VN Ren'Py Abandoned Better Life? Remake [v0.02] [MOK(BH)]

[MOK (BH)]

Characters look great and I look forward to what comes next, but it can be improved a lot. If I was to change one thing would be removing Saya, the little guide thing. You do NOT need a small flying funny companion to guide the MC to whatever you want to happen next, the story does NOT need to be explained by a supernatural creature and if you leave it in, that'll only make things harder further down the line. Ditch it and make other characters explain what's happening, make the MC herself figure out what to do through interesting events or even inner monologues if you must. The best alternative would be giving the player choices, REAL choices unlike "Take the pills" or "Don't take the pills -> Take the Pills". Making a good game takes effort, but I hope you'll go the extra mile.
Godspeed, Dev!

The purpose of Saya is not to guide the MC in the story, her purpose is corruption, and in future updates will give hints if the player is stuck

 

[merlin7560]

Ive go a request, can you make so that we can choose MC's name after the transformation? Rose could be the default, so maybe after that ghost looking creature asking how about Rose? and then we can choose?

 

[Candy1970]

The purpose of Saya is not to guide the MC in the story, her purpose is corruption, and in future updates will give hints if the player is stuck

did you see the message i dmed to you MOK(BH) hope it helps

 

[MOK (BH)]

Ive go a request, can you make so that we can choose MC's name after the transformation? Rose could be the default, so maybe after that ghost looking creature asking how about Rose? and then we can choose?

sure thing

did you see the message i dmed to you MOK(BH) hope it helps

I did now, sorry for the late reply.

 

[Cabin]

yes there will be

tags that will be included in the game in the future:
BDSM, blackmail, bukkake, humiliation, monster, multiple endings, lesbian, netorare, pregnancy, prostitution, sexual harassment, slave,

oh sweet
the perfect tags for such a kind of game
pls don't abandon this future gem

 

[MOK (BH)]

oh sweet
the perfect tags for such a kind of game
pls don't abandon this future gem

Thanks for taking an interest in my game, I'll try my best
I also forgot gangbang tag

 

[Candy1970]

Thanks for taking an interest in my game, I'll try my best
I also forgot gangbang tag

HOORAY for gangbangs and cream pies

 

[Cabin]

Thanks for taking an interest in my game, I'll try my best
I also forgot gangbang tag

hooray for gangbangs(interracial ones especially hehe)

 

[TheGodUncle]

How much content is there for this update?

 

[Zemax]

Congratulations for your game, MOK (BH)


Good Luck

 

[MOK (BH)]

The next update will be in the next month.

 

[MOK (BH)]

The game will be on hold
until I fix some problem

 

[NONONFZ]

Looking forward to it.