VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[RonWeasleyJr]

DPC says he/she will be trying some different things for the interlude. I hope we get narration from Zoey.

I always loved narrators in hentai VN's, the first person narration in the X-Change games is great and really erotic:

"As both men pumped into me, a loud ringing erupted in my ears as waves of pleasure washed over me.

'Oh God, I'm cumming!'

Inside my uterus, a hot flow of semen."

 

[godkingxerxes]

I think her personal development is good considering she is an introvert. I just remember the Cluck tag that Maya initiated, if only unintentionally. "Fuck you Dawe." She even apologizes right after. But she did take a step forward. In EP8, the progress of all the LI's is actually easy to see.

Well, except for Quinn. She's making progress interpersonally, but she's regressing in terms of her drug dealing, through no fault of her own. It's Lily's fault, who somehow isn't at fault because she's just looking for a cheaper drug supplier and finds it in Quinn. The real problem is caused by Vinny, who sells the drugs to the Pink Rose Girls at too high a price. But Vinny is not going to stand idly by while Quinn serves his customers. So we can assume that DPC will stage a new drama with Quinn and Lily at this point.

Compare my objective paragraph about Quinn, Lily and Vinny with your posts about Maya.

Quinn, Lily and Vinnie all have progressive and interesting stories going forward. Maya doesn't.

I am looking forward to the inevitable confrontation between Quinn and Vinnie. Going to be awesome.

 

[Kellermann]

After absences, it's good to see some things never change: debates about our girl Maya.
Hope everyone had a happy Saturnalia!

I'm in such a fine mood that I hope a happy new year for all the characters in game, even the ones I occasionally loathe.

 

[Laport Deminis]

Of course to claim that Maya is helpless couse she doesnt fix her problems, needs that there is actually a solution on Maya hands. Otherwise is pointless.
Now first forget what you know about college education. In my country for example is totally free, so the whole problem is nonsense. In Badik world things doesnt work like in your country. In Badik world a coca-cola cost the same than Camila's ass.
So what we know about paying education?. We don't know about a single student who pays their education, the only exception are thoose who became prostitutes.
So, either you completely make out an obvious solution for Maya, in orther to make her inactivity absurd, even if that's means to unnecesary make the plot senseless....

Or you don't know a solution... just like Maya...

Or you claim Maya should prostitute herself, and you hate her because she doesn't become a prostitute. She should be out of the game and the college couse she doesn't want to be a prostitute:

Congratulations guys, you got:

The Burke golden award:

 

[Canto Forte]

How is she awkword? Are boys not swoonig over her?
She likes to crush hearts and get both guys and girls hot for her, a real hoe.
In the shade of being so popular, her gold digging goes on unnoticed.
The perks of changing partners so often.
She is for a long time a sorority girl, part of a dozen fantastic looking girls
the boy frats use for sex and drugs and happy times.
How is she different or feeling any social pressure is beyond MC.

 

[Canto Forte]

You do not need to change a thing .. she is so used to bang josy behind her father back
then bang MC in his face that you can pull this whole franchise off no problem.

Of course to claim that Maya is helpless couse she doesnt fix her problems, needs that there is actually a solution on Maya hands. Otherwise is pointless.
Now first forget what you know about college education. In my country for example is totally free, so the whole problem is nonsense. In Badik world things doesnt work like in your country. In Badik world a coca-cola cost the same than Camila's ass.
So what we know about paying education. We son't know about a single student who pays their education, the only exception are thoose who became prostitutes.
So, either you completely make out an obvious solution for Maya,so her inactivity is absurd, even if that's means to unnecesary make the plot senseless....

Or you claim Maya should prostitute herself, and you hate her because she doesn't become a prostitute. She should be out of the game and the college couse she doesn't want to be a prostitute:

Congratulations guys, you got:

The Burke golden award:

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[Laport Deminis]

she is so used to bang josy behind her father back

The guts of that girl!!!!! She dare to choose her own sexual partners!!!!

 

[kyrlian]

I dont think Maya is 'pretending to be good'. Her priority is to escape her father and she will do what she has to for that. In other aspects she has better morals than Quinn for sure (who has none), so maybe you mistake that for pretending to be good.

