VN Ren'Py Abandoned Black Diamond [v0.7f] [Deus Actum]

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Overview:
The story follows Lydia. An 18 year old girl who's about to begin her first year in a prestigious college of New York.
She's spent all her life studying and has no experience of the "real world".
Will your choices change her life for the better? for the worse? or will there be no change at all?​

Thread Updated: 2023-09-24
Release Date: 2023-09-15
Developer: Deus Actum

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Censored: No
Version: 0.7f
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Dont be confused with the starting 10 minutes, it will switch to female protagonist

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*This unofficial port/version is not released by the developer, download at your own risk.

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[Amazonqween]

 

[rKnight]

She's spent all her life studying and has no experience of the "real world".
Will your choices change her life for the better? for the worse?

So, her future will be in our hands... Which pretty much means she is completely FUCKED,
both metaphorically and LITERALLY.


That awkward moment when the developer gets a plot, but doesn't know where to place the main character's father.

 

[Ragnar]

Let's see what we got here.

Really short.

 

[ExMachinaEV]

Female protagonist?= a slut + bad storyline , no thanks

 

[88Michele88]

Female protagonist? Lets give it a go. Hopefuly for the better.

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

Future tags, please.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Antonie van Leeuwenhoek]

Winds are changing, female protagonist is the new new normal.

 

[Atlas]

Female protagonist?= a slut + bad storyline , no thanks

It feels unfair to the author to crap on their work by just assuming it stinks. Such negativity for a new work doesn't encourage artistic growth.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Okay so umm... first off, there is no female protagonist. You play as some guy and make one choice (and it is for him). I'm assuming it is the father, but you play as him. No female protagonist. So you need to change your tags. Even if later in your game we play as a female protagonist, you need a male protagonist tag/multiple protagonist tag since this whole demo is playing as a male, not a female.

If you want this to be a female protagonist game, then you should of put in more content to the point where we actually play as the female protagonist, not release a teaser (literally a couple minutes of play time) where we play as a male the entire time and make choices for them.

Otherwise, writing is just fine, it just needed more. Maybe it's just me, but kind of tired of these little 2-3 minute teasers that people release instead of taking the time to make a proper release with enough content to make you actually interested in what is going on. This... there is just nothing there to engage you or show you what this story is even about.

Best of luck with your game, but just not for me is all. Thanks.

 

[eightypercent]

Future tags, please.

If you like good stories, check out Eternum, City of Broken Dreamers and Corporate Culture.

 

[eightypercent]

Female protagonist?= a slut + bad storyline , no thanks

That's an extremely judgemental opinion from somebody who doesn't want to play the VN... what's the point? Were you bored? Nothing better to do?

 

[diikhlaskan]

seriously?

 

[88Michele88]

Okay so umm... first off, there is no female protagonist. You play as some guy and make one choice (and it is for him). I'm assuming it is the father, but you play as him. No female protagonist. So you need to change your tags. Even if later in your game we play as a female protagonist, you need a male protagonist tag/multiple protagonist tag since this whole demo is playing as a male, not a female.

If you want this to be a female protagonist game, then you should of put in more content to the point where we actually play as the female protagonist, not release a teaser (literally a couple minutes of play time) where we play as a male the entire time and make choices for them.

Otherwise, writing is just fine, it just needed more. Maybe it's just me, but kind of tired of these little 2-3 minute teasers that people release instead of taking the time to make a proper release with enough content to make you actually interested in what is going on. This... there is just nothing there to engage you or show you what this story is even about.

Best of luck with your game, but just not for me is all. Thanks.

Thanks for the warning. I better pass since it's true. I'm pass on this one. Cheked and deleted. not interested in playing with fake tagged female protagonist.
Alredy deleted.

 

[boloss456]

I like the model, so I will follow the game

 

[eightypercent]

Winds are changing, female protagonist is the new new normal.

It really isn't the case; the vast majority of titles on F95 are male protagonist with the majority of femprotags designed for older software, abandoned or just bad. The few good ones are still the rare pearls.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Maybe it's just me, but kind of tired of these little 2-3 minute teasers

Maybe it's just me, but kind of tired of these members bashing a new game before it's had a chance.
You're just limiting yourself in the long run. On the other hand, it's good to get the faultfinders out of the way. They can be left behind to stew in their malcontent.

first off, there is no female protagonist.

The main character doesn't have to be introduced at the beginning. Why follow the same old steps in creating a game? Mix it up. Half the complaints here are on F95 are " it's the same old story"

Facepalms incoming

 

[djv007]

ok the renders look good so i will check it out. Also does this game play out like "Good Girl Gone Bad"? Cause the description give that vibe.

 

[Antonie van Leeuwenhoek]

It really isn't the case; the vast majority of titles on F95 are male protagonist with the majority of femprotags designed for older software, abandoned or just bad. The few good ones are still the rare pearls.

I should have addressed with the word 'recently'. I have encountered in recent past that more devs are willing to bet on fem prot or multi prot genres, more so amongst the new entrants or those who are testing their skills, nothing wrong with that tbh. Rarely though they pull it off successfully without turning it into slut simulator.