VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[felicemastronzo]

Based on all these negative reactions, I'd say you guys are overthinking it. At the end of the day, an AVN is all about the visuals and the erotic potential of the scenarios, whether the MC is male or female. Certainly when I play a male MC AVN, I can sort of imagine myself as the MC. It's more immersive. With a female MC what I enjoy is watching her get into sexy situations. Both are quite satisfying, albeit in different ways. If you guys have never tried a female MC game, all I can say is try one of those titles I've recommended and see what you think.

the story of my life

 

[Arigon]

My view of things in Being a Dik

Why is the MC the "limited edition"?

Spoiler: Isabella explains

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Cool, isn't it? What girls are fighting for the MC. Definitely the banner girls.

Quinn:
She more or less wants to force the MC to vote for her. Teaser, Cum Petition, Women and Drugs. Well.

Sage:
She is giving the MC the freedom to try things first. Steve said it aptly to Josy. (A little bit of living, isn't it?)

Isabella:
Bella wants to win the MC over by giving him what he has been missing all his life. Mother. She cooks him food, teaches the MC how to make pancakes, is there for him when he doesn't know what to do. The mother. Hahaha

Jill:
The good Misses Royce is a lot like Isabella. She protects the MC from the evil Chad and Tybalt. But it seems to me like she lives in the Romeo and Juliet bubble. Hopefully without the ending.

Maya:
The good girl has a lot to worry about. The MC is her white knight. However, she has a big advantage over Quinn, Sage, Isabella and Jill. Maya is in a relationship with Josy.

Josy:
The MC has a crush on her and it's mutual. Josy actually won the catfight in EP1 and EP2. But we know DPC and he makes it exciting again in EP3 and EP4.

Those are actually the facts. Now in EP4 we find Bert's formula when the MC stays with Derek. Only in the Derek route the MC has 4 girls to choose from. With the Sage route, it's still 3 girls. But one girl is definitely Sage. With the Isabella route, only Isabella or Jill remain.

Bert's formula 1-3-2-4-3=4:
1-3-2-4 is season 01. It's actually quite simple.

EP1 (Individual Routes): This could be the beginning of deciding if there will be individual routes for Josy and Maya. It turns out that Josy and the MC have a crush on each other. But Josy is in a relationship, which holds the MC back. However, he is able to explicitly hug Maya. A breakup is already apparent. The MC gets to know all the banner girls and what Isabella cheerfully explained to us in her screenshots begins. All the banner girls begin to take an interest in the MC. "Limited Edition"

EP3 (Throuple 01): The MC and Maya are bonding more and more intensely. Then Josy comes and shocks our snowflake. But Josy and Maya learn that they are both interested in the MC. This makes them a couple, the first throuple is found. Not decided yet, just found for the player.

EP2 ( Josy, Maya and Sage): In EP1 Maya asks the MC if he prefers to go to a party or have a glass of wine with friends at home. In EP2, Josy asks the MC if he would rather drink wine or beer on a date. The two questions go together. Wine represents Royce. He definitely drinks wine on a date with Josy MC. Josy prefers Jill. But my MC wanted beer. The MC and Maya drink beer before making out. The MC also warned Maya about Quinn in EP2. Beer is Sage. EP2 is Josy, Maya and Sage decision. A little Bella still, but as I wrote, Isabella is a singles route.

EP4 (Josy, Maya and Jill): EP4 decides if there will be a romantic threesome of Josy, Maya and the MC. Obviously. But the MC has his date with Jill in EP4. Will she be romantically involved with the couple? I think there is a bomb hidden in her. A romance for all 4 is unlikely. But if we look at it now on the level of friendship between Josy, Maya and MC, it looks better.

Let's get to 3=4 of Bert's formula:
Josy and Maya should be seen as a LI in the romantic Throuple. Throuple, Jill, Sage= 3. On the singles routes, Josy and Maya are considered separate LI's. Josy, Maya, Jill, Sage= 4. Ergo, 3=4.

