- Oct 16, 2021
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This was so much better than the previous versions, the fourth Wall breaking makes everything seems like a joke before, but know the story it’s actually taken itself seriously, which it’s a good thing.Hello Everyone
The rework of v0.1 has been fully completed along with Episode 2 (part1), Currently the game is being tested for errors and bugs.
Release Date:
We have decided to release v0.1.5 (Episode 2 pt1) of the game on 15th May (15/05/2022).
Version 0.1.5 will include reworked v0.1 with Episode 2 part1.
- Blue Dragon Studios
Thank you for your feedback and suggestion.Very promising.
However you should definitely consider getting a proofwriter onboard, cause a lot of the dialogue is ... stiff and sometimes just poorly worded. Like the naming of clans and referring to them by their names in the way as you do.
The pacing is also... phew... I feel like you could space out a lot of the information dump in episode one and push a lot of it into later episodes - cause it feels like you need to be taking notes for a lot of it.
Thank you for your suggestions and feedback.Enjoyed it but the dialogue sentences are very short and very bland.
Internal thoughts have more depth than most conversations.
Mc is pretty spineless and fights within himself way to much.
It's okay for a start and i'm guessing the dev isn't a native english speaker but the story could be more in depth and less one liner conversations that feels like robots talking to one and other.
Even the dialogue during lewd scenes are pretty cringe.
Characters are beautiful and the story has promise but this needs a lot of work before it's of a decent standard.
It's great the dev is taking feedback and I hope this game becomes much better in the future.
Thank you for your feedback and suggestions.I enjoyed the story so far. I played after the rework and I saw a good amount of people mention originally everything was quite different so I can't quite say how much it has improved, but based on what I've read in the thread, it has improved quite a bit. I'm not sure how much 4th wall dialog was happening, however, in the rework, there wasn't a single line of it and the story seems to flow pretty well without it. The writing and pacing of the story could still use some improvement. It feels like we jump ahead an update or two into the story for the intro and it doesn't quite feel like a proper intro. But besides that, I think the concept that the dev is going for could work out well as they gain experience. The dev seems to listen to criticism and responds well to it so that's a positive also.
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Thank you so much.Hello Blue Dragon Studios
I'm sick and I can't concentrate on writing about my game.
My computer is making an animation so I don't have much to do.
So I redid the animations of your characters in 60 fps.
i used the webm format, i don't know why you used OGV but i think you should consider to use the webm extension. (if you want i can redid it in ogv.)
Size of all vids in ogv = 83mo
Size of all vids in webm = 36mo
Premiere pro have a free plugin for webm.
Mega
15 FPS :
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60 FPS :
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We are currently trying to get the android version, which will be hopefully available after release of Episode 2 part 2the bro very good job the best vampire game i've ever played i just ask you to make it available for android a hug and strength there