- Mar 28, 2023
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With "Christine Watson" there was a pacing problem with story. Some events the MC was having with other characters didn't make sense in terms of their relationship. And some of the paths were confusing with the relationship that if better developed would have made the game a top 10 game. Plus, plausibility issues with Christine, she found herself in like when her husband was involved while she interacted with Goro and etc.
Being a Wife
The pacing is slower with the MC and some of the other characters. Some of it has the feel of it being to just slow burn the story while others are actual character building and plot development. And of course, like most of these adult games there are issues with plots and story lines that just doesn't work. In the past I rated the beginning of the game as a solid 5/10 in terms of content and story while renders were 9/10; presently, I rate the content and story a 7/10 and still a healthy 9/10 in renders.
Present problems:
I think the developer is missing the boat a little in the Christine/Henry line but that doesn't detract to the overall story
Where there are issues and problems with the plot is the too clueless MC, Christine. She should know with uncertainty when mischief is about to happen and there isn't much internal moral conflict when it comes to her corruption. And the story involves too much upon a sexy situation as her motivation that allows events to occur. The last 1/5th of the last update was a huge win and a loss at the same time.
In the last 1/5th the 'tease' between Goro and Christine ends. Goro takes Christine to his house, and they begin a physical relationship. However, Christine becomes a virgin again with a painful experience (weak). It would have been ok or even much better if Christine was reluctant and scared of the act with all the consequences (cheating, possible pregnancy, self-image, the affair being discovered, etc.) That reluctance could have had two outcomes that would have worked with the story; first being Christine remains reluctant throughout having sex with Goro-- Afterward you could have had a self-loathing and guilt-ridden Christine. Or second, A Christine that totally gives into the sex, consequences be damned.
Perhaps the worst part of the ending is Goro not inseminating Christine for mind control reasons(?!) or just more mind games(?!).