What kind of morals has Maya? she betrays her values joining 'a bunch of sluts'(her words) to get money from the HOTs and gets angry when there is none because she believes she is entitled to the free tuition and that was the sole purpose of pledging, yeah she doesn't even stay for free acommodation (that may help her) and doesn't mind to say byebye to the other HOTs, who are kind to her without even knowing her because you know she is the damsel in distress.

She gets angry at least twice with poor Josy who is helping her, she lies, asks for honesty while being dishonest and plays the victim when needed to get what she wants, nothing is ever her fault neither she does something to solve her problems, she just waits for others to solve them. She is not like her brother who is willing to help and work.

 

[felicemastronzo]

After absences, it's good to see some things never change: debates about our girl Maya.
Hope everyone had a happy Saturnalia!

I'm in such a fine mood that I hope a happy new year for all the characters in game, even the ones I occasionally loathe.

there are too few Kellermann s in this world

 

[Warscared]

Of course to claim that Maya is helpless couse she doesnt fix her problems, needs that there is actually a solution on Maya hands. Otherwise is pointless.
Now first forget what you know about college education. In my country for example is totally free, so the whole problem is nonsense. In Badik world things doesnt work like in your country. In Badik world a coca-cola cost the same than Camila's ass.
So what we know about paying education?. We don't know about a single student who pays their education, the only exception are thoose who became prostitutes.
So, either you completely make out an obvious solution for Maya, in orther to make her inactivity absurd, even if that's means to unnecesary make the plot senseless....

Or you don't know a solution... just like Maya...

Or you claim Maya should prostitute herself, and you hate her because she doesn't become a prostitute. She should be out of the game and the college couse she doesn't want to be a prostitute:

Congratulations guys, you got:

The Burke golden award:

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thank you, thank you, thank you!

to win this prestigious award as been a long life dream of mine ever since i heard of it like 5 minutes ago!

i would like to thank my father,
and ofc my mother,
and ofc MR. Johnson the bartender
who helped my father get my mother drunk!

because seriously it could not have been love
or else they would have not divorced
and me spending my life broken, between 2 homes!

but on serious note Heycock she could get a job waiting tables or working as a gym receptionist!
that she does not even consider it makes her a weak minded character prone to be abused by exploiters

just thank DPC that there is no corruption path from the MC and the Burke and Quinn one´s are not credible or else she would be perfect to go down on Burke literally!

 

[Laport Deminis]

but on serious note @Heycock she could get a job waiting tables or working as a gym receptionist!
that she does not even consider it makes her a weak minded character prone to be abused by exploiters

Yeah, you totally deserve the award.
On a serious note. You asume that she can afford to pay two college tuition (thats what she needs) with a minimum wage job.
Again in my country you can do it couse you would need 0 dollars. In Chile for example is completely imposible. In Badik world... what makes you think thats a posibility?
The only thing you achieve by doing so is to ruin Maya as a character and to make the entire plot absurd. Not a single one of the characters Maya talk with even suggest that posibility. Sage, Josy, even the MC are so dumb they can't think an obvious solution for themselfs and sugest to her friend. So you ruin the entire plot.... for what?

 

[Canto Forte]

Josy did it ... what a huge disrespect to leave her in a dead end job with that molesting boss son while going off on daddy money ... then having the gaull to string her along.

She is a gold digger. She has nothing to do with her so called tuition.
All she does is fkk around and pretend to be a sorority hoe,
yeah, like any cheer leader, even the series shows them as the hoes they are.

So instead of being a hoe on her own dough,
she hoes around on her fmily money.

Ever heard o student loans?
They exist.

Yeah, you totally deserve the award.
On a serious note. You asume that she can afford to pay two college tuition (thats what she needs) with a minimum wage job.
Again in my country you can do it couse you would need 0 dollars. In Chile for example is completely imposible. In Badik world... what makes you think thats a posibility?
The only thing you achieve by doing so is to ruin Maya as a character and to make the entire plot absurd. Not a single one of the characters Maya talk with even suggest that posibility. Sage, Josy, even the MC are so dumb they can't think an obvious solution for themselfs and sugest to her friend. So you ruin the entire plot.... for what?

