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I suppose DPC working on Rooster clucks is a good sign. Let's hope we get some good numbers tomorrow to back that up.
I suppose DPC working on Rooster clucks is a good sign. Let's hope we get some good numbers tomorrow to back that up.
I don't care for the flood of memes that happen here but I'm glad I saw that one. It even got a chuckle, so thanks.
Status Update Episode 9
This week consisted of posing static renders, making most art for Rooster + writing several Rooster posts, coding, writing a few scenes, polishing dialogue, and PC maintenance.
Regarding Rooster posts, several of them are ok for posting on Twitter. It was a previous concern that they would spoil too much, and I won't post the ones that do. You can look forward to more Twitter contentYou must be registered to see the links.
Since my static render queue has been pretty big lately, I made a PC slave render some of it this week instead of animations. Because of this, I'll likely spend some time next week play-testing parts of the episode and getting a feel for it.
I'm still working on free-roam event renders and will do so for several more weeks.
To put the content of the free-roam events into perspective, the biggest one in the episode currently has more than 900 renders and will go over 1000. Making it at least 100-200 renders bigger than the biggest one in Season 1/2 (Episode 7, HOTs party).
I will work on the final free-roam event of the episode next week. I've still got work to do in the others, but I feel I get the most momentum if I push on with this. Plenty of art remains to be produced.
I'll try to make an updated and detailed progress report for next week's status update to show you what work remains in percentages and estimates. It would also benefit me to grasp how far along the development is.
Have a nice weekend
Dr PinkCake
Don't you hate it when you're reading a post that references another post and you click the referenced post and then end up reading surrounding posts, then you start "liking" the posts and then realise these posts are fucking thousands of years old! Then you have to decide, do you unlike them to avoid looking like some weird stalker, or do you leave the likes standing, I mean you liked them for a reason right, they deserved that like! Fuck this First World and its dilemmas, is just doing my head in!
Anyway...
Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
I mean the mc got to come deep, deep inside Jill's womb (you came inside her didn't you, of course your did, no one saves their balls for 8 seasons and then cums on a girl's tits just for her to wipe it off...), but was the scene all it needed to be?
So it's time for a bit of a breakdown. It's probably already been done, hell I probably already did it 5000+ pages ago, but I don't remember... So humor me...
It definitely started off right:
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So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
mc: "(What's going on?)"
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
mc: "(Oh fuck yes!!)"
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
mc: "Wanna go to bed?"
As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Jill: "Ok."
Umm... way to sound enthusiastic Jill. He didn't just ask "Would you'd like fries with that?" He's going to fuck you, girl, and fuck you hard! If she answered, "Yeah, whatever..." it wouldn't have sounded any less enthusiastic. Maybe a, "Yes!! I... I mean yes, I want to." Would be more like the Jillybean we know and love.
Alright, I'll chalk it up to nerves, she was clamping her ass tight to avoid shitting herself, so maybe she wasn't thinking straight.
Anyway, we've missed a critical step here.
Right now, while they were standing up, removing their clothing, this is when the mc should have removed her bra. You don't wait until you're lying down to remove a girl's bra, especially if it's the first time you're seeing the goods up front. This is your opportunity to see them hanging as god intended, in all their untouched spender, perfectly protruding from a vertical chest. Some groping and sucking (this has nothing to do with that horrible Madame choice...), and then, when your girl starts to get worked up, you stop. Yeah you stop, that gives her the opportunity to say, "Don't stop..." and then you say, "Wanna go to bed?"
Anyway, after that, things proceed fine. They lay on the bed, make out a bit over their clothes, and we get that classic exchange:
mc: "You are so beautiful."
To which our intellectual hottie responds:
Jill: "You too."
Classic Jill with her foot in her mouth (figuratively speaking), stumbling over her words when she's worked up.