You're probably wondering what's going on? I think the MC can have sex with Josy, Maya, Jill and Sage without the risk of losing his favorite LI. In EP7, Sage and Jill change their strategy. Both choose Josy's hairstyle in the presence of the MC. Not the color, just the style. They bet on it, so that they come with it into a Throuple with Josy and the MC. Stupid only, that there is Maya. Sage recognizes first that the MC wants Josy and Maya. But that does not stop a Sage. Sage changes her strategy again. She helps Maya because she is the way to the heart of the MC. Because Sage helps Maya, the 3 will show their appreciation and let Sage join in. Why this? Sage is only in college for one more year. Maybe the four of them will have a movie night in the MC's room. He has a big TV and a couch now. There's a big bed in the next room. I'm curious about this "Walk of Shame".

So then the MC has Josy, Maya and Sage. How does then get to Jill. Isabella realizes in EP7 that she misjudged Sage. The MC helps Jill and Isabella against Tybalt. But the crucial thing is that Jill learns that Sage has a good soul. Also, Jill sacrifices herself for the MC. Josy and Maya will be grateful. When they both need their private time, the MC is allowed to take a walk with Jill and Sage. I am curious about this "Walk of Shame".

But the MC first has to dodge some stumbling traps in EP7. The first four have been known since EP2 and just need to be tied into the context of EP7.

The fight against Dawe and the three jocks.

Spoiler: Jocks

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Dawe:
Sage doesn't like Dawe, so the Jocks should be removed from the party in EP7. That sow always pisses in the pool. Hahaha.

Anthony Big A:
A= Ashley, Arieth.
Don't ask Ashley about the strawberry daiquiri. Big A is standing next to it. He already hit on Ashley where she was mad at Derek. The MC should not tell Big A what Josy likes to drink. But the MC should reunite Ashley and Derek. Why.

Big A= Big Anal with Dawe. I'll call it ass beer. And Arieth will be happy too because Big A dumped her for Ashley.

John:
John without hn = Jo, Jo with sy = Josy. Who turns on Josy in EP7? John. I know someone here in this thread who is punching John in the face right now.

Jimmy:
Jimmy has a Poisonous Absinthe hand on his chest. Absinthe=Lily and Heather. Don't fuck Lily. It's fun, but it could have nasty consequences in EP8. Heather is a bitch. Don't give her the stuff. But by the MC telling Heather that Jimmy sleeps on her bed, their relationship gets better. Just don't tell Tommy. The MC can always play ignorant.

Now we've already debunked two out of three "#SisterslnCrime" from HOT's party. Now what about Melanie. The MC has to go into the room a second time to get rid of Chad uand Alex. Sarah and Melanie are left behind. There are two traps. If the MC talks to Melanie, she could tell Alex and Chad that the MC hit on her while they were out of the room. Not good. The second trap is from Melanie mean and Sarah wants to tickle the MC's balls a little. You see the key. Take it only when Alex and Chad are out of the room and Melanie is talking to Sarah, Who took the key. Maybe it was Alex and Chad. But the key is hiding something else. At the party, Sarah's not wearing any panties. What if the key also opens car doors? From Ep5 we know that Sarah once hid a used condom in Melanie's closet. Or was it the other way around?

Riona and Camila could also be a trap. The MC can definitely only make one happy through a drink. So I'm keeping my hands off both of them, as well as Becky. The MC also besides by removing the jocks sets up the new impossible task for hell week. As Jacob said. He is a legend.

I hope that was all the traps from EP7 HOT's party.

Ok...
Wait...
That was damn impressive...
I comment in relatively small and relatively positive ways these days on BaDIK but have been known to go the other way.
I comment much more details on Rebirth, and am involved with those authors in editing to fix grammar and such, but also on the story crafting/theorycrafting.
In that regard, I have to give absolute props here. You have done an analysis that I believe contains invaluable information. It made me look at things in a new light. It also told me that you should be writing the story for BaDIK because I do not think DPC is intelligent enough to actually put the thought in that you have. I think he is falling into his story.. Somehow you have made sense of his stuff and have a coherent path through it, and to push it forward.
Bravo! Sincerely. Bravo!
Peace

 

[lemonfreak]

Personally i have a problem with every game with a female protagonisti, i don' t know how to "play" them

I find keyboard and mouse to be the most effective method

 

[lemonfreak]

... I'd say you guys are overthinking it ...

The appropriate response to 90% of posts in this thread

 

[Blades1138]

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Jill's face in that screen reminds me of a certain meme:


It perfectly illustrates both the structure and expressiveness of her face.

