VN Ren'Py Between Humanity [v0.3.2] [DebatingPanda]

[DebatingPanda]

I didn’t like Anya’s behavior during the hot scene in her room. I certainly didn’t expect a mischievous and provocative girl like her to start a romantic relationship with the protagonist, but I really didn’t like the way she treated him before, during, and after the hot scene—especially at the end, when she abruptly kicked him out of her room. Too much talking, too much beating around the bush from a girl who had been teasing the protagonist the whole time with suggestive looks and provocative poses, only to waste time, joke around, and test the poor guy during their intimate moment. Really, really disappointed in a character who started off strong only to ruin herself during the hot scene. That said, speaking about the AVN, the plot seems interesting, the mystery is there, and the LIs are all cute, each with her own personality. I’m curious to see where it’s going.
P.S. Team Lucy.

It's one thing, to throw another person suggestive looks or tease them, but something totally different if you find yourself in the middle of something sexual. So imo, with her personality in mind, it fits in this scene. Not everyone can be as straightforward as Amber or other characters, who still have their own flaws, don't get me wrong, but if you prefer those, I've still got you covered .

I somewhat agree. Don't think she was ruined, but the ending was quite abrupt and the scene too... simple.

Ask yourself, why was the ending abrupt, MC even questions that at the end. Simple in terms of quality or...? You didn't expect them to have sex right at the spot, did you

 

[danb35]

too much beating around the bush from a girl who had been teasing the protagonist the whole time with suggestive looks and provocative poses, only to waste time, joke around,

Perhaps it's one thing to tease, and quite a different thing to actually do something? I could see her being unprepared to follow through on her teasing--not out of lack of willingness, exactly, but more as a matter of just not being mentally ready (even if, perhaps, she thought she was, it's rather different when it's staring you in the face).

P.S. Team Lucy.

100%. MC's fallen for her, and I'm right with him.

I wonder, though, if we're going to get an idea of what their relationship was like before MC's "accident." She's obviously been into him for some time. Was this like MC and Annie in Eternum, where they've been crushing on each other for years but just never acted on it (neither knowing of the other's feelings)? Was MC just oblivious? Had he deliberately friend-zoned her? Because when I say it's obvious, it's really obvious, not only to the player, but to everyone else around (except, apparently, MC). Naomi sees it. Mr. Baby sees it. Anya sees it--OK, she's Lucy's sister, so you'd expect her to understand her well. She even says things like this:

She's about as subtle as a heart attack, albeit in a very different way from Anya.

 

[sexypeanut]

Ask yourself, why was the ending abrupt, MC even questions that at the end. Simple in terms of quality or...? You didn't expect them to have sex right at the spot, did you

Erm, no. Expected more angles, extra mouth shenaningans and to be longer. But it's ok, in Panda we trust!

 

[Whatever whenever]

I wish I had a son Or friends to bequeath to them to jerk off on my grave as an MC Fucks a mother and her two daughters. But I don't have anyone. I also remembered that it would be incest, and incest is forbidden.

 

[DebatingPanda]

Erm, no. Expected more angles, extra mouth shenaningans and to be longer. But it's ok, in Panda we trust!

Ah, gotcha! Yeah, will note that down for the future, it's quite a task to pin point the light for any new angles, and I thought adding the phone call in-between would be a great addition already. Also BH is supposed to be mostly POV, but I already made exceptions during other sex scenes, so I agree with you on that.

 

[sexypeanut]

Ah, gotcha! Yeah, will note that down for the future, it's quite a task to pin point the light for any new angles, and I thought adding the phone call in-between would be a great addition already. Also BH is supposed to be mostly POV, but I already made exceptions during other sex scenes, so I agree with you on that.

The POV thing can remain, but that would require more positions... and that will come later in the game

 

[wiseold6996]

I didn’t like Anya’s behavior during the hot scene in her room. I certainly didn’t expect a mischievous and provocative girl like her to start a romantic relationship with the protagonist, but I really didn’t like the way she treated him before, during, and after the hot scene—especially at the end, when she abruptly kicked him out of her room. Too much talking, too much beating around the bush from a girl who had been teasing the protagonist the whole time with suggestive looks and provocative poses, only to waste time, joke around, and test the poor guy during their intimate moment. Really, really disappointed in a character who started off strong only to ruin herself during the hot scene. That said, speaking about the AVN, the plot seems interesting, the mystery is there, and the LIs are all cute, each with her own personality. I’m curious to see where it’s going.
P.S. Team Lucy.