Then out come her tits. Her tits were the focus of this part, which makes sense, but I would have liked to see more of Jill's reaction, both her lust and her shyness. We're assuming this is the first time a guy has seen her in this state, it would have been fun to see her internal reaction (we hear her thoughts in previous encounters where she's freaking out), and maybe had her instinctually trying to cover up as the mc coaxes her to give him an eyeful.
Then bam, she's deftly removed the mc's boxes in two frames, and she's a little more nervous now due to the size of his cock. She has to compliment the size of his cock, every other girl has.
Then she starts to play with it (his dick I mean, not the mc's guitar... Why the fuck are you even thinking about his guitar right now, fucking hell...); she just dives straight in and she's very serious about it. Her stare is almost analytical, I'd suggest if she were with Tybalt she'd possibly pull out a magnifying glass.
Then it's time for her remaining garments to be removed. So off they come while she bites her lower lip and looks the mc in the eyes. I wouldn't have it any other way.
After which the mc proceeds to play with her cunt. Now we get a bit more intimate with Jill's thoughts. Typical confused thoughts that we've come to expect whenever the mc is working her up.
Meanwhile the mc seems like he's ticking boxes on a checklist:
mc: "(She's wet... That's good.)"mc: "(She enjoys it... Good.)"
It's important to read your girl's responses, but he's making it almost clinical...
mc: "Ok, this one passes. Next!"
Then it's time to fuck, and Jill kinda panics that he's not wearing protection. Almost the first time in the entire game (other than Neil's insistences and that one scene with Maya) that someone even gives a shit about protection, and she chooses not to say anything. That was a bit of a strange one, that she thought about it and then just forgot about it.
Now we get lots of fucking in different positions, mostly with Jill just lying prone and the mc doing all the work, and he gets to lick her asshole which was cool.
Then we segue into some horse riding, the banter from which is a bit of fun, and this includes probably the most flattering shot ever of Jill with her mouth open (of course she hasn't given the mc a blow job yet, so that'll probably soar to the top of the "Good Renders of Jill with Her Mouth Open" list when that occurs):
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Then, as the mc warns Jill that he's about to explode, Jill replies in her "Propper" way:
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It's not like she was going to say:
Jill: "Cum in my fucking pussy!"You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Finally the mc blow his copious, steaming hot load deep inside Jill (there's no choice, if you get the option to "cum outside", your game is probably bugged). And she doesn't even give a shit. She just lies there grinning like a fucking idiot, so does the mc for that matter:
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And then we get all that, "Are you my boyfriend..." "... it's my destiny that my sister carked it (Aussie slang for "kicked the bucket)..." bullshit which we'll ignore for this post.
And there you have it.
The mc finally got to fuck Jill in the 8th episode of the game. It was a long haul. Was it the payoff you were looking for?
All the joking aside, I thought it was ok, but I would have liked Jill to be a little more bashful. Even though she initiated it, it would have been cool if the mc had to coax her a bit.
She kinda went from someone who was a nervous wreck about sex, to someone who was inexperienced but wasn't too fussed when it finally came down to it.
Maybe that's a good thing; none of the scenes in the game come across too creepy (unlike pretty much every scene in every other AVN). So coercing Jill might leave some people feeling that it wasn't right.
On a somewhat side note, I'm loving that I predicted the "unofficial" name of the episode a while back.![]()
Oh yeah, I totally meant to talk about the absence of her orgasm but forgot.Well i liked the scene overall...
First of all, that Jill is very unsecure about everything (not just sex) was transported very well.
And it was shown alittle bit that the MC didnt had sex for years with lot of girls too i think... if youre on the Jill only path, the only other girl was Zoey for him. In this regard the MC was doing a good job to ease her into sex i think. Was done good by DPC too...
That Jill would be very passive was to be expected. Jill is unsecure and she just lets things "happen" to her and not taking it in her own hands... she even wanted to have sex with him in episode 7 and just let things happen cause she wasnt able to speak out her feelings and the mc was gone.