 

[dalli_x]

Jill's face in that screen reminds me of a certain meme:
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It perfectly illustrates both the structure and expressiveness of her face.

Yeah, kind of diabolical.

 

[Pendrell]

I'm spending entirely too much time lurking around in Quinn's room while I wait for episode 8. Anyway it's reminded me that I always thought this was a surprising choice of painting for the girl who has a thing for skulls to have on her wall. It takes up a sizeable chunk of screen real estate so I have to believe it was a deliberate choice from DPC. True colors indeed...

 

[flippityflop]

Yeah, kind of diabolical.

Diabolical, you say?



One of them is the vocalist of Cradle of Filth. I'm not telling you which one.

 

[flippityflop]

I'm spending entirely too much time lurking around in Quinn's room while I wait for episode 8. Anyway it's reminded me that I always thought this was a surprising choice of painting for the girl who has a thing for skulls to have on her wall. It takes up a sizeable chunk of screen real estate so I have to believe it was a deliberate choice from DPC. True colors indeed...

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I don't think we ever got a good look of that wall in previous episodes. Was that painting always there?

 

[Pendrell]

I don't think we ever got a good look of that wall in previous episodes. Was that painting always there?

I think you're right, that's the first look at that wall we've had. Most of the previous angles are looking towards the bed. I find it interesting that someone would only really see that wall if they were invited into her room.

 

[flippityflop]

I think you're right, that's the first look at that wall we've had. Most of the previous angles are looking towards the bed. I find it interesting that someone would only really see that wall if they were invited into her room.

Had to double check it myself or I'd lose my sleep over it otherwise.



Check the reflection in the mirror. Doesn't look like there was a wall back then. Supposedly some flower field wallpaper or something?

 

[Pendrell]

Had to double check it myself or I'd lose my sleep over it otherwise.

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Check the reflection in the mirror. Doesn't look like there was a wall back then. Supposedly some flower field wallpaper or something?

Well spotted. Also score one for useful information in a reflection!

 

[Sexypeasan]

1 Jade
2 Josy
3 Melanie and Sarah.
4 Quinn
5 Sage
After completing the game 2 times these are the girls who do the most craziness in sex, they need an exorcise, they are walking sexual nuclear reactors.

 

[Antonio Montana]

1 Jade
2 Josy
3 Melanie and Sarah.
4 Quinn
5 Sage
After completing the game 2 times these are the girls who do the most craziness in sex, they need an exorcise, they are walking sexual nuclear reactors.

Waiting for episode 8 so that Bella can prove she belongs at the top of this list

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[Sexypeasan]

Waiting for episode 8 so that Bella can prove she belongs at the top of this list

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She also has tendencies to madness but not as much as the others,
for now.

 

[AchedCroissant]

Diabolical, you say?

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One of them is the vocalist of Cradle of Filth. I'm not telling you which one.

ez the left guy is the vocalist

 

[Moniker13]

Waiting for episode 8 so that Bella can prove she belongs at the top of this list

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I love Bella so much. If she doesn't get a happy 1 on 1 ending with the MC I will be severely disappointed. No house fires please.

 

[inevitableandinfinity8]

For now DPC has completely killed Jill, put Sage in a coma.

Considering there are 5 LIs I'd say he's done a good job.





I can't tell you what the problem is either....

the fact is that playing with a male protagonist is easy, essentially you have 2 options: have fun and fuck whoever you can, "fall in love" and devote yourself to one or more LIs

with a female protagonist if I decide to have fun I feel like a pimp, if I decide to be faithful I feel like a nun...

According to me while playing any vn game player put a bit of himself with emotions in mc so If charecter is great of LI most of time it's enough for men to fuck her most desired Li but in FP , man can't put themselves on female but there are some weird people which even enjoy ntr.

But majority makes the rules (thanks god) so MP is most driven force in vn games because most vn player or likely 99% are man.

Waiting for episode 8 so that Bella can prove she belongs at the top of this list

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Good for you mate. I hope her husband don't catch.

 

[Warscared]

and now for a dalli_x moment

Q: you can choose any girl in my rooster! just call it a peace offer!
Q: So who do you want?
MC: i want you!
Q: You already have me you silly thing!
Q: just pick one of my whores! i wanna prove to you i am not jealous!
MC: ok i wouldn´t mind having a go at Sarah´s ass again!
Q: Deal i will let you know when you drop by, love you!
MC: Sure... you have a wierd way of showing it!
Q: thats because i do not have patience for the bullshit!