Meh only problem with the sex scene is that the mc did not record her sucking dick using her own phone. He had a golden opportunity too.

 

[JeffisZac]

I wish I had a son Or friends to bequeath to them to jerk off on my grave as an MC Fucks a mother and her two daughters. But I don't have anyone. I also remembered that it would be incest, and incest is forbidden.

I don't know whether to be concerned by this or laugh at it. Maybe both?

 

[Kyouko96]

Meh only problem with the sex scene is that the mc did not record her sucking dick using her own phone. He had a golden opportunity too.

MC wasn't rough enough with the brat

PS: I liked the add of the phone call

 

[Raffro]

Incest mod dead then?
Does it really need incest mod tho ?

 

[Havik79]

Incest mod dead then?
Does it really need incest mod tho ?

No they aren't meant to be your family, it makes no sense.

 

[Raffro]

No they aren't meant to be your family, it makes no sense.

makes sense.

 

[wiseold6996]

makes sense.

only if you are illiterate

 

[danb35]

Does it really need incest mod tho ?

The setup doesn't really work for a incest story IMO. In the un-modded story (to give just a few examples):

• Everyone at the hospital, and Mr. Baby, assume that Lucy is MC's girlfriend--none of that dialogue works if she's his (step-)sister.
• Lucy's overt jealousy of Anya also doesn't work if they're all family--he would presumably have seen her in various states of undress before, and thus it wouldn't have been so shocking for Lucy.
• According to MC's internal monologue, he barely knows Anya, and only from school.
• Jane introduces herself to MC in the bathroom.
• MC is, IMO, overly appreciative of the ladies for letting him stay there--excessively so if they're family.
• Lucy doesn't show any kind of recognition of, or connection to, Grandma's house or anything in it--again, there'd almost certainly be something there if they were family.

All of this, of course, is dialogue, and can relatively easily be changed--but it'd be a lot to change. This isn't just "swap roommate for sister and landlady for mom"--pretty big chunks of the story need to be changed to have it make sense as an incest story.

Of course, if anything happens among any combination of Jane, Lucy, and/or Anya (or a threesome involving any two of them and MC), that would count--but Patreon rules being what they are, I doubt it will.

 

[DevinHesi]

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Hey there friends!

I hope you're all doing great! I'm doing well myself and looking forward to my vacation - mainly so I can put more time into development.

Speaking of development, over the past two weeks I've managed to finalize the scene I was working on, and I think it turned out pretty great. I ended up making five larger animations for it - which is quite a lot for a non-H scene - but the scene really needs that impact. Otherwise it just wouldn't hit the way it should, if you know what I mean.

Outside of that, the last two weeks have been a little weird. Between Humanity got de-indexed for a bit, but it's back again, so no worries there. As a precaution, I manually de-indexed the SFW version (Beyond Humanity) since it might be seen as boosting the main game. Personally I don't think that's the case, but I'll wait for

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's response to my ticket. Still, thank you so much to everyone who rated the SFW version when I asked in the last devlog - much love for that!

And one more big milestone: we've passed 3,000 members on Patreon! Honestly, if you had told me when I first started development that we'd get here, I wouldn't have believed it for a second. Yet here we are, and I'm so grateful to every one of you who's interested in the game and its development.

That's it for today! Have a great week, stay hydrated, and thank you all for the continuous support! <3

-Panda

 

[adrienbarnes]

So apparently there's a secret clickable between naomi's legs if you make the dream real, but when I click on it it just moves to the next piece of dialogue like any other click.

How can I actually make the clickable clickable?

 

[DebatingPanda]

So apparently there's a secret clickable between naomi's legs if you make the dream real, but when I click on it it just moves to the next piece of dialogue like any other click.

How can I actually make the clickable clickable?

It is clickable, but the area is very small. Maybe a bit too small if you're on a phone for example. Might need to improve the system behind it at some point.

 

[GamerDaddy]

It is clickable, but the area is very small. Maybe a bit too small if you're on a phone for example. Might need to improve the system behind it at some point.

maybe put a little cheaty cheat that shows us exactly where (?activated in the options?)

 

[DebatingPanda]

maybe put a little cheaty cheat that shows us exactly where (?activated in the options?)

Not for those clickables I wanted to have some interaction between you guys and have them be found randomly.

 

[DeadpoolandWolverine]

i wish he would kiss Lucy close to the end of the update