HTML Abandoned Better Life? [v0.002a] [MOK(BH)]

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Overview:
It's a story about a struggling man named Zack, and you control his action.
Will you make the right decision to make his life better?
(please note that the story is still being written, so everything might change in the final release)​

Thread Updated: 2022-08-17
Release Date: 2022-08-17
Developer: MOK(BH) F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 0.002a
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[herbz]

A good start! Has some formatting problems (i.e. sentences that done start with capital letters etc) also the places where the images "fucking 001" and "fucking 002" are used don't work

 

[rKnight]

There's something untraced in the last screen that does not fill me with confidence,

 

[voidzone247]

Pretty sure this is m->f transformation forced.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

There's something in the last screen that does not fill me with confidence,

You already know what kind of game it will be

 

[esse1985]

Nice short game so far. Keep writing

 

[Yog-Sloth]

MOK (BH) Forced M -> F Transformation?

 

[DownTheDrain]

I really wish the overview wasn't so fucking vague on a title with transformation in the tags.
Since there's both male and female protag listed I can only assume it's another forced one but that should really be spelled out.

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[deppenjaeger]

if you control zack (a male) why is there a "female protagogonist" tag?

 

[AlBetGam]

I really wish the overview wasn't so fucking vague on a title with transformation in the tags.
Since there's both male and female protag listed I can only assume it's another forced one but that should really be spelled out.

I frankly wish there was a specific tag for "your male character gets turned into a woman". "Transformation" on its own is too vague and broad.

 

[Lasana]

forced transformation and get fuck by black guys with not rly a choice....... wow this game sucks

 

[Meludan]

Yep, straight forced transformation at the start. Little bit of text and a lot of gifs. Not a real story at the moment.
Could be good in one or two years but i doubt that.

 

[stubzy123]

source on that creampie gif?

 

[kekasaurus]

I see porn gifs and no screenshots of game play = ignore

 

[NotYourBiznes]

This is a text dump, not a game.

 

[amgwtfover]

Look, I get it, you want to show a proof of concept, but I'm going to be that guy for a second;

Every single month one or two of these things pops out of the woodwork, a typical "girl in a new city" girl life ripoff with 1% of the content and the first day actually completed if that, with just a bunch of real porn images used shown as the previews, which gets a few clicks, because we like porn on a porn site, go figure.
But 90% of them get abandoned, crash and burn or just can't compare to the actual established ones who have more than a couple of googled gifs, so there is zero reason to care about them. Your game here is just like every other v0.0001 with 4 images and a dream to be posted on here. Honestly the biggest surprise for me was that there wasn't a patreon or subscribestar listed.

If you REALLY want to do one of these, then get some meat on the bones first and actually have something playable for more than 5 minutes of content, then post it. Then people might do more than 5 minutes+forget because it comes across as just another thing going nowhere.

 

[Manga-fan]

I'm really excited to see where this may go.

 

[Fydo92]

kek at the 1 star review on a .002, which is basically a proof of concept demo

Better only post games once theyre done lol

 

[Redmoon82]

Hello. I played around and came to the conclusion that the plot was revealed in a very concise, crumpled way, and the main problem is not even an excessive number of GIFs, but that the player does not have time to feel empathy for the main character. I remember a game where the transformation into a girl took place literally overnight and at the same time there was a choice. Now he is gone and it's sad.