Maya: Quinn you really fucked me over with that bullshit!
Q: Come on my new hot sister i was just taking the piss!
Q: I Know that what i did was wrong but you pretty barbie types always pissed me off!
Q: with your i am better then you sewer rats attitude, no drugs no booze no sex,
Q: i just wanted to show you that life could be far more then that!
Maya: Maybe but you made me sorry if you could only understand how much i need to get away from my fathers grasp!
Maya: I have almost ruined my love life and almost lost my brother and my best friend MC because of his bullshit! i hate my father!
Q: lol, we are really totally opposites! my father had all the flaws in the world but he loved me!
Q: your on the other hand is like the perfect father except that he does not love you!
Maya: i almost saw a light at the end of the tunnel when i heard about the tuiton!
Q: if you ever see the light run away from it! its either the drugs taking over or a train about to smash you,
Q: whatever it is in the end if you run to it you will end up dead!
Q: you know the tuiton talk was not all a lie but it comes with strings attached!
Maya: you mean i can still get it?
Q: Nahh you do not have what it takes! i already ruined your life enough!
Maya: Please Quinn, i am miserable!
Maya: if there´s a chance at least let me have all the cards so i can take my own decisions!
Q: sorry its not for you and i already risked loosing Sage over this bullshit!
Q: I learned my lesson!
Maya: Please Q! i am an adult i can take my own decisions!
Q: If thats what you really want i will keep you posted!
Q: But you realise what it is right?
Maya: a drug run?
Q: WTF! what kind of drug run makes that amount of money?
Q: lol, really girl you can not fathom what would make a man pay that kind of money?
Maya: you mean, omg!
Q: exactly!
Q: as a good feminist you should take over your sexuality and turn it into your best weapon against the patriarchy!
Q: that opressive religious right wing biggoted pathriarchy!
Maya: I just call it Patrick... ok if you can get me the tuiton for this semester i will do it!
Maya: i deserve to be happy!
Maya: I can not keep risking loosing the people i love over my fathers hatred for those who are different!

Q: Tommy i need your help!
Q: If you help me i will forgive you for your bullshit!
Q: what say you?
Tommy: Ok Q! what do we need to do?
Q: there´s a fucker that robbed me recently! My friend Buddy tracked him down!
Q: I need your help to take care of bussiness!
Q: if i get back my 5k i will provide you with the drugs you need!
Tommy: Point me in the the direction that needs to be crushed and stay out of my way!
Q: that´s my boy!

Q: ffs Tommy don´t kill the poor crack head!
Q: I just wanted to teach him a lesson, not this whatever it is!
Tommy: sorry Q i guess i got carried away!
Q: lets get out of here! and we need to clean you up of all this dudes blood!
Q: how can you make such a mess?
Tommy: i guess i was having fun! just like a little kid playing in the mud!

Q: Maya my deer sister i got an envelope for you!
Maya: what is it Q? I need to study!
Q: its what you asked of me!
Q: are you still ready?
Maya: you mean... really?
Q: Sure count it up!
Maya: But... its so much money!
Q: Enough for your 1st semester! it smells of freedom!
Q: But the real question remains! can you do it?
Maya: if i keep going down this path only way out is suicide!
Maya: You can not understand how much Patrick fucked me over!
Maya: he forced Derek to account all his money so he can not spare me none!
Maya: and he told me that besides my previous... lover! i gotta stop seeing the MC!
Maya: wtf, no girls no boys wtf does he want? for me to become a nun and die a virgin in a convent?
Q: Whoaa girl, Girls? miss goody two shoes likes to lick the carpet!
Maya: oh fuck! Q, you can not share it with anyone!
Q: relax girl i do not judge! i am very prone to ... enjoying the female touch now and then!
Q: i mean its not a dick, its not the same satisfaction as getting a dude har, but it can be conforting!
Q: call it a dick diet goes through a female softer touches!
Maya: i hated you when i met you!
Q: if you did not, you would have been surprising!
Q: i discovered that if you show your worst from the start!
Q: you weed out those that will not stick around!
Q: and life as taught me that having people around is asking to be betrayed!
Maya: perhaps i can learn a few things from you!
Q: ok so 2 days from now, highscale motel!
Q: you can keep the money! i know you are a girl of your own word!
Q: just do not blame me if it does not turn out as you expect!
Maya: but what if the man turn violent?
Q: i will have a bouncer on the next room!
Q: besides the person that as asked me as requested secrecy!
Q: married man are always the easiest!
Q: with some luck you will not even have to fuck him!
Maya: How come?
Q: Many man, particulary the ones that pay these amounts most of the times just want to feel apreciated!
Q: you would be surprised how many times just holding them is enough!
Q: powerfull inteligent man with loads of spare cash and empty lifes!
Q: i pity them, they burned everything in their lifes for their status and money!
Q: and now they try to buy what they forgot to build!
Maya: that seems odd!
Q: some of us live life! others build their lifes!
Q: the one´s that build their lives forgot to live it,
Q: and so they now seek the thrills and love they never had when they where building them!
Maya: that is... enlightening!

