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He is 100% right tho, that was straight up rape. Even someone like me who mostly plays harem games that was just fucked up. both party had no consent prior to the "sex" hell Mc was paralyzed physically, with no way of even verbally accepting/rejecting it. Date-rape drug comes to mind is what mc got equivalent to real life.While calling it a "rape scene" is a bit extreme, I will admit that while writing, I struggled with the elements of it. Trying to figure out where exactly to put in an "out" for the handful of people who might be upset by it, while keeping the overall feel and intention of the scene, in its entirety, for the 99.5% of people who want all the girls, no matter what.
After speaking with those who help me beta test, I think we've come to a reasonable conclusion on how to address it, while keeping the scene the way it is.
I'm going to add in a choice menu at the point where Oscar asks you to make your "Will saving throw". You will get to CHOOSE if you save or fail.
If you CHOOSE to save, you'll get the beginning images to setup what is happening, and then skip the worst of it and go straight to the resulting conversation. After all, it's the same girl who has touched your junk before (Back at the end of C2).
If you CHOOSE to fail, you'll play out the scene as written, with no additional changes.
Both choices will be explained upon presentation, so that you can make an informed decision.
I'll have a patch available shortly, and update the game files overall sometime tonight.
Edit: Patch is now available on the main post of the thread.
I want to touch on a couple of the things you said, and hopefully not spoil anythingDrooskati:
Excellent story and game (Wishlisted so far). However about the RP aspect I have a concern about that scene though, ignoring the rape angle (which is still troubling), the issue I have is that Rey's ability is way too OP., She is still learning (a self-taught ability) but she just mind controlled a mage (that's way over what she did to the stable dude, which was just planting some suggestions in his mind)
If her ability progresses (as is expected) Rey could make the rest of the party irrelevant, or at least make a few members irrelevant, redundant or mostly pointless (after all, if you can mind control the enemies....)
She should have some counter/drawback to that ability, even if you rationalize the scene by saying that what happened happened because the MC is basically willing to get her doing "the same" so that is why it was possible, it doesn't make it less troubling from a balancing point of view, because let's face it, eventually she'll become so proficient in her ability that she could do it, even if the target of the mind control opposes her.
A few ideas for drawbacks:
- Using her ability beyond a point will render her highly suggestible for some time (she can control someone, but in turn she can end up doing whatever she is told to)
- She loses part of her humanity or sanity every time she uses her ability (eventually she goes insane and/or evil and betrays the rest)
- Her body ages or gets weaker (a bit cliched, but still works)
Extreme? Even if you want to have sex with her (and I did), paralyzing someone and fucking them is rape. Especially if you haven't even had sex with them before. Being paralyzed is terrifying, even if it's just sleep paralysis and you're alone. I felt very uncomfortable about the whole thing, especially since I had agree that raping me is OK or I miss out on the sex scene. Then I'm forced to suggest she try it out on my girlfriend nextWhile calling it a "rape scene" is a bit extreme, I will admit that while writing, I struggled with the elements of it. Trying to figure out where exactly to put in an "out" for the handful of people who might be upset by it, while keeping the overall feel and intention of the scene, in its entirety, for the 99.5% of people who want all the girls, no matter what.
You nearly just described almost word for word the protagonist of Disney's Star Wars trilogy lol.Drooskati:
the issue I have is that Rey's ability is way too OP., She is still learning (a self-taught ability) but she just mind controlled a mage (that's way over what she did to the stable dude, which was just planting some suggestions in his mind)
If her ability progresses (as is expected) Rey could make the rest of the party irrelevant, or at least make a few members irrelevant, redundant or mostly pointless
A will saving throw is an essential mechanic of the pen & paper (originally) and adventure RPGs which is also a foundation of the story in Between Two Worlds. The saving throw mechanics has been around for decades now and determines how story and events progress (or not) in said games.That option before the scene made no sense too, like what the hell is a "will saving throw"?? this whole scene could've went abit better and more light hearted than what we got.
Just to further elaborate on this, for those who might not know. In the kind of game that the characters are playing, they have specific stats. One of those stats is essentially "Willpower", which is based on your mental fortitude. When you make a save, you roll a 20 sided die, and add your will save stat to the result of that roll. If your "save" is lower than the "DC", or difficulty class, of the spell or ability being used, then you fail the save and are subject to the results of that spell or ability.A will saving throw is an essential mechanic of the pen & paper (originally) and adventure RPGs which is also a foundation of the story in Between Two Worlds. The saving throw mechanics has been around for decades now and determines how story and events progress (or not) in said games.
Personally, I've been playing RPGs for decades! and I've seen harsher situations in kids' games.
That scene may not be everyone's cup of tea but fits in the narrative, and let's not forget that it happens in the fantasy world.
