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VN Ren'Py Between Worlds [v0.1.7 PIII] [RolePlayer]

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GetOutOfMyLab

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SlapE said:
Listen, while the game does have some things going for it, let's be honest... the writing is just mediocre plain and simple. The "writing style" is irrelevant. It reads like it was written by some teenager who gets all of their information and inspiration for anything erotic from reddit and your average porn videos. The character writing is especially drivel. Most of the characters radiate immaturity, and the male characters are mostly just low life creeps and scum that have zero tact. Quite a few of the characters feel like they have no purpose other than to be varying depictions of different types of creeps and dumb clichés.

As someone who reads a lot and understands good writing, I don't need to be a game designer, in an armchair or otherwise, to say any of this.

The visuals are really good, and I love the character models for the women. The dynamic between the MC and a few of the characters was nice as well, that I enjoyed. I couldn't get past the writing however, especially when it came down to any of the interactions with the other male characters, more-so the antagonistic ones. There was one male character that I didn't despise but... that's not enough to make me wanna read through it anymore.
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This is among my favorites right now, but more due to the characters and sexuality. I've made my thoughts on the writing known quite a while ago: https://f95zone.to/threads/between-worlds-v0-1-6-part-i-roleplayer.129383/post-10628288

IMO, devs should limit narration and internal monologues to 3 lines, maybe 4... a lot of narration can be replaced with visuals. Like, don't narrate to us that an LI is longing for MC's touch, show us through facial expressions and what not.

The other male characters are there for a specific purpose and it's obvious what. It would be nice if they had more character development other than, "Hi, can I watch her get naked?" These are things that could still be improved on in the future.
 
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Just finished 1.6 (part 1) I know I'm late to the party.. :D and I was hoping for more sharing scenes like
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but I'll admit the
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so dev RP can just go with the flow with his vision and what he wanted us to see. I agree with GOOML with the monologues. This is definitely added to my favorites. Can't wait to see the next part and what's to unfold
 
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Wirwawlp said:
Just finished 1.6 (part 1) I know I'm late to the party.. :D and I was hoping for more sharing scenes like
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but I'll admit the
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so dev RP can just go with the flow with his vision and what he wanted us to see. I agree with GOOML with the monologues. This is definitely added to my favorites. Can't wait to see the next part and what's to unfold
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I hope the build up continues until one night, where its like, destined deflowering. And you can either keep her at home or encourage her to go over to his house. Like, MC is knowingly, undeniably, allowing another man :3

But I think even if MC does deflower Freya first, it should not lock anyone into a route. Rather, sharing can still be possible, as you say
 
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SlapE said:
Listen, while the game does have some things going for it, let's be honest... the writing is just mediocre plain and simple. The "writing style" is irrelevant. It reads like it was written by some teenager who gets all of their information and inspiration for anything erotic from reddit and your average porn videos. The character writing is especially drivel. Most of the characters radiate immaturity, and the male characters are mostly just low life creeps and scum that have zero tact. Quite a few of the characters feel like they have no purpose other than to be varying depictions of different types of creeps and dumb clichés.

As someone who reads a lot and understands good writing, I don't need to be a game designer, in an armchair or otherwise, to say any of this.

The visuals are really good, and I love the character models for the women. The dynamic between the MC and a few of the characters was nice as well, that I enjoyed. I couldn't get past the writing however, especially when it came down to any of the interactions with the other male characters, more-so the antagonistic ones. There was one male character that I didn't despise but... that's not enough to make me wanna read through it anymore.
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Yeah sadly I've agreed with you - and if Dev reads these he shouldn't take that as harsh criticism, I enjoy what he does and he does many things well; the art is way above average, the character models are very attractive, and the posing and lighting is great, the shot direction is sound.

It feels like an engineer trying to do marketing, or vice versa. Almost like he should hire a writer and focus 100% on the artwork, ala "Do more of what you're good at and do less of what you're not good at".
 