2 days later
MC: oh a message from Q!
MC: alright, time to get my rocks on!
MC: thanks Q! i really love Maya but she is kind of blue balling me lately!
Q: do not worry sweety! mommy Q as got you covered!
Q: Sarah is waiting for you on the this room!

MC enters the rooms its lightly lit!
MC: Hey Sarah why are the lights off?
Maya: MC, WTF... ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME?
Maya: you son of a bitch!
MC: WTF
Maya: with that whore Sarah none the less?
Maya: you said you could not help me with my tuition but you can spend it on whores?
MC: WTF... MAYA?
Maya: I hate you!
Maya: *crying* i never want to see you again!
Maya: boys are all the same gross things!
MC: WTF... MAYA? WTF
Maya: i am leaving! enjoy your whores you cheating asshole!

mc crying in the corner
MC: what just happened?
Q: Told you idiot that all girls are liers!
MC: You set this up?
Q: you refused to believe me!
Q: many will love you! but few will ever tell you the trufh!
MC: How could i have done this to her?
MC: i think i hurt her really bad!
Q: so we are just ignoring the fact that she was willing to whore herlself out?
MC: but why would she do it?
Q: her hate of her father was greater then her love for you!
Q: i guess she is smarter then you!
MC: cut the crap Q! this is just sickening!
Q: oh she payed for her tuiton!
Q: so at least now you can stop boring me with her tuiton money issues!
MC: is it all for money?
Q: for her? probably! i mean money is freedom!
MC: and for you?
Q: Money i have enough daddy saved enough,
Q. for me is showing you that only i will love you enough to show you who i trully am!
Q: many will love you
Q: but only i can love you showing you the truth!
Q: you can be with others! but you can only love me!
MC: Leave me alone Q! you are sick!

after the MC left!

Q: did not go as planed... i guess i will have to get him the hard way!

MC walks around town trying to get his head in order!

MC: enters Josy´s room
Josy: OH QUINN HOW CAN YOU DO THAT WITH YOUR TONGUE!
Josy: I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!
MC: wtf!
Q: Join in, idiot!
Josy: MC? i can explain... she was just helping me with... with...
Q: yes?
Josy: Oh fuck it! She was just helping me with getting an orgasm!
Josy: I mean you and Maya have been neglecting me!
MC. WTF
Q: you are repeating yourself idiot!
Q: join in or butt out!
MC: If i go to Jill will i find you fucking with her?
Q: good luck with that iceberg!
Q: But if you pick her i will seduce her!

MC: Ok Q i will be your boyfriend!
MC: But can you please stop fucking with the people i love?
Q: and i had assumed you were into threesomes!
Q: Ok silly! i am so happy!
Q: and do not worry you can fuck as many bitches as you want!
Q: But remember you are only allowed to fall in love with me!
MC: Yes, Quinn!
Q: YEASHHHHHHHHHHH! Q rules bitches drewl!

 

[shazba]

and now for a dalli_x moment

Q: you can choose any girl in my rooster! just call it a peace offer!
Q: So who do you want?
MC: i want you!
Q: You already have me you silly thing!
Q: just pick one of my whores! i wanna prove to you i am not jealous!
MC: ok i wouldn´t mind having a go at Sarah´s ass again!
Q: Deal i will let you know when you drop by, love you!
MC: Sure... you have a wierd way of showing it!
Q: thats because i do not have patience for the bullshit!

