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All I'm here for is Freya and sadly no Freya content this update.Is there any Freya or Meralda ntr/nts content in this update? If not, easy skip
Joshy92
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Holy shit this was great. I know it's a beta, so more stuff will be added, and it will flow better then, but for now what I saw was very good.
Evelyn is so awesome, and she has some real chemistry with Randolf. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Evelyn is so awesome, and she has some real chemistry with Randolf. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Febui
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It's been a long while since I visited this. I resume from Freya coming out of the hut crying, there are days glossed over where she goes to bed sobbing but is comforted by Leo. Then off to this snowy village to kill everyone, but it's not a fortress, there's just regular folk here.
And I am finding all the prose and dialog so unnatural. Also when did Leo learn the Vulcan neck pinch? I don't remember that.
And we're standing out here in the middle of the day and then "You rose slowly from the log he sat on, brushing dirt from his travel-worn cloak."
What? I feel out of the loop. And then the rest of the scene doesn't explain that bit.
I've been away from this for too long, I have no memory of this sword and no idea why it is called a spear (at first it said 'like a divine spear' but then it kept calling it a spear in the scene, how you drive your spear into it, etc)
"Not untill the job is done, Besides, you should have seen the other guy." One L in until, and lowercase "besides" or change the comma after done to a period if you want Besides to stay capitalized. I'm not personally a fan of the joke of saying "you should have seen the other guy" here, especially since she literally was here in the fight just now, participating in it. It's a gag, I know, but here? Ehhh....
Too many similes are happening throughout this script, I feel. "it was [adjective], like a [comparison]" a lot. "it did [thing] as if [similar thing]"
None of this prose is working for me, have I just been away from this for so long that I'm not invested anymore? It makes me want to skip past all the "plot" and just get back to the character relationships. I just don't care about any of this nonsense, I want to get back to Evelyn and Freya cucking me.
In the arena. "You sidestep just in time, then deliver a crushing elbow into his ribs. The crowd gasps. Your opponent stumbles." I know I just criticized a gag, but I would have loved if it turned into that fight club scene from the Sherlock movie. Discombobulate.
Eh. Evelyn-Randolf is really lackluster. The dialog sucks. Motivations feel shallow. Though it does say WIP so whatever I guess. Perhaps the dev feels it's been too long and some kind of update needs to come out to show work is being done.
"your cocks straining against the confines of your breeches" but Leo isn't wearing anything. He was just stroking his dick a couple renders ago.
"her eyes sparkling with a blend of love, trust, and a newfound, wicked hunger" aside from how generic it sounds, newfound? It was new way back in the other scenes we already saw, in the house, in the meadow, at the lake. This hunger isn't new, it's already well developed.
The scene doesn't feel like a continuation of Evelyn-Randolf. It should probably be scrapped and rewritten. Beta is beta, I suppose.
And I am finding all the prose and dialog so unnatural. Also when did Leo learn the Vulcan neck pinch? I don't remember that.
And we're standing out here in the middle of the day and then "You rose slowly from the log he sat on, brushing dirt from his travel-worn cloak."
What? I feel out of the loop. And then the rest of the scene doesn't explain that bit.
I've been away from this for too long, I have no memory of this sword and no idea why it is called a spear (at first it said 'like a divine spear' but then it kept calling it a spear in the scene, how you drive your spear into it, etc)
"Not untill the job is done, Besides, you should have seen the other guy." One L in until, and lowercase "besides" or change the comma after done to a period if you want Besides to stay capitalized. I'm not personally a fan of the joke of saying "you should have seen the other guy" here, especially since she literally was here in the fight just now, participating in it. It's a gag, I know, but here? Ehhh....
Too many similes are happening throughout this script, I feel. "it was [adjective], like a [comparison]" a lot. "it did [thing] as if [similar thing]"
None of this prose is working for me, have I just been away from this for so long that I'm not invested anymore? It makes me want to skip past all the "plot" and just get back to the character relationships. I just don't care about any of this nonsense, I want to get back to Evelyn and Freya cucking me.
In the arena. "You sidestep just in time, then deliver a crushing elbow into his ribs. The crowd gasps. Your opponent stumbles." I know I just criticized a gag, but I would have loved if it turned into that fight club scene from the Sherlock movie. Discombobulate.
Eh. Evelyn-Randolf is really lackluster. The dialog sucks. Motivations feel shallow. Though it does say WIP so whatever I guess. Perhaps the dev feels it's been too long and some kind of update needs to come out to show work is being done.
"your cocks straining against the confines of your breeches" but Leo isn't wearing anything. He was just stroking his dick a couple renders ago.
"her eyes sparkling with a blend of love, trust, and a newfound, wicked hunger" aside from how generic it sounds, newfound? It was new way back in the other scenes we already saw, in the house, in the meadow, at the lake. This hunger isn't new, it's already well developed.
The scene doesn't feel like a continuation of Evelyn-Randolf. It should probably be scrapped and rewritten. Beta is beta, I suppose.
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Febui
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Seems someone is working on it and expects it next week, but there's not really any reason for it to exist anymore. The old one still works for all the choices up to a few updates ago, and the choices added since then don't need it.
maelontuchanka
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Haven't played this in a while. I wonder if there's enough content for another playrthrough...
Rake Tyler
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Will the protagonist be able to go to other worlds or other places? Who knows, we'll see because I liked that part with those creatures even though it was quick
Dimitry710
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I loved the game, the morbid feeling of sharing and the sensation of something different is truly beautiful, it's literally morbid and I love it. Honestly, there are very few games that dare to do this, most of them are "Harem" and that's it. I love that games come out that let you explore your darkest side. You've earned a Patreon.
Nice game But please animate all scenes and where are sounds and moans during animated scenes?
But please animate all scenes and where are sounds and moans during animated scenes? was wondering why this scene was not showing up despite having chosen all the "traditional" ntr/cuck options, and after a quick look I found it actually was in the update, but it's locked behind a single specific value statement.
so you'll only see it if if you picked the option where mc leaves eve and ranfolf alone and be a voyeur, you can't access the scene if you pick to the more "beta" option to cum prematurely way back at the lake with randolf.
anyways, if anybody wants to let the dev know about this slight oversight, feel free to do so. I just edited my own save.
edit: after another look at the script, it seems like there is an obvious empty space for an alternative scene (aka the "consequence") for being more "beta" and cumming first/before randolf, not sure when that will be implemented considering this was supposed to be the ntrs update, but will definitely be looking forward to randolf taking charge if it happens. As mentioned by the mc, there is just something about seeing a "better" man last way longer despite being the one getting the attention while the cuck finishes early jerking off to it.
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Devs QQ about doesn't have time yet they waste 80% of their renders on side no-erotic stories!!!
WTF is this thief story try to say?!!
WTF is this thief story try to say?!!
Tyrranus
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man the english in this update needs a ton of work, even for a beta
ChangFaser
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The plot is laid out, and the simple pornography lacks a sense of immersion.