Overall i whished it would be more "intimate" more kissing and cuddle-sex i would call it... more "romantic" and not that "klinic" like it was, sometimes it felt like they just getting over with it... but well, it wasnt perfect, but not bad either.
Ah and... well Jill didnt orgasm. But i thaught about it, and well... lets be honest... most girls dont experience an orgasm her first time, and of course... if youre that unsecure und nervous, how can you let loose to have an orgasm? So i think it was pretty realistic that she doesnt had one... But what bothers me about it, it wasnt mentioned in any way... well lets hope she doesnt become a riona 2.0![]()
Well, not much to see here but perhaps we'll get a proper sense of what's left next week.Status Update Episode 9
This week consisted of posing static renders, making most art for Rooster + writing several Rooster posts, coding, writing a few scenes, polishing dialogue, and PC maintenance.
Regarding Rooster posts, several of them are ok for posting on Twitter. It was a previous concern that they would spoil too much, and I won't post the ones that do. You can look forward to more Twitter contentYou must be registered to see the links.
Since my static render queue has been pretty big lately, I made a PC slave render some of it this week instead of animations. Because of this, I'll likely spend some time next week play-testing parts of the episode and getting a feel for it.
I'm still working on free-roam event renders and will do so for several more weeks.
To put the content of the free-roam events into perspective, the biggest one in the episode currently has more than 900 renders and will go over 1000. Making it at least 100-200 renders bigger than the biggest one in Season 1/2 (Episode 7, HOTs party).
I will work on the final free-roam event of the episode next week. I've still got work to do in the others, but I feel I get the most momentum if I push on with this. Plenty of art remains to be produced.
I'll try to make an updated and detailed progress report for next week's status update to show you what work remains in percentages and estimates. It would also benefit me to grasp how far along the development is.
Have a nice weekend
Dr PinkCake
Jill's big scene wasn't perfect, but I thought it delivered where it needed to. I'd certainly have preferred if the MC spent a little more time getting some enthusiasm going with Jill, but the awkward passivism made sense for the girl who clearly had some hang-ups to work through. More importantly, it gives us plenty of room to grow in future episodes. Also, while I'm none too keen on Jill's destiny fixation, I very much appreciated the way she verified she and the MC *are* an item now. It made the situation clear for her in a way the other girls just lack.Don't you hate it when you're reading a post that references another post and you click the referenced post and then end up reading surrounding posts, then you start "liking" the posts and then realise these posts are fucking thousands of years old! Then you have to decide, do you unlike them to avoid looking like some weird stalker, or do you leave the likes standing, I mean you liked them for a reason right, they deserved that like! Fuck this First World and its dilemmas, is just doing my head in!
Anyway...
Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
I mean the mc got to come deep, deep inside Jill's womb (you came inside her didn't you, of course your did, no one saves their balls for 8 seasons and then cums on a girl's tits just for her to wipe it off...), but was the scene all it needed to be?
So it's time for a bit of a breakdown. It's probably already been done, hell I probably already did it 5000+ pages ago, but I don't remember... So humor me...
It definitely started off right:
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So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
mc: "(What's going on?)"
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
mc: "(Oh fuck yes!!)"
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
mc: "Wanna go to bed?"
As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Jill: "Ok."
Umm... way to sound enthusiastic Jill. He didn't just ask "Would you'd like fries with that?" He's going to fuck you, girl, and fuck you hard! If she answered, "Yeah, whatever..." it wouldn't have sounded any less enthusiastic. Maybe a, "Yes!! I... I mean yes, I want to." Would be more like the Jillybean we know and love.
Alright, I'll chalk it up to nerves, she was clamping her ass tight to avoid shitting herself, so maybe she wasn't thinking straight.
Anyway, we've missed a critical step here.