Maya: Quinn you really fucked me over with that bullshit!
Q: Come on my new hot sister i was just taking the piss!
Q: I Know that what i did was wrong but you pretty barbie types always pissed me off!
Q: with your i am better then you sewer rats attitude, no drugs no booze no sex,
Q: i just wanted to show you that life could be far more then that!
Maya: Maybe but you made me sorry if you could only understand how much i need to get away from my fathers grasp!
Maya: I have almost ruined my love life and almost lost my brother and my best friend MC because of his bullshit! i hate my father!
Q: lol, we are really totally opposites! my father had all the flaws in the world but he loved me!
Q: your on the other hand is like the perfect father except that he does not love you!
Maya: i almost saw a light at the end of the tunnel when i heard about the tuiton!
Q: if you ever see the light run away from it! its either the drugs taking over or a train about to smash you,
Q: whatever it is in the end if you run to it you will end up dead!
Q: you know the tuiton talk was not all a lie but it comes with strings attached!
Maya: you mean i can still get it?
Q: Nahh you do not have what it takes! i already ruined your life enough!
Maya: Please Quinn, i am miserable!
Maya: if there´s a chance at least let me have all the cards so i can take my own decisions!
Q: sorry its not for you and i already risked loosing Sage over this bullshit!
Q: I learned my lesson!
Maya: Please Q! i am an adult i can take my own decisions!
Q: If thats what you really want i will keep you posted!
Q: But you realise what it is right?
Maya: a drug run?
Q: WTF! what kind of drug run makes that amount of money?
Q: lol, really girl you can not fathom what would make a man pay that kind of money?
Maya: you mean, omg!
Q: exactly!
Q: as a good feminist you should take over your sexuality and turn it into your best weapon against the patriarchy!
Q: that opressive religious right wing biggoted pathriarchy!
Maya: I just call it Patrick... ok if you can get me the tuiton for this semester i will do it!
Maya: i deserve to be happy!
Maya: I can not keep risking loosing the people i love over my fathers hatred for those who are different!

Q: Tommy i need your help!
Q: If you help me i will forgive you for your bullshit!
Q: what say you?
Tommy: Ok Q! what do we need to do?
Q: there´s a fucker that robbed me recently! My friend Buddy tracked him down!
Q: I need your help to take care of bussiness!
Q: if i get back my 5k i will provide you with the drugs you need!
Tommy: Point me in the the direction that needs to be crushed and stay out of my way!
Q: that´s my boy!

Q: ffs Tommy don´t kill the poor crack head!
Q: I just wanted to teach him a lesson, not this whatever it is!
Tommy: sorry Q i guess i got carried away!
Q: lets get out of here! and we need to clean you up of all this dudes blood!
Q: how can you make such a mess?
Tommy: i guess i was having fun! just like a little kid playing in the mud!

Q: Maya my deer sister i got an envelope for you!
Maya: what is it Q? I need to study!
Q: its what you asked of me!
Q: are you still ready?
Maya: you mean... really?
Q: Sure count it up!
Maya: But... its so much money!
Q: Enough for your 1st semester! it smells of freedom!
Q: But the real question remains! can you do it?
Maya: if i keep going down this path only way out is suicide!
Maya: You can not understand how much Patrick fucked me over!
Maya: he forced Derek to account all his money so he can not spare me none!
Maya: and he told me that besides my previous... lover! i gotta stop seeing the MC!
Maya: wtf, no girls no boys wtf does he want? for me to become a nun and die a virgin in a convent?
Q: Whoaa girl, Girls? miss goody two shoes likes to lick the carpet!
Maya: oh fuck! Q, you can not share it with anyone!
Q: relax girl i do not judge! i am very prone to ... enjoying the female touch now and then!
Q: i mean its not a dick, its not the same satisfaction as getting a dude har, but it can be conforting!
Q: call it a dick diet goes through a female softer touches!
Maya: i hated you when i met you!
Q: if you did not, you would have been surprising!
Q: i discovered that if you show your worst from the start!
Q: you weed out those that will not stick around!
Q: and life as taught me that having people around is asking to be betrayed!
Maya: perhaps i can learn a few things from you!
Q: ok so 2 days from now, highscale motel!
Q: you can keep the money! i know you are a girl of your own word!
Q: just do not blame me if it does not turn out as you expect!
Maya: but what if the man turn violent?
Q: i will have a bouncer on the next room!
Q: besides the person that as asked me as requested secrecy!
Q: married man are always the easiest!
Q: with some luck you will not even have to fuck him!
Maya: How come?
Q: Many man, particulary the ones that pay these amounts most of the times just want to feel apreciated!
Q: you would be surprised how many times just holding them is enough!
Q: powerfull inteligent man with loads of spare cash and empty lifes!
Q: i pity them, they burned everything in their lifes for their status and money!
Q: and now they try to buy what they forgot to build!
Maya: that seems odd!
Q: some of us live life! others build their lifes!
Q: the one´s that build their lives forgot to live it,
Q: and so they now seek the thrills and love they never had when they where building them!
Maya: that is... enlightening!

