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Crosaith.

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Precisely what the course of this game was advertised from day one:

Batman ... Superman ... if you want a less murderous future, you try your darnest to show yourself and the world there is another way .. otherwise terror strikes from one nation to another, murdering tens of innocent civilians, who more often than not are oblivious to their beef, this is already the reality in our world today.
Yea...and both of those lame characters repeatedly suffer & lose their loved ones because of those silly ideals. Spare villain. Villain does horrible stuff. Spare villain again. Villain continues to do horrible stuff. Surprise

Comics with anti heroes like Punisher & Spawn are far more interesting.
 
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AnubisZero

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Yeah, my bad.

English, as you have rightly noticed, is not my native language and I admit this without hesitation. I try to avoid such mistakes, but you can't avoid all of them.

And no. I don't use Google Translate. I use another one ;)

And seriously, thanks for pointing that out. I will have to dedicate a bit more time to improving my "Engrish" :)

How DARE you NOT speak english as your first language!!

the audacity! the gall!! you should be executed immediately!

And you trying to accommodate one the the 3000 written languages today with some devilry on a computer somewhere... you monster! you absolute monster!

What is this world coming to!?!

Next you'll probably put a cheating wife in your game! Can you imagine!? Depicting a woman with autonomy! ffs!!
 
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Mr. MiBo

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How DARE you NOT speak english as your first language!!

the audacity! the gall!! you should be executed immediately!

And you trying to accommodate one the the 3000 written languages today with some devilry on a computer somewhere... you monster! you absolute monster!

What is this world coming to!?!

Next you'll probably put a cheating wife in your game! Can you imagine!? Depicting a woman with autonomy! ffs!!
Yeah, I know. For some time now, I've been beating myself up about not being born in an English-speaking country. I am very ashamed because of this. Please forgive me!!!
 
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Mr. MiBo

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And now, seriously. Yes, I know that one of my weaknesses is English and I'm working on it, so we can finish with that now. But if you find any typos in the game or anything else, let me know and I will definitely do something about it.
 
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sigvar

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Yeah, my bad.

English, as you have rightly noticed, is not my native language and I admit this without hesitation. I try to avoid such mistakes, but you can't avoid all of them.

And no. I don't use Google Translate. I use another one ;)

And seriously, thanks for pointing that out. I will have to dedicate a bit more time to improving my "Engrish" :)
Main reason I pointed them out. One of the things you have to watch for when doing translations is that word for word is not enough for story telling. The format of the sentences and phrasing has quite a bit of impact on the overall dialog.

DeepL should help, but depending on how much content you intend to put in this VN, you probably want to have a native speaker proofread at least.
 
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sigvar

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so every game is excelllent and perfect from the start? what a prick u are ,...go chek other and urself before expecting perfectr english in a forum where 80% is not a native englush speaker including the developers,....if u not expect perfection ,...u cant be dissapointed...take that to ur personal life to "buddy"..
Thankfully the Dev seems to be pretty mature about it and took my post in the manner in which it was intended, as constructive criticism. This is why I don't write reviews with 1 star for things like this, but rather point this issues out in the thread.

I have no idea if you were trying to be funny with your post, however. The sheer volume of spelling errors, bad punctuation and atrocious grammar in your post has to be on purpose, right?
 
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Mr. MiBo

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Thankfully the Dev seems to be pretty mature about it and took my post in the manner in which it was intended, as constructive criticism. This is why I don't write reviews with 1 star for things like this, but rather point this issues out in the thread.

I have no idea if you were trying to be funny with your post, however. The sheer volume of spelling errors, bad punctuation and atrocious grammar in your post has to be on purpose, right?
Listen, constructive criticism is always welcome, at least for me. No one is infallible, especially not me. That's why I appreciate posts like yours, which point out where I make mistakes, rather than those where someone just says it's a load of crap. But why? Simply, because. I browse reviews and comments on some games, and sometimes I come to the conclusion that people want the game exclusively for themselves. If you do something they don't like, then that game is already bad because it's not written according to their preferences, and that's why it gets a rating of 1 in the review. Or like in my case, the language. A few words had mistakes, and that's why the grade was 1. I'm not saying all of them are like that, no. These are extreme cases, but really, the people who create these games dedicate their time to it, so I think that instead of writing nonsense, it's better to point out the mistakes like you did and evaluate the game as a whole rather than just through one aspect. Damn, I've really gone on and on :p What I'm getting at. Have a little understanding :)
 

Mr. MiBo

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DeepL should help, but depending on how much content you intend to put in this VN, you probably want to have a native speaker proofread at least.
You're right, that option would be the best. And it would be wonderful if he or she were from my country. Another thing I need to think about.
 

JenMistress

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So, we got Sci-Fi and Horror together, nice. However, specially with having T-800s here, kinda hoping maybe somewhere down the road maybe M3GAN too. ;) But seriously, interesting game, and I will be looking forward for more. Thank you so very much for this!!!
 
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So, we got Sci-Fi and Horror together, nice. However, specially with having T-800s here, kinda hoping maybe somewhere down the road maybe M3GAN too. ;) But seriously, interesting game, and I will be looking forward for more. Thank you so very much for this!!!
Are you referring to the doll with the long blond hair that resembles a young girl? :cool:
 
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JenMistress

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Are you referring to the doll with the long blond hair that resembles a young girl? :cool:
That's the one. Just saw the sequel this past weekend, after rewatching the first one again the night before, so having a game dealing with AI, it came to mind really fast.
 
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