Right now, while they were standing up, removing their clothing, this is when the mc should have removed her bra. You don't wait until you're lying down to remove a girl's bra, especially if it's the first time you're seeing the goods up front. This is your opportunity to see them hanging as god intended, in all their untouched spender, perfectly protruding from a vertical chest. Some groping and sucking (this has nothing to do with that horrible Madame choice...), and then, when your girl starts to get worked up, you stop. Yeah you stop, that gives her the opportunity to say, "Don't stop..." and then you say, "Wanna go to bed?"
Anyway, after that, things proceed fine. They lay on the bed, make out a bit over their clothes, and we get that classic exchange:
mc: "You are so beautiful."
To which our intellectual hottie responds:
Jill: "You too."
Classic Jill with her foot in her mouth (figuratively speaking), stumbling over her words when she's worked up.
Then out come her tits. Her tits were the focus of this part, which makes sense, but I would have liked to see more of Jill's reaction, both her lust and her shyness. We're assuming this is the first time a guy has seen her in this state, it would have been fun to see her internal reaction (we hear her thoughts in previous encounters where she's freaking out), and maybe had her instinctually trying to cover up as the mc coaxes her to give him an eyeful.
Then bam, she's deftly removed the mc's boxes in two frames, and she's a little more nervous now due to the size of his cock. She has to compliment the size of his cock, every other girl has.
Then she starts to play with it (his dick I mean, not the mc's guitar... Why the fuck are you even thinking about his guitar right now, fucking hell...); she just dives straight in and she's very serious about it. Her stare is almost analytical, I'd suggest if she were with Tybalt she'd possibly pull out a magnifying glass.
Then it's time for her remaining garments to be removed. So off they come while she bites her lower lip and looks the mc in the eyes. I wouldn't have it any other way.
After which the mc proceeds to play with her cunt. Now we get a bit more intimate with Jill's thoughts. Typical confused thoughts that we've come to expect whenever the mc is working her up.
Meanwhile the mc seems like he's ticking boxes on a checklist:
mc: "(She's wet... That's good.)"mc: "(She enjoys it... Good.)"
It's important to read your girl's responses, but he's making it almost clinical...
mc: "Ok, this one passes. Next!"
Then it's time to fuck, and Jill kinda panics that he's not wearing protection. Almost the first time in the entire game (other than Neil's insistences and that one scene with Maya) that someone even gives a shit about protection, and she chooses not to say anything. That was a bit of a strange one, that she thought about it and then just forgot about it.
Now we get lots of fucking in different positions, mostly with Jill just lying prone and the mc doing all the work, and he gets to lick her asshole which was cool.
Then we segue into some horse riding, the banter from which is a bit of fun, and this includes probably the most flattering shot ever of Jill with her mouth open (of course she hasn't given the mc a blow job yet, so that'll probably soar to the top of the "Good Renders of Jill with Her Mouth Open" list when that occurs):
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Then, as the mc warns Jill that he's about to explode, Jill replies in her "Propper" way:
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It's not like she was going to say:
Jill: "Cum in my fucking pussy!"You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Finally the mc blow his copious, steaming hot load deep inside Jill (there's no choice, if you get the option to "cum outside", your game is probably bugged). And she doesn't even give a shit. She just lies there grinning like a fucking idiot, so does the mc for that matter:
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And then we get all that, "Are you my boyfriend..." "... it's my destiny that my sister carked it (Aussie slang for "kicked the bucket)..." bullshit which we'll ignore for this post.
And there you have it.
The mc finally got to fuck Jill in the 8th episode of the game. It was a long haul. Was it the payoff you were looking for?
All the joking aside, I thought it was ok, but I would have liked Jill to be a little more bashful. Even though she initiated it, it would have been cool if the mc had to coax her a bit.
She kinda went from someone who was a nervous wreck about sex, to someone who was inexperienced but wasn't too fussed when it finally came down to it.
Maybe that's a good thing; none of the scenes in the game come across too creepy (unlike pretty much every scene in every other AVN). So coercing Jill might leave some people feeling that it wasn't right.
