Tinez82

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What the hell, man? Throwing mud at my game in another game thread? I had a better opinion of you than that.
Just some words of encouragement.... Don't let things like this be the reason for you to stop developing this story. From what I've seen so far I've enjoyed it very much and I know others have also but there will always be some people who disagree and criticize what you create but you have to take the good with the bad and turn the negative into positive motivation. Like I've said before I hope you continue with this story cause it deserves to be. So let it roll off the shoulder and you do you. Thanks and much appreciated
 

Tinez82

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It's not about criticism. I really want to hear reasoned criticism. But it seems that the visual novel I made doesn't even deserve criticism, only mockery, and this person couldn't find anything better to do than humiliate me on another game's page. If you have something to say about my visual novel, write it here. But in his opinion, I can't criticize a game that I even paid money for! Of course, that won't stop me from doing anything. I’m just interested in why people like that do it. Another strange guy who doesn't like what I do, but for some reason follows me.
I understand your reasons behind your frustrations.....People like that aren't worth a basket of fucked buttholes. Dont let their comments take up space in your head. There will always be haters on the InterWebs and they do it because there are no consequences for what they say.
 
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jackal1435

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As for the genre of story and the usual who say they "don't like something because it's not their preference"; there are so many different stories and games on this platform. You can go to another if you aren't into what this story gives. Same rule applies for any medium anywhere. This platform should be for free expression. If you don't like what you see go elsewhere.

To the developer of this game: Personally I would love for the you to ignore whatever insults and continue from where you were in the game. This is your creation. Do it the way you like. Sure maybe some renders can be redone another date if there are any issues in them but do not stop for anyone. If there is any worth while input one of us can make then we will make it and you can take what we give to help improve things. I think the story has a pretty solid start. I like the choice of this protagonist. The pacing is a bit faster than it could be but overall I enjoyed it so far. If you ever need help with story writing or ideas I would help you as well. I hope this gives you the confidence you need to not hold back. :)
 

wildride69

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It's not about criticism. I really want to hear reasoned criticism. But it seems that the visual novel I made doesn't even deserve criticism, only mockery, and this person couldn't find anything better to do than humiliate me on another game's page. If you have something to say about my visual novel, write it here. But in his opinion, I can't criticize a game that I even paid money for! Of course, that won't stop me from doing anything. I’m just interested in why people like that do it. Another strange guy who doesn't like what I do, but for some reason follows me.
I'm way late to the party on this one, but this title is fucking awesome man. I really enjoyed the two chapters you have given us and I highly encourage you to continue. Absolutely loved it extremely well done RK10. Hopefully you will continue this VN when you are reenergized it would be a shame to see something this awesome get an abandoned tag.

Technically imo you have given us enough to have this at least labeled as Completed. I salute you.
 
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Zigzou

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Honestly, the game is fun!
The two chapters are great and it made me wants a lot more! At the end of chapter 2, I was "Fuck yeah! what's next?"


Hope it will continue, most of the time the haters make most noise than the enjoyers!
You should avoid reading their posts!
 

Envoye

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The link to itch.io is not working any more. Shame, that this story is dead. :cry:
If you are interested, the full story itself, the inspiration to start this game, you can find here: :)
 
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R1k0

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The link to itch.io is not working any more. Shame, that this story is dead. :cry:
If you are interested, the full story itself, the inspiration to start this game, you can find here: :)
I wouldn't call it "dead," but rather "on hold until better times." The source of this visual novel has already been mentioned twice in this thread. I have no problem with that, but it's just spoiling the story, and I don't think that helps.
 

HeroHate

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I wouldn't call it "dead," but rather "on hold until better times." The source of this visual novel has already been mentioned twice in this thread. I have no problem with that, but it's just spoiling the story, and I don't think that helps.
Yes, I lost a fair bit of interest after reading the story, which wasn't that long either.
 
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I wouldn't call it "dead," but rather "on hold until better times." The source of this visual novel has already been mentioned twice in this thread. I have no problem with that, but it's just spoiling the story, and I don't think that helps.
It's a shame there wasn't another sequel to the game. It would have covered the first part of the story, which would have been (almost) enough.
Now we have only a regret for a good game who died to soon...
 
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