HTML Abandoned Better Life? [v0.002a] [MOK(BH)]

[Virulenz]

Personally i prefer renpy way over html. You dont need to be an artist to resize or compress stuff, it takes only a board search and 30 minutes of time to learn that stuff since everything is here already.
Smaller textboxes means either more time with a picture/vid or more pictures/vids. In html they mostly show on one site and are gone after the click. Besides, many html games have multimple clips on one site and mostly autoplay...thats annoying, confusing and drives some browsers to the limit. And as said, you dont need to click in renpy games...the mouse is only needed for stupid minigames, puzzles or QTE, everything else is works fine with the keyboard only.

 

[DICK111]

Any major story increase?

 

[vessna]

nice game, but needs updates, new contents

but it's too short to talking about giving review

 

[Flynn_]

Who's this girl? She's fucking hot

She is seltin_sweety

 

[doku99]

Personally i prefer renpy way over html. You dont need to be an artist to resize or compress stuff, it takes only a board search and 30 minutes of time to learn that stuff since everything is here already.
Smaller textboxes means either more time with a picture/vid or more pictures/vids. In html they mostly show on one site and are gone after the click. Besides, many html games have multimple clips on one site and mostly autoplay...thats annoying, confusing and drives some browsers to the limit. And as said, you dont need to click in renpy games...the mouse is only needed for stupid minigames, puzzles or QTE, everything else is works fine with the keyboard only.

The maker of this game couldn't even handle html, and you think Ren'py is gonna be any better? Cheers to you for being optimistic I guess.

 

[Disgruntler]

Yes, it is Forced M -> F Transformation

Given this is the core expository thing you're trying to present, you need to be upfront about it in your summary. 'Zach is transformed into a woman and...'

Anyone who is turned off by this is not going to like your game anyways (and will end up clogging this conversation with bitching about you 'being a liar and deceitful' if you don't make it clear at the outset) and anyone who is interested in that is going to want the conformation.

 

[Virulenz]

Anyone who sees the transformation tag can use the search to find details...however, this post could be interesting for you:

In a future update, you will have a chance to turn back and bone other female characters, and yes there will be lesbian/futa/incest or fake incest(step-mom/sister), and I might make a story option where you start as a straight female for the people who don't like gender bender

doku99
Holy fuck...if i remember correctly you are the very first person who ever called me optimistic.
I'm so fucking realistic even most pessimists consider me a gloomster
I'm not a coder and i honestly dont have the slightest clue about the necessary skills for twine or renpy...i'm just a player and prefer renpy.

 

[Disgruntler]

Anyone who sees the transformation tag can use the search to find details...however, this post could be interesting for you:

Anyone who posts a game on here can put what the game is about on the front page. There is no valid argument not to do so. Audience that would be interested in the game will not know the game is made for them, and this is a lose for the players and the developer.

No game is good enough to warrant demanding the players search for basic-level info in the thread. If it's basic and integral to what the game is about, it should be on post 1.

 

[evelelf]

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Overview:
It's a story about a struggling man named Zack, and you control his action.
Will you make the right decision to make his life better?
(please note that the story is still being written, so everything might change in the final release)​

Thread Updated: 2022-08-17
Release Date: 2022-08-17
Developer: MOK(BH) F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 0.002a
OS: Windows
Language: English
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Sorry. The description of the game is nothing more of clickbait. No choices at all. Player can not "control his action" in any way. Simple, one-way through fantasy of author about sissyfication. Tag "sissification" missed on porpoise. F*ck you man. I wish I had a dislike button on this forum.

 

[Virulenz]

I dont play it without a lesbian route, but i also dont see any sissy here

 

[Mid1969]

Who is the blonde girl in the overview gif? Anyone know? Thank you

 

[vessna]

Who is the blonde girl in the overview gif? Anyone know? Thank you

That's the question, isn't it?
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[Shelscott50]

Seriously?? This Seems like It COULD Be a Decent Game,...
- the premise of the game is cool; and Can see the RL implications.
(with the exception of being TJ's "breeding bitch") PLEASE!! Disgusting!!
- Secondly, some of the Laziest f*cking writing I have EVER seen!!
(It is Pretty F*cking obvious that the Dev (MOK) is a pathetic black male with delusions of Grandeur; He has NO chance with women in RL, so creates this lazy ass, fake 'fairy tale' to feed his own Ego!
Six days of repeatable;
"you carry on with your day, trying to study and work out and not trying to overthink, but at the end of the day, you still feel despaired and filled with anxiety"
until finally taking the 7th and last pill.