On a somewhat side note, I'm loving that I predicted the "unofficial" name of the episode a while back.![]()
I should start by saying that Jill is not my favorite LI (I'm a throuple guy), but I really like all the LIs in their own ways, so have done full playthroughs for each, plus two different versions of the "others" path. Having said that, this Jill lewd scene is one of the best in the entire game so far.Don't you hate it when you're reading a post that references another post and you click the referenced post and then end up reading surrounding posts, then you start "liking" the posts and then realise these posts are fucking thousands of years old! Then you have to decide, do you unlike them to avoid looking like some weird stalker, or do you leave the likes standing, I mean you liked them for a reason right, they deserved that like! Fuck this First World and its dilemmas, is just doing my head in!
Anyway...
Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
I mean the mc got to come deep, deep inside Jill's womb (you came inside her didn't you, of course your did, no one saves their balls for 8 seasons and then cums on a girl's tits just for her to wipe it off...), but was the scene all it needed to be?
So it's time for a bit of a breakdown. It's probably already been done, hell I probably already did it 5000+ pages ago, but I don't remember... So humor me...
It definitely started off right:
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So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
mc: "(What's going on?)"
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
mc: "(Oh fuck yes!!)"
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
mc: "Wanna go to bed?"
As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Jill: "Ok."
Umm... way to sound enthusiastic Jill. He didn't just ask "Would you'd like fries with that?" He's going to fuck you, girl, and fuck you hard! If she answered, "Yeah, whatever..." it wouldn't have sounded any less enthusiastic. Maybe a, "Yes!! I... I mean yes, I want to." Would be more like the Jillybean we know and love.
Alright, I'll chalk it up to nerves, she was clamping her ass tight to avoid shitting herself, so maybe she wasn't thinking straight.
Anyway, we've missed a critical step here.
Right now, while they were standing up, removing their clothing, this is when the mc should have removed her bra. You don't wait until you're lying down to remove a girl's bra, especially if it's the first time you're seeing the goods up front. This is your opportunity to see them hanging as god intended, in all their untouched spender, perfectly protruding from a vertical chest. Some groping and sucking (this has nothing to do with that horrible Madame choice...), and then, when your girl starts to get worked up, you stop. Yeah you stop, that gives her the opportunity to say, "Don't stop..." and then you say, "Wanna go to bed?"
Anyway, after that, things proceed fine. They lay on the bed, make out a bit over their clothes, and we get that classic exchange:
mc: "You are so beautiful."
To which our intellectual hottie responds:
Jill: "You too."
Classic Jill with her foot in her mouth (figuratively speaking), stumbling over her words when she's worked up.
Then out come her tits. Her tits were the focus of this part, which makes sense, but I would have liked to see more of Jill's reaction, both her lust and her shyness. We're assuming this is the first time a guy has seen her in this state, it would have been fun to see her internal reaction (we hear her thoughts in previous encounters where she's freaking out), and maybe had her instinctually trying to cover up as the mc coaxes her to give him an eyeful.
Then bam, she's deftly removed the mc's boxes in two frames, and she's a little more nervous now due to the size of his cock. She has to compliment the size of his cock, every other girl has.
Then she starts to play with it (his dick I mean, not the mc's guitar... Why the fuck are you even thinking about his guitar right now, fucking hell...); she just dives straight in and she's very serious about it. Her stare is almost analytical, I'd suggest if she were with Tybalt she'd possibly pull out a magnifying glass.
Then it's time for her remaining garments to be removed. So off they come while she bites her lower lip and looks the mc in the eyes. I wouldn't have it any other way.
After which the mc proceeds to play with her cunt. Now we get a bit more intimate with Jill's thoughts. Typical confused thoughts that we've come to expect whenever the mc is working her up.
Meanwhile the mc seems like he's ticking boxes on a checklist:
mc: "(She's wet... That's good.)"mc: "(She enjoys it... Good.)"
