VN Ren'Py Abandoned Best Friends [v0.4] [MizarCR]

[pb_2006]

Only a week ago from the update.
More or less three weeks until the next.

hey there! I dont want to sound offensive or sth like that... but you may want to hire someone to do translations.
I was really thrown off by the language mistakes. It caused for me confusion and a little bit disoriented. For some time I thought that the girl was a transsexual :/

 

[titouille313]

I know this is only the 0.3 but this feels like there is gonna be 15 release of teasing and slow depravity before any real sex scene.
But then i may be wrong, and in this case, my bad.

 

[mizares]

I know this is only the 0.3 but this feels like there is gonna be 15 release of teasing and slow depravity before any real sex scene.
But then i may be wrong, and in this case, my bad.

I started the game two months ago.
Some games teach a tit in two years.

 

[titouille313]

I started the game two months ago.
Some games teach a tit in two years.

I know, i like the art style you make, but i really hope it doesn't turn out into another "glamour" type of game where there is almost no content after 2 years. Didn't wanted to sound rude. My apologies.

 

[Jeepster]

No sex yet, just giving all a heads up

 

[Xincarnation]

Great job Mizar amazing game you're creating

 

[Joe_shoe33]

Has this gotten any better from the creation?

 

[nexer]

Nice, good dialogues. Interesting story.

 

[vandalier]

The game is quite nice... I do hope we'll still get to see some hairy content though

 

[CatNip23]

I want to thank you dev for making sexy milfs with big bushes! Definitely need more pubic hair in our games, keep at it!

Nice! I'll check this out.

 

[chabam]

any femdom content ?

 

[Deleted member 770309]

They live in a tiny studio apartment yet have a huge ass pool space and backyard area. Mike the cuck is so concerned about his friends mental health that he may offer up his girlfriend or wife lol. Hard pass.

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Yeah sounds terrible am out.

 

[mizares]

any femdom content ?

Next update.

 

[Rotumaru]

Nice, good dialogues. Interesting story.

I beg your pardon? You are joking, right?

 

[Rotumaru]

The developer of this vn seems to be no more than 12 years old. It is really ridiculous. My level of English is not too high, but even for me this is annoying. The problem is that even Spanish is disastrous.

A null narrative capacity and I quote:

"What a beautiful thing"
"What panties"
"Very tiny"


It looks like Doge's meme

And it goes like:

"Her pussy has to be beautiful..hummmm"
"It's making me very hot"

"WITH SO MUCH GYM THIS FANTASTIC"

Whaaat??? XD

 

[px305]

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WTF

 

[pb_2006]

The developer of this vn seems to be no more than 12 years old. It is really ridiculous. My level of English is not too high, but even for me this is annoying. The problem is that even Spanish is disastrous.

A null narrative capacity and I quote:

"What a beautiful thing"
"What panties"
"Very tiny"


It looks like Doge's meme

And it goes like:

"Her pussy has to be beautiful..hummmm"
"It's making me very hot"

"WITH SO MUCH GYM THIS FANTASTIC"

Whaaat??? XD

Feel the same way. It annoying and sad....

Only a week ago from the update.
More or less three weeks until the next.

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WTF

Joker in the house

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[nexer]

I beg your pardon? You are joking, right?

In spanish the dialogues are good. A chat between friends. With a little humor. Not bad. The story offers many opportunities, true graphics is poor.

 

[mizares]

The developer of this vn seems to be no more than 12 years old. It is really ridiculous. My level of English is not too high, but even for me this is annoying. The problem is that even Spanish is disastrous.

A null narrative capacity and I quote:

"What a beautiful thing"
"What panties"
"Very tiny"


It looks like Doge's meme

And it goes like:

"Her pussy has to be beautiful..hummmm"
"It's making me very hot"

"WITH SO MUCH GYM THIS FANTASTIC"

Whaaat??? XD

I am creating a porn game.
I am not creating "game of thrones".

 

[pb_2006]

I am creating a porn game.
I am not creating "game of thrones".

true but still... even in porn "actors" try to speak eng. that why I suggested hiring someone or collaborate with someone. Beacuse if the the narrative will be tragic as it is currently, ppl won't support you.

It's not the 1st time someone mentions this... consider this if you would like this project to succeed