 

[Laport Deminis]

Josy did it ... what a huge disrespect to leave her in a dead end job with that molesting boss son while going off on daddy money ... then having the gaull to string her along.

No she didn't. She had a job but is her father who pays her college. Just like the MC also had a job but he also took a loan.

She is a gold digger. She has nothing to do with her so called tuition.

Well, then she really sucks as gold digging. I mean the MC... come on girl.

Ever heard o student loans?

Yeah, but she already got one. Now she needs a loan to both pay her loan and her college, and no bank in the world will give that loan.

 

[Canto Forte]

She never chose anyone .. she fkks all of them .. with the promise of dough for tuition,
she could be burke hoe day in and day out. Maybe he will just buy her the diploma after
1 year of fkking non stop. What a gorgeous dedicated hoe!

The guts of that girl!!!!! She dare to choose her own sexual partners!!!!

 

[Afapp]

as I implied previously, trying to explain something to you is rocket science.
so I'll just leave you with a quote of one of your posts to someone else.
cheers bud

This Fiery redhead can explain things to J.A.L.

 

[Laport Deminis]

she fkks all of them .. with the promise of dough for tuition,

Yeah, bro, we are kinda playing different games here... In the game i am playing Maya fucks not "all" just two, and she does it for free, and one of them is also poor, and she knows it. So, i dont know bro...

 

[JennyW]

as long as that means this thread talks for once about something it isn't Maya.

Oh yes, Maya also sucks, she is one of the most boring characters. But this is my opinion.

 

[dalli_x]

I agree her situation with her father is bad.
But my problem with her is what she herself is doing about it, she went to HOTs for only one reason and when she find out that the rumors are false (shocker) she hit Quinn and basically insulted whole sorority and was pissed (not for long but still) at Josy that she wants to stay there, like what? Just because Maya left, Josy doesn't have to.. That's selfish.

What if Sage won't be able to help her? She will be pissed at her to?
Or if she won't be able to help her because of mc previous action (with Jade for example) will she be pissed at MC to?

She expects help but she herself doesn't do anything to get out of the situation.

Maya saw tuition as her way out. In EP8, Maya tells Josy that she was wrong to put all her eggs in one basket.

The slap in the face to Quinn was justified in that Quinn didn't rule out the rumor to Maya. She is the vice president of HOT's, so she has some credibility status.

Yes, she offended all the sisters because none had the decency to tell her the truth, and they played her to some degree. Even the HOT sisters later see it that way. Sarah and Ashley apologize to Maya personally and on behalf of most of the other sisters. Only one doesn't. Why, really? Does Quinn know she did something wrong and doesn't want to admit it, perhaps out of false pride. Maya and Josy's list was very different from the others.

At the end of EP4, Josy says she would love to have the college experience of a sorority, but Maya is a higher priority for her. At the end of EP6, Maya learns that the college tuition was a lie (a rumor). Logically, she is emotionally upset about this. An hour later (EP7), Josy lets Maya know that she doesn't mind living at the HOTs. But Maya is staying there, too. It's not a big deal to her. But if you look at Maya's emotional state an hour ago at the HOTs, her reaction is humanly understandable, because at this point she's not able to really think rationally. Also, Josy blames herself for saying that. Before I write the word selfishness again, it's worth re-reading the beginning of this paragraph.

Maya tells Sage beforehand that she won't be disappointed if it doesn't work out; on the contrary, she thanks Sage for trying to help her.

What do you want her to do? Work? What job would a young girl with no degree and no work experience get? Would the pay be enough for food, shelter, and tuition? Please remain objective. Maya does not have many options to get out of this situation without help. Now again I read the arguments that Camila is doing it and Mona is at least trying. She can sell drugs too. Lol. Do you guys want Maya to become a concurent for Quinn?

 

[Canto Forte]

Will you go forth with the trio till the end?
Tried any other routes?
What do you see MC end game as?

 

[JennyW]

And that was the last time we heard from JennyW