It's important to read your girl's responses, but he's making it almost clinical...
mc: "Ok, this one passes. Next!"
Then it's time to fuck, and Jill kinda panics that he's not wearing protection. Almost the first time in the entire game (other than Neil's insistences and that one scene with Maya) that someone even gives a shit about protection, and she chooses not to say anything. That was a bit of a strange one, that she thought about it and then just forgot about it.
Now we get lots of fucking in different positions, mostly with Jill just lying prone and the mc doing all the work, and he gets to lick her asshole which was cool.
Then we segue into some horse riding, the banter from which is a bit of fun, and this includes probably the most flattering shot ever of Jill with her mouth open (of course she hasn't given the mc a blow job yet, so that'll probably soar to the top of the "Good Renders of Jill with Her Mouth Open" list when that occurs):
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Then, as the mc warns Jill that he's about to explode, Jill replies in her "Propper" way:
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It's not like she was going to say:
Jill: "Cum in my fucking pussy!"You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Finally the mc blow his copious, steaming hot load deep inside Jill (there's no choice, if you get the option to "cum outside", your game is probably bugged). And she doesn't even give a shit. She just lies there grinning like a fucking idiot, so does the mc for that matter:
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And then we get all that, "Are you my boyfriend..." "... it's my destiny that my sister carked it (Aussie slang for "kicked the bucket)..." bullshit which we'll ignore for this post.
And there you have it.
The mc finally got to fuck Jill in the 8th episode of the game. It was a long haul. Was it the payoff you were looking for?
All the joking aside, I thought it was ok, but I would have liked Jill to be a little more bashful. Even though she initiated it, it would have been cool if the mc had to coax her a bit.
She kinda went from someone who was a nervous wreck about sex, to someone who was inexperienced but wasn't too fussed when it finally came down to it.
Maybe that's a good thing; none of the scenes in the game come across too creepy (unlike pretty much every scene in every other AVN). So coercing Jill might leave some people feeling that it wasn't right.
On a somewhat side note, I'm loving that I predicted the "unofficial" name of the episode a while back.![]()
Your eloquent style of storytelling could do big with romance novels.Don't you hate it when you're reading a post that references another post and you click the referenced post and then end up reading surrounding posts, then you start "liking" the posts and then realise these posts are fucking thousands of years old! Then you have to decide, do you unlike them to avoid looking like some weird stalker, or do you leave the likes standing, I mean you liked them for a reason right, they deserved that like! Fuck this First World and its dilemmas, is just doing my head in!
Anyway...
Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
I mean the mc got to come deep, deep inside Jill's womb (you came inside her didn't you, of course your did, no one saves their balls for 8 seasons and then cums on a girl's tits just for her to wipe it off...), but was the scene all it needed to be?
So it's time for a bit of a breakdown. It's probably already been done, hell I probably already did it 5000+ pages ago, but I don't remember... So humor me...
It definitely started off right:
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So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
mc: "(What's going on?)"
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
mc: "(Oh fuck yes!!)"
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
mc: "Wanna go to bed?"
As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Jill: "Ok."
Umm... way to sound enthusiastic Jill. He didn't just ask "Would you'd like fries with that?" He's going to fuck you, girl, and fuck you hard! If she answered, "Yeah, whatever..." it wouldn't have sounded any less enthusiastic. Maybe a, "Yes!! I... I mean yes, I want to." Would be more like the Jillybean we know and love.
Alright, I'll chalk it up to nerves, she was clamping her ass tight to avoid shitting herself, so maybe she wasn't thinking straight.
Anyway, we've missed a critical step here.
Right now, while they were standing up, removing their clothing, this is when the mc should have removed her bra. You don't wait until you're lying down to remove a girl's bra, especially if it's the first time you're seeing the goods up front. This is your opportunity to see them hanging as god intended, in all their untouched spender, perfectly protruding from a vertical chest. Some groping and sucking (this has nothing to do with that horrible Madame choice...), and then, when your girl starts to get worked up, you stop. Yeah you stop, that gives her the opportunity to say, "Don't stop..." and then you say, "Wanna go to bed?"
