal part. but you get my meaning.

 

[Sieglinnde]

I guess "the only healthy option" isn't right, but she is currently one of the healthiest relationships. It also depends on what you consider healthy or not. Sage's path isn't so bad because they both know its cheating but it's 'justifiable'. Quinn plays games with MC but she doesn't pretend she's anything she isn't. Jill has baggage hidden somewhere but maybe it's no biggie.

I'm sure by the end (unless DPC makes them fight in a battle royale to kill off half the LIs or something) they'll all be in a healthier spot but currently they're all pretty bad.

To add on to Shazba's answer because he hit a lot of the key points:

• Cathy, Jade, and Bella all have an awkward power dynamic problem as faculty. MC isn't in a class of Bella's yet so its not quite a big deal.
• Sage, Bella, Josy and Maya's relationship with MC all start with cheating.
  • Maya's especially started out with a bunch of lies. That's behind them, though, so maybe null point.
• Quinn's got so much baggage and she's such bad news
• Jill's so far the second best, but she has the sword of plotocles above her head with Bella and that pamphlet. Plus the MC asks her out to piss Tybalt off first, his feelings coming second.
• Almost all of the LIs have played head games with the MC at some point.
• Camila isn't a main LI and that is unhealthy for us, the players.

Nicole was upfront, she expressed hesitation but MC was mature enough to convince her otherwise. He knows she has a kid and that she's a stripper. All her baggage is on the table and they interact a fairly normal way for an early couple without any dicking around, cheating, lying, so on. Sure, it's mostly sex but that's not unusual.

The biggest problem is the age gap, but again MC is written to be pretty damn mature for his age so that would mostly make an awkward relationship with her kid. And he would probably have to tell her not to blow any clients anymore if they get exclusive.

who the fuck is nicole

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Guessing whats next is half the fun. Its like doing a puzzle/puzzle book only a little but different. The fact that not all aspects are grounded in reality, but rather in a world created by the story adds to it because it plays by dpcs rules. There's nothing wrong with theorizing. People do it when people watch suspense movies/TV shows. Its no different.

But it doesn't. DPC "forgets" his own rules for the sake of drama. Case in point, a student assaulting Cathy in the middle of day in a place full of witnesses results in nothing meanwhile the protagonist being attacked in the night ends up resulting in a shitstorm involving all the theachers, a frathouse and Jill.

Exactly. This whole Tybalt nonsense can be resolved rather quickly by having Jill make it very clear to Tybalt that she isn't interested in him and to leave him alone or else. But that obviously won't happen because the plot demands otherwise.

Precisely. DPC always go for the cheap drama first. It is the same pattern of his previous game.

Look i like the game. It has amazing renders, soundtrack and some characters are actually well written but i would be lying if i said the story is on par with the rest. I already played way too many games here to believe on that.

 

[ashitanojoe]

I hope that EP 7 has an end as incredible as EP 3, that plot twist was a head explosion:

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Am I the only one who thinks the MC acted like a pussy and all over dramatic after that? Boy, non of the girls lied to you, they said they were dating someone else. Besides, you have the possibility of a threesome and you start crying like something terrible would have happened.

 

[Sieglinnde]

The problem is you people are trying to make sense of a story designed to unnecesarily drag drama across multiple episodes. Story is the weakest pillar of this game, you will go crazy if you try to pay too much attention to all the absurd things Dr.Pinkcake added into the game.

This is the same guy who put a student assaulting Cathy in the first episode without any consequence, that made Derek post online pictures of a crime with no repercussion, that made the Protagonist rage over Maya and Josy like they were his long time lovers instead of two women he met a few months/ a week ago and that has been draging the whole prostitution-drug ring-free tuition scam.

My advice is enjoy the game but don't look too hard at its story.

Weeeeeeeeeeeell, we could say that, yes. But let's not forget that we would have to be in the place where the protagonists were before trying to "criticize" their actions. I mean, I know it's a work of fiction, but we have a great affinity for the way the characters were implemented for us. I really like history, it is fun and gives you many options and complications along the way, if you think about some things you might realize that... They are surreal, and that's fine, because when I really play these games (personally) I try to escape from "reality" so to speak by living another funnier story, I am not looking to find a super realistic story where the protagonists make perfect decisions. But we also have to think about our situation, it's easy for us (as viewers) to say that we wouldn't do a certain thing if we were there, but that's the point... We are not there, that's why they give us options of what we want to do. That does not really mean that we could not question the actions of certain characters, but it does raise the possibility that we would have to live that fictitious situation to really know what to do.

