Ren'Py Abandoned Blurred Lines [v0.3f] [Studio009]

[studio009]

Super short not really worth trying atm... Sophia and Lily are hot so that's a plus... I didn't like the text style though, I much prefer it when it's designed for ease of reading - so a more basic font (which you can do by hitting a, but the capitalisation then seems off), and have a shadow/border of the oppositite colour (so white on black or vice-versa) or something so it always pops.

The first official release will have way more content make sure you check it out and thanks for your input I'll decently be taking them in to consideration.

 

[studio009]

If there is a big black guy in the game, then looking in the planned tags you will definitely find ntr and swinging.
just observation)

edit:
And, as mentioned above, it looks like ntr/hot wife/cheating will be a big part of the game, as all the choices in the demo basically pave the way for those routes.
May I know (without spoilers, of course) how many routes there will be, and what will be the main focus of the story?
From the short demo, it looks like it's an ntr game.

By the way, the art is amazing.

I think I got you on Discord

 

[studio009]

will there be a route where you can avoid ntr/swinging/sharing?

There will be two main love routes and yes Ntr is avoidable

 

[studio009]

demo got me into the game, already waiting for the next update! just wanted to mention the text is a little bit hard to read. saw that you want to create your own font, i guess that will fix the issue. good luck with your game studio009!

thank you

 

[studio009]

studio009 sooo I won't be sticking around (I avoid NTR and sharing like the plague, even if avoidable, just changes the characters personalities when there is a possibility of it, so unless there is something that i absolutely must see.. I ignore), so with me not replying to anything after this comment, it isn't cause of anything serious, I just will have the thread ignored.

Now funnily enough, my comment has nothing to do with the above XD that is just for context of why I go quiet, if you do want to keep talking about art (the actual purpose of this comment), then DM me.

Anyway the art is quite nice, there is no argumen there, what did stick out to me though, is the lack of hard shadows, you have got the subtle shadows down, but not many hard cast type shadows.

A few examples:
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(the armpits on this one):
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You can't see it too much on MC because of the black, but it is more notice-able on the above. And when I say notice-able, I don't mean people will see and know, it is more they see, and something just feels a little off.

Anyway, basically some more cast shadows would help your art a lot. (and it doesn't have to be a lot, just some, like for the skirt, just a shadow where it isn't in contact with the skin (between the legs, with a triangle-ish shap along it on both or one, depending on the strength of the lighting).

A key with cast shadows though, is that they are darker than form shadows (shadows that come from the form and not a object actively blocking the light).
So when they overlap the cast shadow will tend to be laid on top of the form shadow so the form shadown under the cast shadow should be darker than both, since it is combining shadows.

What helps with that, is having a clear idea in mid of where the light is coming from, so you know how the shadows are being cast.

Thank you for your tips I'll absolutely be taking them in to consideration, but I have to be mindful of the style of art that I want to produce.

 

[studio009]

Thank you everyone for the love, I put this out see how my art and story telling will be received. Much like you guys I'm a fan of this genre and your reactions has given me the motivation I needed, I'll be working hard to get the first official release out early as possible

 

[str8up]

hold my beer !!!

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[goulet1995]

Yes the NTR/Share path will be completely avoidable, but I want to tell this story in a away that makes sense to me so there will be no ntr off option as long as you treat " your loved one" with love you will be on the right path, Also the main narrative path is a love path.

if i can make a sugestion that is fine but i sugest putting warnings on choiced that lead to an ntr scene anyone who is trying to avoid it will not like a surprise because they made a wrong choice would be quick way that would likely make alot of people drop the game

 

[studio009]

Love the art and the spook protag premise. Do you plan to add animated h-scenes?

I'm down with sharing if it's done right but not ntr (but not an anti-ntr activist either). Best of luck studio009

yes to the animated h-scenes and my goal is to make all ntr scenes available on the sharing path so it doesnt feel like ntr

 

[studio009]

if i can make a sugestion that is fine but i sugest putting warnings on choiced that lead to an ntr scene anyone who is trying to avoid it will not like a surprise because they made a wrong choice would be quick way that would likely make alot of people drop the game

I'll definitely be considering this and will try to make the nrt choices distinguishable

 

[Ragnar]

It's rare to see this level of quality with tracers. Good job.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

This story is about a CIA agent Nate

Can't wait to lurk around image boards through the entire game.

 

[Greebz]

Any pregnancy and impregnation content planned? Making it an integral part of the sex and its consequences would make this an automatic top 5 game for me.

 

[TM | Twisted Games]

The art looks great, and nice to see promising tags like sharing, corruption, and group! Will definitely be keeping your game on my radar. Best of luck!!!

 

[SantsStudio]

I found very interesting the art of this novel, I would like to see how the hottest scenes would be

 

[LongoMcFap]

What is the demo about? Showing you can create menus within Ren'py? Because, where is some content? Did I miss something?
Will check back in half a year, because this Lily looks kinda cute/hot/rrrrrrr

 

[studio009]

It's rare to see this level of quality with tracers. Good job.

thank you

 

[studio009]

Any pregnancy and impregnation content planned? Making it an integral part of the sex and its consequences would make this an automatic top 5 game for me.

Sorry not so far, but I'm not opposed to the idea

 

[studio009]

What is the demo about? Showing you can create menus within Ren'py? Because, where is some content? Did I miss something?
Will check back in half a year, because this Lily looks kinda cute/hot/rrrrrrr

yep and my ability to create screens kinda proud of that stuff

 

[LongoMcFap]

yep and my ability to create screens kinda proud of that stuff

Well, maybe it sounded too harsh, but in my view the amount of content, even for a demo is a bit too thin. That's what I meant, didn't want to critize the art style.