Sweet man, no biggie. I'm sure you already have some ideas on the kind of characters, but I hope you don't mind if I make a suggestion. Since it feels like the story is heading towards also introducing MC's mother, the two best body types I would love to see for her would be either one where she's very toned, just overall rocking body, takes care of it to the point that you wouldn't know if she was a milf or gilf, decent tit/ass size to complement her body, either has a playful or lusty attitude to her demeanor (I'm having trouble trying to think of a character that's like this) OR she's cute as a button and gives off grandmother-bakes-you-cookies vibes, except she has huge tits and a fat ass (good visual rep of this would be either Melony from Pokemon or a gilf version of Mrs. Claus (like sandreiio's version)).
Just no. Refreshing. Far too many women fit that description (especially older ones) in VN's.
Because it's pleasing to look at. If it ain't broke, don't fix it. Besides, that's why I offered two descriptions. The fit gilf look meshes with the body types in this VN anyways.
même moi qui connais pas l'anglais, ses un des rares jeux que j'ai eu la paticence d'ecrire les phrases du jeux grace à google traduction, j'ai même essaiyer de cherche les fichier des phrases mais j'ai pas trouvé. Cars j'aurais bien voulu le traduire.
nope, nothing any of the characters in whitecube needed, anything, ever. they are all unlikeable and even in death serve no entertainment value. are you not entertained? nope, im not.
I can't give a timeframe. It's probably going to be slower than my previous updates though.
Thanks. I'm looking forward to the finished product. Keep up the good work!I can't give a timeframe. It's probably going to be slower than my previous updates though.
I'm at the point where the VN splits into three different endings so there's three times more work involved.
I'm also looking to make the next update the final one and complete the story, so again, lots more work to do since it will probably be a bigger update than usual.
I don't want to release updates for one particular path at a time since that would just confuse people.
If they were to download it and not be on that particular path, there wouldn't be any updated material for them, so I'm working on all three endings simultaneously.
Finally, just to give myself even more work, I plan to add bonus scenes to show what was happening in some of the other rooms while you were playing.
Damn! After reading that back it does sound like a shitload of work left to do!
A lot of the bonus scenes have already been rendered.
All ending scenes from the boxed-in building have been completed.
I've finally gotten around to checking this one out and have got to say, I'm super impressed with your skills. I love the realistic body proportions and skin imperfections. Your animation is also top-notch.I can't give a timeframe. It's probably going to be slower than my previous updates though.
I'm at the point where the VN splits into three different endings so there's three times more work involved.
I'm also looking to make the next update the final one and complete the story, so again, lots more work to do since it will probably be a bigger update than usual.
I don't want to release updates for one particular path at a time since that would just confuse people.
If they were to download it and not be on that particular path, there wouldn't be any updated material for them, so I'm working on all three endings simultaneously.
Finally, just to give myself even more work, I plan to add bonus scenes to show what was happening in some of the other rooms while you were playing.
Damn! After reading that back it does sound like a shitload of work left to do!
A lot of the bonus scenes have already been rendered.
All ending scenes from the boxed-in building have been completed.
I don't disagree with you on the emotional aspect, generally speaking, but to be fair, the popular (albeit unconfirmed) working theory among most in this thread is that the wife, sister, and daughters are the masterminds behind the whole scenario ... which, if true, would go a long way toward explaining the glibness.
Of course, I saw that early on, Jen forgetting she was supposed to have been gassed, the reveal that Sam is a doctor, tracking who's not in the box when they show the control room.
I know some were disappointed with the lack of darkness/realism in this, and I get it.
Yes.
Great! Please don't take my words as criticism. Rather, they are intended to be an encouragement to continue growing as a dev and to stay at it. Your skills are readily apparent and you have much to offer.I know some were disappointed with the lack of darkness/realism in this, and I get it.
Because this is just my first step into developing a VN, I wanted to make it more light-hearted for two reasons:
It would be easier to write, and it would make the whole project smaller.
It's just a simple, silly, fun short story with a beginning and end that would be easy to manage.
There are hundreds of examples on this site of first-time devs attempting to create something they couldn't handle and abandoning their projects, and I didn't want to be the latest.
Yes.
At the moment, I'm concentrating on finishing this and haven't even started to consider what might be next.
I don't know how some devs can have two or three projects going simultaneously. That blows my mind!
