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vimey

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It feels goods to see a little less dudes it was too weird the first time but the story got much complicated I can't wait to see how the mind control works I hope we could enslave the bad witches and the good ones too ;)
 
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michael1984

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Dec 9, 2017
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Way too many dudes in this game and only a handfull of women lol

Not to mention the women dont put out :ROFLMAO: well unless u use that evil power

But yeah will keep a eye on this since its a vampire kind of game and can become entertaining
 

BoltonGuy35

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Enjoyed it but the dialogue sentences are very short and very bland.
Internal thoughts have more depth than most conversations.
Mc is pretty spineless and fights within himself way to much.
It's okay for a start and i'm guessing the dev isn't a native english speaker but the story could be more in depth and less one liner conversations that feels like robots talking to one and other.
Even the dialogue during lewd scenes are pretty cringe.
Characters are beautiful and the story has promise but this needs a lot of work before it's of a decent standard.
It's great the dev is taking feedback and I hope this game becomes much better in the future.
 

Belnick

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1, the bullet will hit you before you hear the sound.....
2, what kind of gun fire the bullet and the bullet casing as one unit? I hope dev know that striking the primer ignite the powder that push the bullet FROM the casing and the bullet then continue on, while the casing is ejected or stays in if a revolver
OR maybe I missed it and they are using Gyrojet technology lol, which is pretty rare and inaccurate :eek:
 

acondo

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Jul 23, 2020
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Hello Everyone

The rework of v0.1 has been fully completed along with Episode 2 (part1), Currently the game is being tested for errors and bugs.

Release Date:
We have decided to release v0.1.5 (Episode 2 pt1) of the game on 15th May (15/05/2022).
Version 0.1.5 will include reworked v0.1 with Episode 2 part1.

- Blue Dragon Studios :)
This was so much better than the previous versions, the fourth Wall breaking makes everything seems like a joke before, but know the story it’s actually taken itself seriously, which it’s a good thing. (y)
 

jasont123

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Aug 14, 2020
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I enjoyed the story so far. I played after the rework and I saw a good amount of people mention originally everything was quite different so I can't quite say how much it has improved, but based on what I've read in the thread, it has improved quite a bit. I'm not sure how much 4th wall dialog was happening, however, in the rework, there wasn't a single line of it and the story seems to flow pretty well without it. The writing and pacing of the story could still use some improvement. It feels like we jump ahead an update or two into the story for the intro and it doesn't quite feel like a proper intro. But besides that, I think the concept that the dev is going for could work out well as they gain experience. The dev seems to listen to criticism and responds well to it so that's a positive also.
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Overall I enjoyed the story and I think that there's a lot of space for the dev to be creative with this story so I look forward to future updates.
 

Blue Dragon Studios

Developing "Bite: Season One"
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Very promising.

However you should definitely consider getting a proofwriter onboard, cause a lot of the dialogue is ... stiff and sometimes just poorly worded. Like the naming of clans and referring to them by their names in the way as you do.

The pacing is also... phew... I feel like you could space out a lot of the information dump in episode one and push a lot of it into later episodes - cause it feels like you need to be taking notes for a lot of it.
Thank you for your feedback and suggestion.
Yeah, we are recruiting a proofreader and I know there is a lot of info dump, but I will try to tone it down a bit also the pacing will decrease a bit in the future episodes.

Enjoyed it but the dialogue sentences are very short and very bland.
Internal thoughts have more depth than most conversations.
Mc is pretty spineless and fights within himself way to much.
It's okay for a start and i'm guessing the dev isn't a native english speaker but the story could be more in depth and less one liner conversations that feels like robots talking to one and other.
Even the dialogue during lewd scenes are pretty cringe.
Characters are beautiful and the story has promise but this needs a lot of work before it's of a decent standard.
It's great the dev is taking feedback and I hope this game becomes much better in the future.
Thank you for your suggestions and feedback.
We are currently recruiting a proofreader, also we have posted it in the recruitment & services section.

If anyone is interested, please let me know as we have a great storyline, but it lacks proper dialogues and has some grammatical errors.
We want to make this game as great as possible.

- Blue Dragon Studios :)
 

Blue Dragon Studios

Developing "Bite: Season One"
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Apr 10, 2022
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I enjoyed the story so far. I played after the rework and I saw a good amount of people mention originally everything was quite different so I can't quite say how much it has improved, but based on what I've read in the thread, it has improved quite a bit. I'm not sure how much 4th wall dialog was happening, however, in the rework, there wasn't a single line of it and the story seems to flow pretty well without it. The writing and pacing of the story could still use some improvement. It feels like we jump ahead an update or two into the story for the intro and it doesn't quite feel like a proper intro. But besides that, I think the concept that the dev is going for could work out well as they gain experience. The dev seems to listen to criticism and responds well to it so that's a positive also.
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Overall I enjoyed the story and I think that there's a lot of space for the dev to be creative with this story so I look forward to future updates.
Thank you for your feedback and suggestions.

I will definitely consider it and make changes in the future updates.
 
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Ragnar

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All the Chosen One talk is a bit cringe inducing. Vampire waifu is good. I like how we can see other factions scenes between the MC story line.
 
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mrttao

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so far this is interesting. a bit too much of an omniscient perspective as you shift between the various secret organizations who are plotting around the MC. but otherwise fine. not too much content thus far though
 
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UncleNanard

I am to music what Kanye West is to adult games.
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Jul 1, 2017
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Hello Blue Dragon Studios

I'm sick and I can't concentrate on writing about my game.
My computer is making an animation so I don't have much to do.
So I redid the animations of your characters in 60 fps.

i used the webm format, i don't know why you used OGV but i think you should consider to use the webm extension. (if you want i can redid it in ogv.)

Size of all vids in ogv = 83mo
Size of all vids in webm = 36mo

Premiere pro have a free plugin for webm.



15 FPS :
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60 FPS :
View attachment Emily.webm
 

Valdazz

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Not bad so far, dialogue needs work and the music doesn't fit the vampire theme. Still looks rather promising, will certainly check back in a year or so.
 
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Blue Dragon Studios

Developing "Bite: Season One"
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Apr 10, 2022
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Hello Blue Dragon Studios

I'm sick and I can't concentrate on writing about my game.
My computer is making an animation so I don't have much to do.
So I redid the animations of your characters in 60 fps.

i used the webm format, i don't know why you used OGV but i think you should consider to use the webm extension. (if you want i can redid it in ogv.)

Size of all vids in ogv = 83mo
Size of all vids in webm = 36mo

Premiere pro have a free plugin for webm.

Mega

15 FPS :
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60 FPS :
View attachment 1821565
Thank you so much.
As we are new to game development, we don't know much about this, but we are learning new things everyday.
 
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