 

[Sieglinnde]

But it doesn't. DPC "forgets" his own rules for the sake of drama. Case in point, a student assaulting Cathy in the middle of day in a place full of witnesses results in nothing meanwhile the protagonist being attacked in the night ends up resulting in a shitstorm involving all the theachers, a frathouse and Jill.


Precisely. DPC always go for the cheap drama first. It is the same pattern of his previous game.

Look i like the game. It has amazing renders, soundtrack and some characters are actually well written but i would be lying if i said the story is on par with the rest. I already played way too many games here to believe on that.

Could you recommend me some game with, in your opinion, good story?

 

[Citlaly]

Has the dev said the release date of the next update?

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Exactly. This whole Tybalt nonsense can be resolved rather quickly by having Jill make it very clear to Tybalt that she isn't interested in him and to leave him alone or else. But that obviously won't happen because the plot demands otherwise.

Hrmmmm. Now that Tibbs is in blackmail mode, WOULD he just back off like that? I kind of see Jill explicitly and strongly saying she's not interested just ending up with Tibbs smugly going something to the effect of "well thats a shame. I guess I won't be able to stop Trevor anymore. Too heartbroken, see?" And on it goes.

At this point, I don't think Tibbs cares about Jill's intent. He wants her. He'll have her, one way or the other. Like, he's not a lovestricken fool now. He's blackmailing her. He knows what he's doing.

 

[Tserriednich'sNen]

Hrmmmm. Now that Tibbs is in blackmail mode, WOULD he just back off like that? I kind of see Jill explicitly and strongly saying she's not interested just ending up with Tibbs smugly going something to the effect of "well thats a shame. I guess I won't be able to stop Trevor anymore. Too heartbroken, see?" And on it goes.

At this point, I don't think Tibbs cares about Jill's intent. He wants her. He'll have her, one way or the other. Like, he's not a lovestricken fool now. He's blackmailing her. He knows what he's doing.

It's pretty clear that Jill has never told Tybalt off or made it very clear to him that she has no interest in him in the time that they've known each other which is why Tybalt believes he has a chance with her. Had Jill properly rejected Tybalt and asked to be left alone would Tybalt have bothered trying to get under her good grace or even attempt to blackmail her? I doubt it.

 

[drakken]

But it doesn't. DPC "forgets" his own rules for the sake of drama. Case in point, a student assaulting Cathy in the middle of day in a place full of witnesses results in nothing meanwhile the protagonist being attacked in the night ends up resulting in a shitstorm involving all the theachers, a frathouse and Jill.


Precisely. DPC always go for the cheap drama first. It is the same pattern of his previous game.

Look i like the game. It has amazing renders, soundtrack and some characters are actually well written but i would be lying if i said the story is on par with the rest. I already played way too many games here to believe on that.

we didn't see what happened after that, for all we know she could of said/done something about it, hell it could of had to do with his punishment when he jumped mc. again their private conversation after mc left wasn't shown it. basically it wasn't covered, so we don't know. which means at least at this point, story wise its not important.

 

[Tserriednich'sNen]

we didn't see what happened after that, for all we know she could of said/done something about it, hell it could of had to do with his punishment when he jumped mc. again their private conversation after mc left wasn't shown it. basically it wasn't covered, so we don't know. which means at least at this point, story wise its not important.
but beyond that, its a avn. a story. its not reality. if u want reality then there's a whole big world out there.

No idea what you're talking about but a story doesn't need to be "realistic" to be well written.

 

[drakken]

No idea what you're talking about but a story doesn't need to be "realistic" to be well written.

Thats Pretty much what i was saying.
At the same time hitting on one of the inconsistencies that was mentioned

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

It's pretty clear that Jill has never told Tybalt off or made it very clear to him that she has no interest in him in the time that they've known each other which is why Tybalt believes he has a chance with her. Had Jill properly rejected Tybalt and asked to be left alone would Tybalt have bothered trying to get under her good grace or even attempt to blackmail her? I doubt it.

Oh. You mean, told him before blackmail. I thought you meant after. Yeah, I can't disagree there. Tibbs' attention would be on someone else had she firmly let him down earlier.

 

[drakken]

It's pretty clear that Jill has never told Tybalt off or made it very clear to him that she has no interest in him in the time that they've known each other which is why Tybalt believes he has a chance with her. Had Jill properly rejected Tybalt and asked to be left alone would Tybalt have bothered trying to get under her good grace or even attempt to blackmail her? I doubt it.

im not sure jill knows how to be mean.

edit: then again tydbol is probally the type that would need it to be said brutally blunt.

 

[Sieglinnde]

who the fuck is nicole

I already see who it's nicole.