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GetOutOfMyLab said:
This is among my favorites right now, but more due to the characters and sexuality. I've made my thoughts on the writing known quite a while ago: https://f95zone.to/threads/between-worlds-v0-1-6-part-i-roleplayer.129383/post-10628288

IMO, devs should limit narration and internal monologues to 3 lines, maybe 4... a lot of narration can be replaced with visuals. Like, don't narrate to us that an LI is longing for MC's touch, show us through facial expressions and what not.

The other male characters are there for a specific purpose and it's obvious what. It would be nice if they had more character development other than, "Hi, can I watch her get naked?" These are things that could still be improved on in the future.
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Yeah I'm not a big fan of oversaturated inner-monologues either, but I was more-so talking about the quality of the writing in general. It's definitely not the worst writing I've seen, there's way worse out there... but it was below average in my opinion. When it comes to AVN's, especially when it comes to netorase/sharing ones, if the writing isn't at least above average, I usually don't enjoy it.

The visuals are really freaking good too, and I honestly think this game has so much potential. With good writing, especially improved character writing, this would probably be one of my favorite games, at least top 20. That's just me though, I see some people really enjoy the game and that's fine. I'm just someone who really values writing in games and when it comes to story driven games, it's really important for what I'm reading to not make me internally cringe or get bored, otherwise I'd rather just read something else. :D
 
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Pr0GamerJohnny said:
Yeah sadly I've agreed with you - and if Dev reads these he shouldn't take that as harsh criticism, I enjoy what he does and he does many things well; the art is way above average, the character models are very attractive, and the posing and lighting is great, the shot direction is sound.

It feels like an engineer trying to do marketing, or vice versa. Almost like he should hire a writer and focus 100% on the artwork, ala "Do more of what you're good at and do less of what you're not good at".
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This is what he will definitely do in the future :) but currently, finance is a big problem.
 
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Between Worlds [v0.1.5-PartIII] Unofficial Android Port + RiamMar's WT Mod

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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

Saves location: Storage/0011/Game-name


You can also join my discord server for more and support me.

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Please update your Android port.
 
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soldadohackero

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I do not understand well. In this forum we have version 0.1.6 (Part I) but version (Part II) has just been released.
I mean, is there still an update to the game that we haven't seen?
 
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baka said:
tell that to all other devs as well. how often do we get a release from Stoper or Lust & Passion?
and most other devs?
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True, and having played the latest update (not currently available on f95) I can confidently say it was WELL WORTH THE WAIT!
This developer has earned my confidence. I'll gladly wait 2 months if it means quality over quantity.
 
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Great game, played it once didn't like it. Tried it again can't stop playing. Very good, looking forward for more updates.
 
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Since the Changelog on Page 1 was kind of vague, I wrote this out for ya'll.
0.1 Released Sep 3, 2022 Day 0 & Began Day 1 (Freya wet clothing)
0.1.1 Released Oct 15, 2022 Finished Day 1 (All the way to Freya masturbation)
0.1.2 Released Dec 30, 2022 The Full Day 2 (Nora, Evelyn, Freya bath, etc)

0.1.3 Released Mar 9, 2023 The Full Day 3 (I played to make certain)
0.1.4 Released Apr 24, 2023 The Full Day 4 (Fluff until toggle for Travis content)
0.1.5 (P1) Released May 27, 2023 Day 5 - Evelyn Scene (potential randolf cumshot)
0.1.5 (P2) Released Jul 12, 2023 Day 5 - Tavern content (light flashing)
0.1.5 (P3) Released Aug 23, 2023 Day 5 - Vica Sex + Travis Humps
0.1.6 (P1) Released Oct 09, 2023 Day 6 - Morning with Freya / HJ from Meralda
0.1.6 (P2) Released Dec 01, 2023 Day 6 & Day 7 - Freya x Tailor / Evelyn x Randolf

As you can see, things started getting spicy with 0.15
 
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4.10 star(s) 42 Votes