2 days later
MC: oh a message from Q!
MC: alright, time to get my rocks on!
MC: thanks Q! i really love Maya but she is kind of blue balling me lately!
Q: do not worry sweety! mommy Q as got you covered!
Q: Sarah is waiting for you on the this room!

MC enters the rooms its lightly lit!
MC: Hey Sarah why are the lights off?
Maya: MC, WTF... ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME?
Maya: you son of a bitch!
MC: WTF
Maya: with that whore Sarah none the less?
Maya: you said you could not help me with my tuition but you can spend it on whores?
MC: WTF... MAYA?
Maya: I hate you!
Maya: *crying* i never want to see you again!
Maya: boys are all the same gross things!
MC: WTF... MAYA? WTF
Maya: i am leaving! enjoy your whores you cheating asshole!

mc crying in the corner
MC: what just happened?
Q: Told you idiot that all girls are liers!
MC: You set this up?
Q: you refused to believe me!
Q: many will love you! but few will ever tell you the trufh!
MC: How could i have done this to her?
MC: i think i hurt her really bad!
Q: so we are just ignoring the fact that she was willing to whore herlself out?
MC: but why would she do it?
Q: her hate of her father was greater then her love for you!
Q: i guess she is smarter then you!
MC: cut the crap Q! this is just sickening!
Q: oh she payed for her tuiton!
Q: so at least now you can stop boring me with her tuiton money issues!
MC: is it all for money?
Q: for her? probably! i mean money is freedom!
MC: and for you?
Q: Money i have enough daddy saved enough,
Q. for me is showing you that only i will love you enough to show you who i trully am!
Q: many will love you
Q: but only i can love you showing you the truth!
Q: you can be with others! but you can only love me!
MC: Leave me alone Q! you are sick!

after the MC left!

Q: did not go as planed... i guess i will have to get him the hard way!

MC walks around town trying to get his head in order!

MC: enters Josy´s room
Josy: OH QUINN HOW CAN YOU DO THAT WITH YOUR TONGUE!
Josy: I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!
MC: wtf!
Q: Join in, idiot!
Josy: MC? i can explain... she was just helping me with... with...
Q: yes?
Josy: Oh fuck it! She was just helping me with getting an orgasm!
Josy: I mean you and Maya have been neglecting me!
MC. WTF
Q: you are repeating yourself idiot!
Q: join in or butt out!
MC: If i go to Jill will i find you fucking with her?
Q: good luck with that iceberg!
Q: But if you pick her i will seduce her!

MC: Ok Q i will be your boyfriend!
MC: But can you please stop fucking with the people i love?
Q: and i had assumed you were into threesomes!
Q: Ok silly! i am so happy!
Q: and do not worry you can fuck as many bitches as you want!
Q: But remember you are only allowed to fall in love with me!
MC: Yes, Quinn!
Q: YEASHHHHHHHHHHH! Q rules bitches drewl!

That truly was some Quin-esque mind-fuckery!

Maya: i almost saw a light at the end of the tunnel when i heard about the tuiton!
Q: if you ever see the light run away from it! its either the drugs taking over or a train about to smash you,

Laughed at this one.

Q: that opressive religious right wing biggoted pathriarchy!
Maya: I just call it Patrick...

Another golden moment.

Q: you can keep the money! i know you are a girl of your own word!

Quinn might have the wrong impression of Maya.

Q: some of us live life! others build their lifes!
Q: the one´s that build their lives forgot to live it,

So fucking deep!