Hello.
The samples and banner made me come. And this game is really good for an initial release.
The worldbuilding is fine.
The characters are numerous and different.
The plot is intriguing.
The artistic side is well done.
I had a good time playing it. The mc is a great guy. The other characters are good looking and have good personalities outside the bad client (and those that weren't introduced yet or too briefly). The flow of events is well thought. The musics and sounds are well chosen. The animations were good but could be more fluid (for example, the ballet video is strange).
Nice touch to have included some sentences in french.
And now I'm wondering why it's happening to him, why Luci was keeping an eye on him and the consequences of his future actions. Hope it'll get answered later.
Some remarks :
When his wife is giving him a handjob, his dick looked like it was made in plastic.
You've chosen yellow and pink for clear background but it's confusing, like it's Nick or Anastacia's talking. You should use another neutral color but different from those used for characters.
Anastacia's computer : there should be a warning when we finished seeing everything. Also, if we read the diary before seeing the photos, we should react differently since we already know what the girls did.
After the car's accident, Johnny was talking to his mother about another Johnny (though it should be Dylan) :
The english needs some work. And it's starting to be awful after mc's death.
I was going to ask if any bi/gay content could be considered since the men are attractive but I don't see it fitting the game though.
A solution to everything would be to include other male characters into the harem.
I hoped there would be more people supporting this game, ATM interest is very, very low. So from the looks of it. I fucked up. This could end up being a passion project but on a back burner because like any storyteller I love more people enjoying my stories. If I fuck up with one I move to another one, damn shame because imo it have a lot of potential, but people don't see the same way I guess
Your game is too young to already reach that conclusion.
I'm fucking depressed now, this forum killed in me any creativity or desire to work on games.
It's been some time since you joined this forum and you've already made another game previously, so you should already know that most of us are stubborn, harsh and specific. For example, I leave comments on games' threads I played, explaining what I thought about it in order to help even a little but, even though I try to be as objective as possible, there's still a part in what I say that is subjective.
So you should take all the feedbacks with a grain of salt and take what could make the game better.
little bit sad to hear this, but if u think that sharing/ntr or another cuckery = creativity, than i cant feel bad about u much longer....
You're saying it like harem = creativity...
It's either : a man die (preferably the father but also an uncle or the grandfather) and you take his place/inherit a house or you enter college and all the girls flow towards you.
Good continuation.