- Jan 26, 2018
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I didn't hate it. Lots of grammatical and spelling errors, but those can be fixed.
I'm not a fan of the torpedo tits--big boobs are okay, but there's no reason not to keep them a realistic size. Also not really big on the mind control aspects as well, as I feel it's a cheap mechanic to explain why all of the girls are dropping their panties for the MC.
I am very much looking forward to the scene where the MC gives Natalie a much-needed and deserved spanking.
I'm not a fan of the torpedo tits--big boobs are okay, but there's no reason not to keep them a realistic size. Also not really big on the mind control aspects as well, as I feel it's a cheap mechanic to explain why all of the girls are dropping their panties for the MC.
I am very much looking forward to the scene where the MC gives Natalie a much-needed and deserved spanking.