I went through the game. I don’t want to write a negative review, especially that it’s still only 2.0 release, but I’ve decided to write this, maybe for the sake of the dev. Though, openly speaking, the game would have to be redesigned and rewritten almost from scratch to make it bearable. Which is a pity, as corruption games with a female protagonist are my favourite ones.
At present, it’s total mess. The story, the characters, UI and paths/choices, the writing and the graphics. Of course, de gustibus… and so on, but – please treat this opinion as a subjective message from a pretty experienced porn games user.
I do not want to go into details; I’ve no time and energy for this. But the most important problem is that this supposed-to-be porn game is not arousing at all. The plot is nonsensical; the FMC’s behaviour is illogical (even if we apply ‘a porn game logic’ and not regular common sense) or, to be more precise, stupid. All characters are sketched in bold lines; the game's universe is repulsive in every way. Probably it was meant this way (well, I’ve checked what ‘Glupia Suka’ means; this wit is a bit hermetic) – but please have mercy on the users.
The choices indicate that there will be dozens of various paths in the game… Fair warning: there is no way the dev would be able to manage them in this way. The renders are inconsistent at best. The FMC is ok but how can her mother look like her younger sister? Also the writing does not help; I mean not only the language problems. People simply do not talk like that. And even the UI is subpar, I don’t understand why it is so. There are so many examples of standard/good UIs in Renpy games. And this is, in general, a good starting point for the re-design of the game: it would be reasonable to go through and analyze a few or a dozen really good corruption games with female protagonists (there are such). To learn from the best. Then to draft the plot and structure the game's paths and to apply it in, say, Bodycount 3.0. After the thorough review of the writing. Otherwise, the game will rest in the F95 cemetery of abandoned games, sooner or later, I’m afraid.
I write this in good faith - not that I enjoy bullying new developers. On the contrary, I love writing good and very good reviews. It's a shame, though, that it doesn't happen very often.
All the best to the dev, anyway.