- Nov 13, 2021
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Finished Prologue/Ch1, and have some concerns.
Minor plot oddity: after the MC's bath, he gets back into his 'kicked out of the orphanage' clothing, complete with bare feet. I find that unlikely given how May and Vicky had been treating him so far. Even the next morning when meeting with May, he's in the same outfit except this time with shoes.
Other disappointments:
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Minor plot oddity: after the MC's bath, he gets back into his 'kicked out of the orphanage' clothing, complete with bare feet. I find that unlikely given how May and Vicky had been treating him so far. Even the next morning when meeting with May, he's in the same outfit except this time with shoes.
Other disappointments:
- All the women on the Estate being on birth control is disappointing.
- There is zero buildup, romance, or effort involved with any of the H scenes.
- First sex scenes with both Jasmine and Kristan being 1-2 shots during a time-lapse montage was disappointing - not least because of the previous issue.
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