VN Ren'Py Blessing of Goddess [v0.3] [xBive52]

[xBive52]

1. Why is everyone dressed that slutty?
2. You should avoid explanatory text that is obvious - "the bus has arrived" - we can see that.
3. It is really rushed and rough - especially because nothing is explained.
There is that thief? (taking a thing from a cave is not really stealing I guess ... ) that doesnt sell the thing to the woman that wanted it ... why? The whole "money first" thing is stupid. I mean she had a helicopter and stuff - that is not a pawn shop deal.

Could be dumb fun, but the intro is really messy and all over the place.

Thanks, I'll correct those issues!

 

[xBive52]

Yeah, I'm actually also curious what tags are expected in the future.

So far only 2 creepy guys are interested in mc, will they be potential 'love interests' or are they just there to suffer while mc steals their girls, which we certainly welcome.

In fact these two boys may have to cry in pain in the future

 

[wtfalan]

Look at all this pantyhose!

 

[mrwowaccount]

insane game and graphics! but no FUTA plz. i say yes to INCEST

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[FlyingDrums]

Love it so far! I love the casual skimpy and revealing outfits!

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[FMag]

Looking good. Let's see the next update.

 

[ElCafillero]

Good start! Good luck in the future!

 

[vs2011xyz]

mac, android links are missing

 

[Likibo]

Invisible futa dong, this should be fun.

 

[Bloodly]

Are they actually dressed like that, or is this how the main is perceiving them?

 

[N1bb1T]

might as well add the exhibitionism tag.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Yeah, I'm actually also curious what tags are expected in the future.

So far only 2 creepy guys are interested in mc, will they be potential 'love interests' or are they just there to suffer while mc steals their girls, which we certainly welcome.

In fact these two boys may have to cry in pain in the future

Omg please tell me we can clap their cheeks too

 

[Kind Nightmares]

Omg please tell me we can clap their cheeks too

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One of them screams to be claped, ngl

 

[Qu1ntupIe5D]

looks very nice

 

[blacklight47]

 

[Fazed]

OK the translation is not bad, some mistakes here and there but its generally good.

The thing I dont like is the missing balls on the futa. They just look sexier when they have cock, balls and pussy because without balls they look like they got their balls cut off

I think so too and I enjoy them significantly less when they dont have balls. I know its harder to work with from a modelling standpoint though.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I think so too and I enjoy them significantly less when they dont have balls. I know its harder to work with from a modelling standpoint though.

Balls are cute and all but sacrifices had to be made.

 

[Fazed]

Balls are cute and all but sacrifices had to be made.

When reading this I felt the word "sacrifices" in my own balls.

 

[xBive52]

In regards to the clothing issue that everyone has been viewing. I think it's just a fantasy game, so might as well be bold. After all, no one would dress like that in reality.