Hi there! I'm mostly a lurker here but I really played this game for the first time this week-end and I really liked it, so I'd like to give some feedback and some suggestions:
Feedback:
1) So, to get the big thing out the way - getting Charlotte's second visit to the doctor is a
chore. She never made more than 200 dollars worth from her instagram and camming even though I maxed all her stats as much as I could, and starts about 6000$ in debt she has to pay off. At some point I had explored pretty much all the game's content so far (reading a few pages back, seems there are a couple character I did not meet or progress enough. I thought I had seen all of June's content for this update, but some are talking about surgery, and she is nowhere near there.) , and I still had to spend about two months jus waking up, giving a 100$ to Charlotte to clean my house naked, then sleeping and going to the next day before she finally had 20 000$. The way it is set up right now clearly does not work. There are a few ways you could fix this - the simplest would be to let us lend money to Charlotte, like we did with Stella. Another would be to give Charlotte new options to make more money every week. And the third would be to lower the amount needed. I prefer 1 and 2, but 3 is probably the simplest for you to implement.
2) There are some times where the text colors get mixed up during dialogue. I didn't note down where, but I will when I replay it, if you want.
3) The storytelling flow is sometimes weird. For example, it came as a total surprise to me that Stella and Charlotte were living with me. I guess this happens when you select to "make her your housebimbo" option, but I chose the employee option, so I never got any event indicating that was the case until I met Bruce's* mom. I think a slight rewrite of this part is needed, cause that is a major plot development that should not happen offscreen. Also, even after they move in, the Charlotte work event still says "Charlotte comes over to work" and "Charlotte goes back home" at times, which does not make sense.
4) There is a bit of ludo-narrative dissonance with the coaching manual you can write - the game says you have planned 10 chapters, yet you can work on it seemingly ad infinitum and write 30+ chapters if you want. Now, I'm guessing that this is because the rest of that plotline is not implemented yet, which is perfectly understable. But in that case, would it be very hard to program the game to stop after ten chapters, tell you you've done all you can do for this update, and not give you that option anymore?
5) Speaking of not giving you the option - after a while, there are a lot of "dead" option cluttering the game, especially at home. I get that this is to allow player to replay their favorite scene to wank to, but I think that eventually a better way to do this could be found. My suggestion would be that at some point (after Stella's first surgery?) you get a new option at your desks called "archive files" or something, and there you could have all the old scenes that you can replay at your leisure. It would fit the narrative of the game, and declutter the menus a bit.
6) Finally, I don't know if this is normal, but after a while, Charlotte "take picture naked" activity alternates between "she's too exhibitionist to get further with this activity" and "she becomes more exhibitionist" Likewise,one of the mom's sex activity (I think it is the dress up one but I'm not sure) has too pages, and even when she is max sluttified from it, the second page of the event still says she got more slutty (but she does not actually get more slutty point-wise).
Okay, that's all the feedback I have. To be clear, I loved the game, and I get that it is a work in progress. These is intended only as a report of where I saw problems, not criticism.
Now to move on to suggestions, i.e. things I'd like to see eventually maybe. I am aware that I am not a patron, therefore my voice doesn't mean much. I wish I could Patron you, but finances are really tight right now and the exchange rate is a bitch. Still, I'd like to give a few ideas, and you can do with them what you will, even ignore them
A) The thing that really turns me on in game like this is the physical transformation, the before/after. I would therefore find it really cool if, in the journal, you could "flip" each character's page to their previous incarnations, as a way to see the timeline of their change. That'd be really cool.
B) This may sounds weird, but the best and hottest part of the transformation for me is the hair. It's my personal little fetish - women who change their hairstyle/hair color. As such, I would love it if one of the character (a current one or future one), could have a bigger focus placed on that decision, maybe with a choice of what color you want her to go for? Stella already did the blonde thing, but it is inconsistent, and she does seem to want to go redhead eventually, so that could be a choice with her next transformation - commit to blonde or go red. Or it could be a new character or one that has not been transformed yet. As long as there is a focus for at least one event and decision on hair, I'd be really, really happy. That said, I know that finding a porn star that has a lot of pictures in two (or more) haircolor is a big limitation tough - usually it's either they change all the time or they stick to one, so I understand if that never happens.
C) A bit related to the previous suggestion, but the beginning of the game mention that there are bimbos in all styles, and shows Goth bimbos. I would love to see a bigger variety of bimbos, but above all I would love an alternative/punk bimbo. You know, short-ish hair with shaved parts, lots of body mods, lots of tattoo, etc.
d) Finally, I am really not a fan of cuckholding as a rule, but I would loooooooove to fuck Tan in front of Rupert and show him how much happier and fulfilled she is with me. Why make an exception to my usual dislike of cucking? Because Ted Cruz is a piece of shit.
