While saying that it could use some editing might sound overly critical- e.g. the shop talk between doctors, or the biggest mystery so far, which is Alex appartment - how does he afford it? What is that glas door? - I certainly didn't expect a story where I intentionally decide against the NSFW parts because I want to know what's going on. Going to follow this one, even though I'm really not into the whole bondage thing and I thought that Twilight killed vampires forever
So I hope that whatever drives you forward will survive the coming month.
Just one more thing, are we back to the 90s where body hair was outlawed in gay culture? Nothing against grooming, but everyone I saw so far got a full on body wax, and looking at some of the hunks that's a waste. Variety makes everything look better.