Anyway, after that, things proceed fine. They lay on the bed, make out a bit over their clothes, and we get that classic exchange:
mc: "You are so beautiful."
To which our intellectual hottie responds:
Jill: "You too."
Classic Jill with her foot in her mouth (figuratively speaking), stumbling over her words when she's worked up.
Then out come her tits. Her tits were the focus of this part, which makes sense, but I would have liked to see more of Jill's reaction, both her lust and her shyness. We're assuming this is the first time a guy has seen her in this state, it would have been fun to see her internal reaction (we hear her thoughts in previous encounters where she's freaking out), and maybe had her instinctually trying to cover up as the mc coaxes her to give him an eyeful.
Then bam, she's deftly removed the mc's boxes in two frames, and she's a little more nervous now due to the size of his cock. She has to compliment the size of his cock, every other girl has.
Then she starts to play with it (his dick I mean, not the mc's guitar... Why the fuck are you even thinking about his guitar right now, fucking hell...); she just dives straight in and she's very serious about it. Her stare is almost analytical, I'd suggest if she were with Tybalt she'd possibly pull out a magnifying glass.
Then it's time for her remaining garments to be removed. So off they come while she bites her lower lip and looks the mc in the eyes. I wouldn't have it any other way.
After which the mc proceeds to play with her cunt. Now we get a bit more intimate with Jill's thoughts. Typical confused thoughts that we've come to expect whenever the mc is working her up.
Meanwhile the mc seems like he's ticking boxes on a checklist:
mc: "(She's wet... That's good.)"mc: "(She enjoys it... Good.)"
It's important to read your girl's responses, but he's making it almost clinical...
mc: "Ok, this one passes. Next!"
Then it's time to fuck, and Jill kinda panics that he's not wearing protection. Almost the first time in the entire game (other than Neil's insistences and that one scene with Maya) that someone even gives a shit about protection, and she chooses not to say anything. That was a bit of a strange one, that she thought about it and then just forgot about it.
Now we get lots of fucking in different positions, mostly with Jill just lying prone and the mc doing all the work, and he gets to lick her asshole which was cool.
Then we segue into some horse riding, the banter from which is a bit of fun, and this includes probably the most flattering shot ever of Jill with her mouth open (of course she hasn't given the mc a blow job yet, so that'll probably soar to the top of the "Good Renders of Jill with Her Mouth Open" list when that occurs):
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Then, as the mc warns Jill that he's about to explode, Jill replies in her "Propper" way:
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It's not like she was going to say:
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Finally the mc blow his copious, steaming hot load deep inside Jill (there's no choice, if you get the option to "cum outside", your game is probably bugged). And she doesn't even give a shit. She just lies there grinning like a fucking idiot, so does the mc for that matter:
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And then we get all that, "Are you my boyfriend..." "... it's my destiny that my sister carked it (Aussie slang for "kicked the bucket)..." bullshit which we'll ignore for this post.
And there you have it.
The mc finally got to fuck Jill in the 8th episode of the game. It was a long haul. Was it the payoff you were looking for?
All the joking aside, I thought it was ok, but I would have liked Jill to be a little more bashful. Even though she initiated it, it would have been cool if the mc had to coax her a bit.
She kinda went from someone who was a nervous wreck about sex, to someone who was inexperienced but wasn't too fussed when it finally came down to it.
Maybe that's a good thing; none of the scenes in the game come across too creepy (unlike pretty much every scene in every other AVN). So coercing Jill might leave some people feeling that it wasn't right.
