VN Ren'Py Beyond Tomorrow [Ch.2] [Dream Games]

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Just Jericho

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I'm just wondering why that blouse isn't on the floor yet.
Patience, brother! That will probably happen around maybe chapter 7 or 8 at the earliest since this is a "slow burn" and we can't be too hasty. There will of course be another round or two of reworks before then... and perhaps a bout of erectile dysfunction the MC might need to overcome as a plot device before there can be any sex. :HideThePain:
 

fishbrain

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Patience, brother! That will probably happen around maybe chapter 7 or 8 at the earliest since this is a "slow burn" and we can't be too hasty. There will of course be another round or two of reworks before then... and perhaps a bout of erectile dysfunction the MC might need to overcome as a plot device before there can be any sex. :HideThePain:
No way those melons are contained that long, I'll just wait for the spillover.
 

LostGhost

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It's funny, because Vidal was one of the guys who didn't like that Sam was the forced MC's gf from the start. Among the many people who didn't like this either. Well, Vidal is monogamous, so it's a problem for him if he doesn't like Sam.

I, on the other hand, was a little skeptical about Sam's role in the old version, but for a different reason. Sam was just too perfect, in my opinion. Even though she was meant to be some kind of friend with a benefit, she was definitely a wife material. Loving, caring, sexy, empathetic, always there for the MC. And I just don't understand from the MC's perspective why he would want to dump her unless she did something really fucked up. So it felt like the other LIs started at a huge handicap compared to Sam, and in my opinion, that was bad for the game. I liked her very much but it looked like Sam's personal show.

So what should the developer have done to make us all happy despite the opposing views?

Now everyone can get what they want, Martin is clearly pushing the MC towards a relationship with Sam, and I believe that such an opportunity will soon appear in the game. And I am much more interested in Susan, so I think I will tell Martin to hold his horses and take care of his personal life :)
Idk about you guys but this bestfriend li trope is freakin worse trope ever so a relationship between them from beginning is much better than going through the same plot.

If I'm here I'm only here for story so the forced gf thing is not a problem at all since she's the best girl out there and I must say this dev lacks knack for relationship development especially romantic ones,i know it's a hard take for ep2 but something is off with ever relationship between every characters and their interactions,it's pretty inconsistent for ch2.
9/10 renders but 5/10 story and writing.
 
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Raynare69

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Okay, so I came here because I saw Casey and I'm still 100% all in for her! My goodness she's amazing! XD

After doing some digging I saw that she MIGHT(?) be a possible LI. Has there been any update to this?
If she's an LI count me in as being all in! :love:

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Lewd stuff aside, this story hits really close to home... :cry:
Great start to the story, interested to find out what's going on.
 
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yossa999

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Idk about you guys but this bestfriend li trope is freakin worse trope ever so a relationship between them from beginning is much better than going through the same plot.

If I'm here I'm only here for story so the forced gf thing is not a problem at all since she's the best girl out there and I must say this dev lacks knack for relationship development especially romantic ones,i know it's a hard take for ep2 but something is off with ever relationship between every characters and their interactions,it's pretty inconsistent for ch2.
9/10 renders but 5/10 story and writing.
Dunno, probably the next chapters are what is off now :KEK:

I felt like the plot picked up steam in the first chapter and about halfway through the second, and then it went at a pace that I was comfortable with. As for relationship building, there wasn't much of it yet, so it's hard to judge.

However, I don't think that it's important anymore.
 
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Dessolos

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Idk about you guys but this bestfriend li trope is freakin worse trope ever so a relationship between them from beginning is much better than going through the same plot.
Depends how it is handled for me cause I perfer LI that feel like they are a friend first that that kind of works best for me unless it's the typical LI is afraid to show she likes the MC and she gets jealous etc etc.
 
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Idk about you guys but this bestfriend li trope is freakin worse trope ever so a relationship between them from beginning is much better than going through the same plot.

If I'm here I'm only here for story so the forced gf thing is not a problem at all since she's the best girl out there and I must say this dev lacks knack for relationship development especially romantic ones,i know it's a hard take for ep2 but something is off with ever relationship between every characters and their interactions,it's pretty inconsistent for ch2.
9/10 renders but 5/10 story and writing.
as a monogamy player that hates open relationships and force girlfriends and doesn't like to cheat

I absolutely hate having a force girlfriend at the beginning cuz what the hell am I supposed to do

I'd much rather have a best friend and I choose if I want to pursue her or not
 
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bl00drush

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render quality on this is amazing. bunch of really attractive lasses aswell, like more or less every single chick in this va is hot. usually it's like one or two gals that tickle my fancy and then i end up hoping that those are the ones that end up being lis, but here idc because i'd be down with pretty much any of them tbh.

saw a bunch of reviewers malding over the lack of "action" and i get it (considering where we are), but personally i don't mind. it's only two episodes so far, so still a lot of time for the "good stuff" to show up. so far i like the world/character building in this. i apreciate a complex story with the occasional adult scenes (that make sense) over a bunch of meaningless fuckeries with terrible bits of story inbetween that basically just serves as a filler. not saying that those vas can't be fun, but there's more than enough of those already.

definitely keeping my eye on this one for sure.
 

Maviarab

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*sighs*...finally got around to this now all the rework shit done...well..what can you say...yet another fucking VN with a pointless crime/drama plot. It's like every other fucking VN lately....the mom in hospital/MC life going to shit is more than a good enough story on its own....

Anyway....it's good enough currently to keep following, girls are hot, despite the Dev being a typical VN fan of women having inflatable fucking melons for breasts *sighs..why ruin Casey like that?*....regardless, time for Bingo Card time.

On the 25/26 bingo card:
Dad still very much in touch with mom....
Dad also involved with the reason Jasmin is in a wheelchair and Megan keeping her hidden
Jasmin has potentially figured this out
Dad the one creeping around the house
Dad going to be involved with Sasha's father....
It's going to get a damn site more convoluted and intertwined than it already is...cus...seems to be the in-fucking thing to do with VN's these days.
Will finally come out this is Ocean's secret project.
The dev will fix his opening 'created by' screen to spell his own fucking game studio name correctly?
 

nitkonikic

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Oh man, I completely forgot about this one.
Only remember I hated MC. Let's see if I can make him suffer some more.
 

Pedro - Artemis

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Ch3 | Status Update #4

Hello everyone,So far, there’s been a good amount of progress on the writing side. I’ve worked on some important branching, spent time writing dialogue, and planned out a few interesting events

Despite all the criticism Chapter 2 received, I’m still pretty happy that the most important things were introduced and said. Thanks to that, we can move forward with clearer and better chapters - starting with Chapter 3

Not sure how much writing is left at this point (I don’t even want to guess), but it’s going smoothly

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In the last dev log, I mentioned the gym scene. It’s a pretty big scene, but there’s been some solid progress. I finished the visuals and rendered 125 images so far. There’s still more work to do, but I’m really liking how it’s turning out

I’m planning to have the whole thing finished by the next dev log. There will probably be some longer render times because of a few animations, but nothing too complicated

While I usually try to be pretty generous with previews, unfortunately, not this time. Everything I could show right now is full of spoilers, so we’ll have to wait for something more suitable

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Just a few words regarding the previous posts about music

To be honest, I expected most people to completely reject the idea of using AI. But it’s really good to know that some of you understand where I’m coming from and are more or less open to certain options

I still haven’t decided if I want to go this route, but it seems like there aren’t many other options to solve this problem. However, like I said, I’m not sure yet, but if I make a decision, you’ll definitely be the first to know

See you next week, stay safe out there! ♥

//Dream
 
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