I do not have the necessary time because I am in time to give my classes, I am attached as the file "intro.txt" is after the intelligent translation of that page, it only loses the format of the order or margin of each line but does not modify anything else .
I doubt that your file works because you have also translated the game directives that are at the top of each line. For example where in the original the line begins with "intro.mom@4@story-mom@" your correspondent is "intro.mom@4@historia-mom@". I'm not sure but I think it's not a good idea to translate these directives. You could, in place, use the files that I attached to post #185. In the RU folder there are the 21 files with the game directives followed by the Russian text and the division symbol (pipe). In the ENNOTAGS folder there are 21 files in English (without html tags). In these files there is ONLY the text to be translated. After it is enough to join the RU lines with the translated ones. To do this, just use Google Sheets. In column A put all the RU lines together and in column G (in the Russian text there are some TABs that occupy columns), paste the translation. If the lines match, just copy the entire sheet and paste it in an open text file with Notepad but taking care to save it with SAVE AS by choosing the UNICODE coding instead of the traditional ANSI. So you have to repeat it 21 times. Otherwise you can use the file I attach (file13ENNOTAGS.txt) where all 21 files are grouped with all 23238 lines of text without html tags (pure text only). If I have this file translated
AND IF ALL LINES WELL OK, I have a simple php procedure that automatically creates the 21 files.
ATTENTION: I have also used the intelligent translation but the result contains the same many errors that you want to forget but, and this is the serious, sometimes adds empty lines (simple case to solve) and, sometimes, combines multiple lines in only one (in this case it is necessary to go to sample to see where these lines are grouped and, when you find them, you have to ungroup them)...