Rape is hot deal with it nerbWow, that rape scene is really fucked up. And the only reactions are basically "fuck yeah keep going" and "hey I don't blame you for paralyzing and raping me, but for future reference consent is important mmkay."
I want to touch on a couple of the things you said, and hopefully not spoil anything
The reason she is/was able to manipulate the MC, is actually explained directly in the scene. She actually says it to him. Inserting the thought into his mind was easy, because of the kind of person he is (Again, we're referring to the game world version of the MC, not the real world version). He tends to be a sexually forward person, always ready to get laid. She says to him, "Getting control for this was like pouring water into a river." By his own nature, the thought she was implanting was one he would have already had in his mind, whether he was aware of it or not. This makes the hypnotic suggestion SIGNIFICANTLY easier to pull off, even on a more advanced magic user such as himself.
As for being too strong, near the end of the chapter she is shown being very much so weak. If she can't use her abilities, she actually becomes a liability, which is shown in the game. Again, I can't go into much detail here, because I'd prefer not to spoil it, but those who have played through C4 should know what I'm referring to.
As for your suggestions, not half bad. While it's certainly something to keep in mind, there are certain difficulties that ALL of the characters will be facing soon, which will likely render any perceived advantage moot Just remember, the game isn't meant to continue being RP. The game inside the game, will be more than a game. (That was weird to type...)
Exactly. One of the things I'm trying to do is build MEANINGFUL relationships between the characters. They are already really good and close friends. Even with a bit of subliminal influencing, it should take a little bit of time to make the leap from platonic to lovers, at least if it's intended to mean anything. And it's all being done while the underlying story builds up, before it takes over the entire thing and prevents that previous relationship buildingThat is right - it does take up so much of the plot and even of the hot scenes.
We are still in a realistic, contemporary world setting, such games are used to enhance relationships and
should drive MC and his babes into hot steamy action afterwards, at least a stronger bond,
the plot of it - run by a game master who is also a game designer in the realistic game world,
just prooves it is a scheme to fill the time and bond social ties into the game characters.
And that's the way to do it!Exactly. One of the things I'm trying to do is build MEANINGFUL relationships between the characters. They are already really good and close friends. Even with a bit of subliminal influencing, it should take a little bit of time to make the leap from platonic to lovers, at least if it's intended to mean anything. And it's all being done while the underlying story builds up, before it takes over the entire thing and prevents that previous relationship building
Real MC could have jumped out of character to stop it even if he couldn't in-game, but because it's all roleplaying anyway, you could hear MC's thoughts/real world speech even though he couldn't speak in-character, and his character will never not want sex, he wouldn't have wanted to stop it.Wow, that rape scene is really fucked up. And the only reactions are basically "fuck yeah keep going" and "hey I don't blame you for paralyzing and raping me, but for future reference consent is important mmkay."
This is the core of it. The "game world" character that the MC plays fucks anything that moves. It's not rape if you want it to happen, and it's been made abundantly clear that the "game world" version of MC wants it. The only reason that the option exists to "stop" it after regaining control, is for the player to indicate that they may not be interested in Kaylee as a character.Real MC could have jumped out of character to stop it even if he couldn't in-game, but because it's all roleplaying anyway, you could hear MC's thoughts/real world speech even though he couldn't speak in-character, and his character will never not want sex, he wouldn't have wanted to stop it.
That's an improvement, but the 'rape' scene is still an extremely tangled ball of problems.While calling it a "rape scene" is a bit extreme, I will admit that while writing, I struggled with the elements of it. Trying to figure out where exactly to put in an "out" for the handful of people who might be upset by it, while keeping the overall feel and intention of the scene, in its entirety, for the 99.5% of people who want all the girls, no matter what.
After speaking with those who help me beta test, I think we've come to a reasonable conclusion on how to address it, while keeping the scene the way it is.
I'm going to add in a choice menu at the point where Oscar asks you to make your "Will saving throw". You will get to CHOOSE if you save or fail.
If you CHOOSE to save, you'll get the beginning images to setup what is happening, and then skip the worst of it and go straight to the resulting conversation. After all, it's the same girl who has touched your junk before (Back at the end of C2).
If you CHOOSE to fail, you'll play out the scene as written, with no additional changes.
Both choices will be explained upon presentation, so that you can make an informed decision.
I'll have a patch available shortly, and update the game files overall sometime tonight.
Edit: Patch is now available on the main post of the thread.
This is a another thorny issue I don't have time to delve into, but just because the MC's character is a promiscuous womanizer, that in no way indicates he'd enjoy being raped. The fact that Reyliana effectively removes not only his ability to consent, but his ability to resist at all, is a complete game-changer.So in this situation, our game world version of the main character is a bit of an oversexed womanizer. Just a bit. So he would be more susceptible to a mental suggestion involving sexual activities. This kind of thing is typically at the discretion of the DM (In this case, Oscar).
Hope this helps.