VN Ren'Py Between Rounds [v1.0] [Mr.Voxel]

[Revy15a2]

I love this art style so much, eventually one of these AI gen games will be good and it will be an amazing time for the genre.

 

[V.IV Rusty]

oh my god the li's were so hot but you just had to shove ntr in this
please put an ntr tag

 

[deedmore]

Option to name the protag?

 

[turbokinetics]

Thanks a lot for the kind words — really appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment.
I’m glad the prologue felt solid and longer than what these types of releases usually offer. That was exactly the goal for the first version.
I totally get what you mean about picking specific paths — I wanted the choices to matter a bit, even in the prologue, so players can start shaping their experience early on. I’ll keep working on that balance moving forward.

Thanks again for giving the game a shot — means a lot!

yea you knocked it out of the park my man. and specific paths aint a bad thing i just wasnt ready for it. most games in this vein are kinetic so i went into it assuming. that was my B. lol i hope their isnt too much branching. im not much of a replayer or one to like a lot of saves. but i wont hold it against you if you do. one dev to another you got a fan. well done.

 

[vampz]

And don't forget to also count toes. I'm not a foot fetishist, but having 6 toes on one foot like that last image is unsettling.

I should have written to count digits instead of fingers, you're correct
Though it's way more common to see issues with fingers, mostly because in most cases the feet aren't fully visible, so you don't see the extra toes
But it is also something to check and fix

 

[Swiver]

eeek that's the weird watery slop that drove me out of the fanart threads I was following. This looks a tad better and the characters seem consistent looking but still... oh and I think this is the first game using it... trailblazer? Anyway, might still give it a go lol but I'll wait on a couple of reviews I think. Bon appetit.

 

[vampz]

eeek that's the weird watery slop that drove me out of the fanart threads I was following. This looks a tad better and the characters seem consistent looking but still... oh and I think this is the first game using it... trailblazer? Anyway, might still give it a go lol but I'll wait on a couple of reviews I think. Bon appetit.

Small piece of advice, since you mentioned being driven out of fan art threads
If the AI slop in question is produced by a specific user, you can just set them as ignored, and you'll just not see their messages
Click on their profile, hit the Ignore button, and no more slop
Had to personally do that to a user to avoid being driven away from multiple fan art threads.....

 

[Swiver]

Small piece of advice, since you mentioned being driven out of fan art threads
If the AI slop in question is produced by a specific user, you can just set them as ignored, and you'll just not see their messages
Click on their profile, hit the Ignore button, and no more slop
Had to personally do that to a user to avoid being driven away from multiple fan art threads.....

BRILLIANT! Thanks

 

[Whatmattysaw]

Absolutely loved it, great start my friend. The art and animations are fantastic and the ladies are all breathtaking. I've always loved fit women so this is perfect for me ❤

 

[Deagle78]

My best advice to you?
First, get very familiar with Adetailer, especially for faces. you really want to be rid of those soulless eyes, and it'll help fix other stuff like teeth
Second, learn to count fingers, and by extension learn inpainting so you could fix the extra fingers
Third, improve your inpainting so you could fix the other issues in your art, like that messed up bikini in the beach pic with the blonde
And lastly, be as constructive with yourself as you'd expect from the people willing to support your game. learn to identify the flaws in your art, and fix them, it'll save you a lot of effort having to redo it after the community brings it up with you
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I couldn't help but notice you have 6 fingers on your left hand..

Hello, my name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die!

 

[sword new new]

good game

 

[Mori91]

Will have to try this game out.

 

[rhawke]

oh my god the li's were so hot but you just had to shove ntr in this
please put an ntr tag

God dammit yeah I finally saw a game with art I liked and didn't see the NTR tag so was excited to give it a try. Guess it's a pass

 

[zyx0110]

its art porn ai game i know it

 

[xXwankerXx]

My best advice to you?

Thanks for the feedback!

Appreciate you taking the time!

Fourth, please stop making that meme-level dumbass MC and his flashy beer belly simp for the gorgeous blonde 'goddess'... please. His simping is making me wanna go grab a bazooka and give him a fatality ending, ffs.

Mr.Voxel enough is enough. That MC needs a reality check, one that judging from the intro scene, the bois are about to give him. Ngl, a slow-mo replay there would be pretty fun to watch and, hopefully, a therapeutical experience that'll make him get his shit together and spend more time in the gym than gaming or masturbating to porn/his 'goddess'.

If the MC's that stupid he can't seem to understand that most attractive women, especially the younger ones, according to their own admission, are attracted to fit, handsome guys with confidence and game, even if they're bullshitters like Maxi boi there for the most part, he deserves to get his ass whooped and cucked.

Sorry, not sorry. You call this the 'benefits' of someone's poor life choices, OR, the funnier equivalent, the dildo of consequences rarely arrives lubed. Don't bitch about it, just do better and don't put yourself in that situation.

who ended up being your favorite so far?
I’m really curious to know which character people are liking the most.

Personality and looks-wise, the overall best picks are Astrid and Valeria for me and probably most players... Val's juicy big booty is an omega level threat to any red-blooded man, single or in a relationship. Looks-wise only (so far), it's lil miss not-so-perfect Zoe and her bestie Riley, but honestly speaking, all of them look great, LIs and side girls.

Personal tastes aside, the personality's the only thing you decide which type of relationship you want your MC to have with them.

the li's were so hot but you just had to shove ntr in this
please put an ntr tag

didn't see the NTR tag so was excited to give it a try

Unless I missed that part, there was no actual NTR in the game. Only scene you probably misinterpreted as one was the Val x Hector scene in the bathroom and the pic on her phone of her sucking her man's dick.