PLEASE!! Try again. Put a Little bit More Effort into it this time. And Save Us from Your pathetic delusions.
- Like an Impartial narrative POV.

 

[MOK (BH)]

Seriously?? This Seems like It COULD Be a Decent Game,...
- the premise of the game is cool; and Can see the RL implications.
(with the exception of being TJ's "breeding bitch") PLEASE!! Disgusting!!
- Secondly, some of the Laziest f*cking writing I have EVER seen!!
(It is Pretty F*cking obvious that the Dev (MOK) is a pathetic black male with delusions of Grandeur; He has NO chance with women in RL, so creates this lazy ass, fake 'fairy tale' to feed his own Ego!
Six days of repeatable;
"you carry on with your day, trying to study and work out and not trying to overthink, but at the end of the day, you still feel despaired and filled with anxiety"
until finally taking the 7th and last pill.

PLEASE!! Try again. Put a Little bit More Effort into it this time. And Save Us from Your pathetic delusions.
- Like an Impartial narrative POV.

Why are you so upset? especially over a free (badly written) demo, yes it's badly written, yes I have spelling/ grammar mistakes, and English isn't my first language, and I'm trying to fix the game like god forbid I make a mistake, and (It is Pretty F*cking obvious that the Dev (MOK) is a pathetic black male with delusions of Grandeur) really?? I mean I'm not black, but what does this have to do with the game, it just happens to be the first ending in the game, there will be other characters in the game, but yeah go get upset over a demo, it's not like I said on this thread that I'm gonna change and story and fix it to my best ability.

 

[HotPotLovers]

Why are you so upset? especially over a free (badly written) demo, yes it's badly written, yes I have spelling/ grammar mistakes, and English isn't my first language, and I'm trying to fix the game like god forbid I make a mistake, and (It is Pretty F*cking obvious that the Dev (MOK) is a pathetic black male with delusions of Grandeur) really?? I mean I'm not black, but what does this have to do with the game, it just happens to be the first ending in the game, there will be other characters in the game, but yeah go get upset over a demo, it's not like I said on this thread that I'm gonna change and story and fix it to my best ability.

don't give attention to attention seekers bro, they don't deserve it
idk why would you want to make switch to ren'py tho, usually it fits better with 2D or 3D I believe, real porn goes along with html or qsp iirc. but oc its entirely up to you, it's ur project after all.
gl on development

 

[MOK (BH)]

don't give attention to attention seekers bro, they don't deserve it
idk why would you want to make switch to ren'py tho, usually it fits better with 2D or 3D I believe, real porn goes along with html or qsp iirc. but oc its entirely up to you, it's ur project after all.
gl on development

Thanks, Yeah you are right 2d is much better for ren'py, I do have plans for moving from real porn to 2d, but that will be in the future when I have money and can have a 2d artist helping me make the game, so the next update might be weird because I did make an avatar for the character with the game having real porn(let's see people getting more upset)
I did think of Daz but it will take so much time and I doing this in my free time I even found a model I like

 

[Dracilla]

I'm not a coder and i honestly dont have the slightest clue about the necessary skills for twine or renpy...i'm just a player and prefer renpy.

Twine is quite a lot of fun to work with and at its most basic requires zero prerequisite skills or knowledge but there is a plethora of library options to draw from to make things more complex.

 

[PTSdev]

Twine is quite a lot of fun to work with and at its most basic requires zero prerequisite skills or knowledge but there is a plethora of library options to draw from to make things more complex.

Sugarcube (most popular story engine of Twine) is awesome. You can do things with it that go far beyond these "click on link to go to next passage" games. It's not really suited for "classic" visual novels, though - you can make these work, but at its core, it's a text-based engine.

 

[vessna]

when will be next update? anyone knows?

 

[MOK (BH)]

when will be next update? anyone knows?

Hi, since I am making two different versions of the game (different game engines)and trying to minimize bugs and mistakes (I'm still learning how to do stuff) and dealing with other stuff, the next update will be at the end of this month or something like that.