Thank you for your feedback.
To be Honest, The 4th wall breaking and the "Developer" thing was decided in the last moment.
I Will Create a poll in this thread about the whole 4th wall breaking and whether it needs to be in the game or no.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
Sorry for the inconvenience.....
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In my opinion, you can get away with 1 (one) 4th wall breaking joke very early on in the prologue, but you can't overdo it because you will diminish the continuity of the story, even if you're trying to make a joke.
Mind you, you have a good story in here and some interesting characters (at least in the vampire side, I don't care about Diego lmao) so you can only go up from these criticisms
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Thank you for your feedback.
Things considering and definitely reworking:
1.Removing all unwanted and gay scenes.
2.Creating a poll for 4th wall breaking.
3.Adding More female renders than male.
4.Improving writing and storyline depth.
5.Increasing twists and plots.
6.Fixing typos and bad grammar.
All we ask is that you guys give this game a second chance.
Thank you for trying our game.
Thank youGreat... just this image makes me remind of VTMB
Thank you for your feedback.
I will for sure consider it.
Thank you for your feedback.
Yeah as I said earlier, I'm creating a poll for the whole 4th wall breaking thing.
It is a very intriguing Vampire thriller game with a lot of mysteries and twists...but it just got side tracked a bit. (I know it's a lot)
Try to give this game a second chance, as reworking has started.
Thank you for your feedback.Hm. Looks like the general opinion is that the dev needs to play vtmb a couple times to figure out what makes a good vamp game.
I will definitely try it and make this game as good as possible.
Thank you for your feedback.
I will start with the rewriting and reworking of the game right away.
Also thank you for mentioning about the renders.
Have to say, I appreciate the dev's response to criticism in this thread, especially in the face of a lot of negative feedback. It makes me think that this game has the potential to be rewritten into something great. Hope this game can live up to that, and to its inspiration, Vtmb writing and aesthetic is pretty top tier in terms of inspirations, but also sets a pretty high bar to meet.
Thank you for your feedback.
Yeah Episode 2 has some twists and more story depth.
Also I'm reworking on the game.
Sorry but you can only play as a vampire.
But.....There are some twists and mysteries as well.
Yeah....Sorry I made that mistake.
But strongly considering your suggestions.
Also Diego is a more of story driven character....which will be revealed later.
And Thank you for those criticisms....as I'm sure these criticisms will be an eye opener for me.
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The 4th wall breaking, yeah that just needs to go in general. If you want players immersed in your story, it needs to go. Glad the writing and story will get improved, and grammar will be fixed.
Only thing I'll say about the gay stuff, is if you intended to have it in there and the game is indeed intended to have gay choices, then don't remove them. Just tag your game properly and let us know that content is there. There is plenty of games with gay content out there, just make sure you state that content will be in your game if you planned it. And of course, have it optional.
If it wasn't planned, then yeah. It needs some fixing lol. Saying the best part of your night was watching your friend Diego jerk off is pretty gay lol.
But I'm glad to see you responding to feedback over it all. Much respect. Good luck with your game, and I'll definitely give it a second chance on the next update.
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i dont care about watching other people bang. i was hoping the voyeurism tag was for watching a girl masturbate or something. i'll admit i almost stopped playing right there during the alley scene. dont care if they were random charcters or not.
as for the mindcontrol spiral effect. i hope its something less cheesy. usually a flash of the eyes turning pink is good enough. but spiral eyes... just sounds weird honestly.
the whole fourth wall break has been addressed so thats good. i dont mind if it happens but maybe only once or twice an update at best.
the game could use a few more choices on how we interact with people but that's just my opinion.
also dream/daydream sex scenes are a waste of renders in my opinion. i would prefer that time be spent on advancing the story.
quick question will the MC be able to go more to the dark side or is he always gonna be how he is?
as for the mindcontrol spiral effect. i hope its something less cheesy. usually a flash of the eyes turning pink is good enough. but spiral eyes... just sounds weird honestly.
the whole fourth wall break has been addressed so thats good. i dont mind if it happens but maybe only once or twice an update at best.
the game could use a few more choices on how we interact with people but that's just my opinion.
also dream/daydream sex scenes are a waste of renders in my opinion. i would prefer that time be spent on advancing the story.
quick question will the MC be able to go more to the dark side or is he always gonna be how he is?
Thank you for your kind words.
I always believed that criticisms is what makes you more powerful and learn from your mistakes.
It is definitely being rewritten because I truly believe that this game has the potential.
Honestly we didn't plan any gay stuff to happen.....So I will be definitely removing the gay stuff.The 4th wall breaking, yeah that just needs to go in general. If you want players immersed in your story, it needs to go. Glad the writing and story will get improved, and grammar will be fixed.
Only thing I'll say about the gay stuff, is if you intended to have it in there and the game is indeed intended to have gay choices, then don't remove them. Just tag your game properly and let us know that content is there. There is plenty of games with gay content out there, just make sure you state that content will be in your game if you planned it. And of course, have it optional.
If it wasn't planned, then yeah. It needs some fixing lol. Saying the best part of your night was watching your friend Diego jerk off is pretty gay lol.
But I'm glad to see you responding to feedback over it all. Much respect. Good luck with your game, and I'll definitely give it a second chance on the next update.
Thank you for your honest feedback.
Thank you for your feedback.
About the question you just asked:
Yes, the mc will go a little bit towards the dark side.
But when he realizes he will try to comeback.
Mine was meant to be constructive. Overall I think the story has potential just needs a little work and some effort in the presentation. I do commend the dev for reading the thread and considering the feedback given. It shows a lot of effort on their part.
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Vampires in College? Hope they don't spark under sunlight.