On a somewhat side note, I'm loving that I predicted the "unofficial" name of the episode a while back.![]()
Well, the scene was ok but as most things not really something Special at all. The more i played through BADIK and looking at her Char she just got more and more boring for me. Last time i wanted to play her path again (same as Maya&Josie Path) i just shut down BADIK and haven't played it anymore since then. Interlude was atleast something fresh.Among the excessive meming and Jill hate of late, I'm curious: For those who've walked the straight and narrow path that is "The Path of Jill", was the (to put it daintily) "Jill fucking scene" everything you wanted it to be?
As Dr PinkCake gives details about the rendering process of his game, I wonder why he doesn't pay for an online server specifically for this task. Cloud rendering is more efficient and, I suppose, less expensive than keeping a computer running 24/7, not to mention the frequent replacement of the graphic card. Sweden is one of the most expensive countries in Europe for electricity but has a decent internet speed; So many reasons to work online.Status Update Episode 9
This week consisted of posing static renders, making most art for Rooster + writing several Rooster posts, coding, writing a few scenes, polishing dialogue, and PC maintenance.
Regarding Rooster posts, several of them are ok for posting on Twitter. It was a previous concern that they would spoil too much, and I won't post the ones that do. You can look forward to more Twitter contentYou must be registered to see the links.
Since my static render queue has been pretty big lately, I made a PC slave render some of it this week instead of animations. Because of this, I'll likely spend some time next week play-testing parts of the episode and getting a feel for it.
I'm still working on free-roam event renders and will do so for several more weeks.
To put the content of the free-roam events into perspective, the biggest one in the episode currently has more than 900 renders and will go over 1000. Making it at least 100-200 renders bigger than the biggest one in Season 1/2 (Episode 7, HOTs party).
I will work on the final free-roam event of the episode next week. I've still got work to do in the others, but I feel I get the most momentum if I push on with this. Plenty of art remains to be produced.
I'll try to make an updated and detailed progress report for next week's status update to show you what work remains in percentages and estimates. It would also benefit me to grasp how far along the development is.
Have a nice weekend
Dr PinkCake
Well, i would actually prefer it that way too and work on my own Servers. Fuck the Cloud. Cheaper yes, Security (No Comment)As Dr PinkCake gives details about the rendering process of his game, I wonder why he doesn't pay for an online server specifically for this task. Cloud rendering is efficient and, I suppose, less expensive than keeping a computer running 24/7, not to mention the frequent replacement of the graphic card. Sweden is one of the most expensive countries in Europe for electricity but has a good internet speed; So many reasons to work online.
You extol Maya and Josy's threesome at the water park and call Sage and Quinn's the worst of all ?Well, not much to see here but perhaps we'll get a proper sense of what's left next week.
Jill's big scene wasn't perfect, but I thought it delivered where it needed to. I'd certainly have preferred if the MC spent a little more time getting some enthusiasm going with Jill, but the awkward passivism made sense for the girl who clearly had some hang-ups to work through. More importantly, it gives us plenty of room to grow in future episodes. Also, while I'm none too keen on Jill's destiny fixation, I very much appreciated the way she verified she and the MC *are* an item now. It made the situation clear for her in a way the other girls just lack.
Indeed, most of the appeal of Jill's first sex scene is that the rest of the LI scenes in Episode 8 are pretty lackluster. The Maya/Josy threesome at the water park is good, but very short and it's hamstrung by the way their branch is left hanging at the end of the episode. Individually, Josy just gets a quicky in a restroom and Maya gets a drunken romp that would have worked if her high spirits didn't evaporate the next time we see her. Sage has to timeshare with Quinn for (hopefully) the worst threesome in the game. Bella's scene is the only one that really lives up to its potential (plus she gets an encore), but I'm just not into her. I can't take her romance seriously when the MC refuses to ask WTF happened to her marriage.
Jill's scene may have been unambitious, but it did at least stick the landing.
Yeah, Tommy and Sage are a lot tougher than the rest, so it's weird that Chad has any defense against her blows. She had to destroy him.View attachment 1939114
TBH, I lost that fight in my first playthrough. I'm traumatized now. Pls send help