Not gonna deny they were pointless and add absolutely nothing constructive to the story, but you can't call those two NTR. If someone else fucks Zoe, Riley, or even Astrid before the MC, you can call that realism, not NTR.

Simps and temu wannabe white knights get put in the simp/friendzone, while the other, more competent guys get to smash and/or get commitment from the women. It is what it is, tho being a simp or friendzone rubber ducky IS a choice, not a requirement.

 

[rhawke]

Fourth, please stop making that meme-level dumbass MC and his flashy beer belly simp for the gorgeous blonde 'goddess'... please. His simping is making me wanna go grab a bazooka and give him a fatality ending, ffs.

Mr.Voxel enough is enough. That MC needs a reality check, one that judging from the intro scene, the bois are about to give him. Ngl, a slow-mo replay there would be pretty fun to watch and, hopefully, a therapeutical experience that'll make him get his shit together and spend more time in the gym than gaming or masturbating to porn/his 'goddess'.

If the MC's that stupid he can't seem to understand that most attractive women, especially the younger ones, according to their own admission, are attracted to fit, handsome guys with confidence and game, even if they're bullshitters like Maxi boi there for the most part, he deserves to get his ass whooped and cucked.

Sorry, not sorry. You call this the 'benefits' of someone's poor life choices, OR, the funnier equivalent, the dildo of consequences rarely arrives lubed. Don't bitch about it, just do better and don't put yourself in that situation.



Personality and looks-wise, the overall best picks are Astrid and Valeria for me and probably most players... Val's juicy big booty is an omega level threat to any red-blooded man, single or in a relationship. Looks-wise only (so far), it's lil miss not-so-perfect Zoe and her bestie Riley, but honestly speaking, all of them look great, LIs and side girls.

Personal tastes aside, the personality's the only thing you decide which type of relationship you want your MC to have with them.




Unless I missed that part, there was no actual NTR in the game. Only scene you probably misinterpreted as one was the Val x Hector scene in the bathroom and the pic on her phone of her sucking her man's dick.

Not gonna deny they were pointless and add absolutely nothing constructive to the story, but you can't call those two NTR. If someone else fucks Zoe, Riley, or even Astrid before the MC, you can call that realism, not NTR.

Simps and temu wannabe white knights get put in the simp/friendzone, while the other, more competent guys get to smash and/or get commitment from the women. It is what it is, tho being a simp or friendzone rubber ducky IS a choice, not a requirement.

I haven't played the game, just saw that somebody said NTR but if what you described is the case then I'll give it a go, the artwork is great.

 

[marvelfreak3000]

Lol. Instead of "landlady" we now have "godmother". It seems that devs are starting to become more creative on avoiding the "I" word in games now days. No matter how much paint you put on a house to make it look better it's still a house underneath it all.

 

[lynnkh]

wow ~~!!!! perpect~!!

 

[Amberlus]

Tnk

 

[Mr.Voxel]

Fourth, please stop making that meme-level dumbass MC and his flashy beer belly simp for the gorgeous blonde 'goddess'... please. His simping is making me wanna go grab a bazooka and give him a fatality ending, ffs.

Mr.Voxel enough is enough. That MC needs a reality check, one that judging from the intro scene, the bois are about to give him. Ngl, a slow-mo replay there would be pretty fun to watch and, hopefully, a therapeutical experience that'll make him get his shit together and spend more time in the gym than gaming or masturbating to porn/his 'goddess'.

If the MC's that stupid he can't seem to understand that most attractive women, especially the younger ones, according to their own admission, are attracted to fit, handsome guys with confidence and game, even if they're bullshitters like Maxi boi there for the most part, he deserves to get his ass whooped and cucked.

Sorry, not sorry. You call this the 'benefits' of someone's poor life choices, OR, the funnier equivalent, the dildo of consequences rarely arrives lubed. Don't bitch about it, just do better and don't put yourself in that situation.



Personality and looks-wise, the overall best picks are Astrid and Valeria for me and probably most players... Val's juicy big booty is an omega level threat to any red-blooded man, single or in a relationship. Looks-wise only (so far), it's lil miss not-so-perfect Zoe and her bestie Riley, but honestly speaking, all of them look great, LIs and side girls.

Personal tastes aside, the personality's the only thing you decide which type of relationship you want your MC to have with them.




Unless I missed that part, there was no actual NTR in the game. Only scene you probably misinterpreted as one was the Val x Hector scene in the bathroom and the pic on her phone of her sucking her man's dick.

Not gonna deny they were pointless and add absolutely nothing constructive to the story, but you can't call those two NTR. If someone else fucks Zoe, Riley, or even Astrid before the MC, you can call that realism, not NTR.

Simps and temu wannabe white knights get put in the simp/friendzone, while the other, more competent guys get to smash and/or get commitment from the women. It is what it is, tho being a simp or friendzone rubber ducky IS a choice, not a requirement.

Hey, thanks for taking the time to write all of that. I genuinely appreciate when someone takes the game seriously and looks deeper than the surface.


And yeah, I completely understand your point about the MC. The “simp” behavior he shows at certain moments isn’t accidental — it’s part of where he starts as a character. He’s young, he comes from a complicated past, and he’s in that stage of life where many people still don’t fully understand their own value or how to navigate the real world.

The only thing I can say without spoilers is that Leon isn’t meant to stay that way. His personal growth is an important part of the story, and there will be moments that force him to mature and change.

He won’t turn into an “alpha” overnight, but he will have a clear evolution as the story progresses.


Thanks again for giving the project a chance — really means a lot.