VN Ren'Py Abandoned Black Rose [Ep.2] [Heart Productions]

[Heart-Productions]

Finished Prologue/Ch1, and have some concerns.

Spoiler: Virgins/Prior Relations and a significant plot problem

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Minor plot oddity: after the MC's bath, he gets back into his 'kicked out of the orphanage' clothing, complete with bare feet. I find that unlikely given how May and Vicky had been treating him so far. Even the next morning when meeting with May, he's in the same outfit except this time with shoes.

Other disappointments:

• All the women on the Estate being on birth control is disappointing.
• There is zero buildup, romance, or effort involved with any of the H scenes.
• First sex scenes with both Jasmine and Kristan being 1-2 shots during a time-lapse montage was disappointing - not least because of the previous issue.

Since this is an 0.1, I'm willing to give it another chance, but despite the story having promise, these missteps are frustrating.

Thank you for your feedback! I understand where you are coming from. You are right, there is no build-up for the sex scenes in episode one and no future build-up for sex scenes with the Eliotte woman.

Spoiler: Response to Spooler

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As for birth control. I'm sure the reason makes sense. Mc suffered because he was born. Can't have little bastards running around. However, I do plan on having the pregnancy tag soon. Originally this was supposed to be a Kinetic novel but I do plan on making player choices for pregnancy in the future.

"Choose yo baby momma!"
Thanks again for the feedback. I will revise episode one and release it with episode 2 which is coming soon!

 

[AntuanShotaLover]

This VN doesn't waste time waiting for sex scenes.

 

[xizaaR]

Definitely a lot of potential, can't wait to see more!

 

[Joshuafunky1999]

Android port please

 

[HiHaHo]

update thread please

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[skyrfen]

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[MaRk34Chr1s]

Thank you for sharing, it's looks interesting. And i like the excellent music selection. Here some images from MC eyes.

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[CamaroFan432]

Thank you for sharing, it's looks interesting. And i like the excellent music selection. Here some images from MC eyes.

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Put them next time in a spoiler, please. It keeps the thread pages a little bit shorter and doesn't spoil content from the game. I made an example, how it can look, with your post.

 

[MaRk34Chr1s]

Put them next time in a spoiler, please. It keeps the thread pages a little bit shorter and doesn't spoil content from the game. I made an example, how it can look, with your post.

Thanks for the hint, i have changed it should be better now.

 

[Joshuafunky1999]

Android port please

 

[giqui]

Black Rose [Ep.2] [Heart Productions]

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[DraxisSilencer1000]

Finished Prologue/Ch1, and have some concerns.

Spoiler: Virgins/Prior Relations and a significant plot problem

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Minor plot oddity: after the MC's bath, he gets back into his 'kicked out of the orphanage' clothing, complete with bare feet. I find that unlikely given how May and Vicky had been treating him so far. Even the next morning when meeting with May, he's in the same outfit except this time with shoes.

Other disappointments:

• All the women on the Estate being on birth control is disappointing.
• There is zero buildup, romance, or effort involved with any of the H scenes.
• First sex scenes with both Jasmine and Kristan being 1-2 shots during a time-lapse montage was disappointing - not least because of the previous issue.

Since this is an 0.1, I'm willing to give it another chance, but despite the story having promise, these missteps are frustrating.

Thanks for this. I'll not be playing the game then.

 

[Heart-Productions]

My Humblest apologies to all for my attempt at making a game. I thought I had what it takes to create something fun and interesting, but I was clearly in over my head. The game isn't behind a pay-wall, it's free even on my patreon because I realize that my first attempt isn't something anyone should be forced to pay for. But if there is even ONE person who wants to see the end of this story then I will keep going til the end of this game and end it there. I'm better at PLAYING H games anyway Thank you for your time!

 

[Lerd0]

My Humblest apologies to all for my attempt at making a game. I thought I had what it takes to create something fun and interesting, but I was clearly in over my head. The game isn't behind a pay-wall, it's free even on my patreon because I realize that my first attempt isn't something anyone should be forced to pay for. But if there is even ONE person who wants to see the end of this story then I will keep going til the end of this game and end it there. I'm better at PLAYING H games anyway Thank you for your time!

..i wanna see it...

 

[Tiur]

My Humblest apologies to all for my attempt at making a game. I thought I had what it takes to create something fun and interesting, but I was clearly in over my head. The game isn't behind a pay-wall, it's free even on my patreon because I realize that my first attempt isn't something anyone should be forced to pay for. But if there is even ONE person who wants to see the end of this story then I will keep going til the end of this game and end it there. I'm better at PLAYING H games anyway Thank you for your time!

Despite the criticisms I posted about the Prologue and Ch1, I said I'd continue giving it a chance, and I meant that. I played 0.2, and it was pretty enjoyable. Good setup for the broader political situation and establishing the major players with the likely storylines they'll be headed into. (Seducing the ice queen, the military guy and the likely netori with his wife (plus the assumed rescue and seduction of his daughter), stealing the loyal bodyguard away from the nerdy asshole and his father, etc. - all of these sound like fun and sexy storylines, if they're given the weight and content they deserve.)

I'll say this: I don't make critical posts on games I hate everything about. If I hate everything about a game, I just drop it, ignore the thread, and move on. I make critical posts on games with potential, or with some enjoyable elements, that I feel are poorly-served by some decisions or detracting elements. Like, a remaster of Ch1 (now or later) to adjust just a few things wouldn't be unwelcome - the Eliotte house women are stll the least interesting characters in the game because of not having any build-up, plus the suggestion of previously having been the MC's dad's harem. They all deserved a LOT better fleshing out and build-up, particularly the two who only really had single-shot scenes in the montage... And the MC should still harbor a lot more anger at his father that could be used for more interesting interactions between him and the Eliotte house women.

On the birth control/pregnancy thing, if you don't want to deal with pregnancy early, you don't have to, but it detracts from a lot of people's enjoyment when the characters explicitly state they're on birth control. My suggestion is: just don't mention the birth control, and only have pregnancies happen when you want them to. You're the writer, you decide when those happen. Women IRL don't get pregnant instantly after unprotected sex, and in porn and porn games alike, there's a lot of suspension of disbelief already baked in, particularly when it comes to things that make the scenes sexier (and even if the girls don't talk about it explicitly, risky sex is sexier).

 

[RockmanXDive]

need android version please

 

[johnmnf692]

So is this just "sloppy seconds: the game" or what? How many of these LIs got railed by the d-bag father? Why make a pre-made harem of women who were all in love with some dude who wanted the MC to be killed before he was even born? It's just perplexing.

With that all said, there is some good potential in this game and I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.

 

[MAD6999]

Just make all the girls virgins and make it clear that they never had a relationship with the father, neither physical nor emotional, and you will see that the opinion about your game will improve. Nobody likes to chase used girls.

 

[Insur]

Is the game still alive? I loved it