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Oh then is a diff. game haha np hom :)
you can always check it yourself...i don't KNOW if the dev removed tho...i remember a scene where this trap/femboy/whatever confesses her/his feelings to you and you can accept with sex u.u

also very OT i'm sorry, let's end it here
 
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Increasingly difficult Sliding Puzzles that are essential to progress....and i'm out.

If I wanted to work for my porn i'd become a male feminist.
Its going to be optional on the next update, do keep that in mind!

So basically Huniepop.
We really took inspiration from huniepop!

i can't play the game, get an anti-virus message when unpacking and the exe is deleted.
I haven't heard of Renpy creating false positives, but its most likely a false positive.
 
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then it's strange... i have loaded other renpy games and it worked without errors... this is only the second time, the first time was at Overlord H and it worked after a few updates... maybe ask what would be changed?
 

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then it's strange... i have loaded other renpy games and it worked without errors... this is only the second time, the first time was at Overlord H and it worked after a few updates... maybe ask what would be changed?
I don't really know, you'd have to tell me first what even kind of warning you're getting and from what software.
Windows Defender doesn't pick anything up, so I can't really help in that way.
But I can assure you that there is no virus.
 

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Finished the alpha.

Well, I have noticed that the access points to the different parts of the map are a little difficult to see or understand first, I think it would be convenient to put a mark for each area to make it easier to understand.

I've also had to spend three or four times in a row time because there was literally nothing to do, I don't know if you will put something in these times or it will just stay like that, but it's a bit annoying to have to speed up time so many times to keep playing.

About the characters nothing bad to say, diverse in personalities, aesthetics and I hope that in a way of flirting with them too (the fact that there is a trap I do not like, but I respect it for whoever does). Raven my fav btw.

About the plot at the moment I do not know much more than the beginning where you choose the background of the MC, so I remain expectant.

About the minigames of the puzzle, I am not a fan of them at all, and as I have already read they will be avoidable in the future. I am not against minigames in this type of genre, on the contrary, I like to give it variety, so if you put minigames based on something that has to do with what the MC does or will do, it would be perfect (for example the being a dik minigames is an example of what I mean)

And to finish I will say that this message is only to give my opinion as a player, and in a critical but positive way, I do not want you to misunderstand this as a criticism to destroy your work, because I believe that if you have consistency with the game it can come out something very very good. I only hope that you are not one of many abandoned games for our misfortune and that you are very fortunate with the project.

Ps: Im not english maternal language, if u dont understand me or wrote as dummy so sorry.
 

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Finished the alpha.

Well, I have noticed that the access points to the different parts of the map are a little difficult to see or understand first, I think it would be convenient to put a mark for each area to make it easier to understand.

I've also had to spend three or four times in a row time because there was literally nothing to do, I don't know if you will put something in these times or it will just stay like that, but it's a bit annoying to have to speed up time so many times to keep playing.

About the characters nothing bad to say, diverse in personalities, aesthetics and I hope that in a way of flirting with them too (the fact that there is a trap I do not like, but I respect it for whoever does). Raven my fav btw.

About the plot at the moment I do not know much more than the beginning where you choose the background of the MC, so I remain expectant.

About the minigames of the puzzle, I am not a fan of them at all, and as I have already read they will be avoidable in the future. I am not against minigames in this type of genre, on the contrary, I like to give it variety, so if you put minigames based on something that has to do with what the MC does or will do, it would be perfect (for example the being a dik minigames is an example of what I mean)

And to finish I will say that this message is only to give my opinion as a player, and in a critical but positive way, I do not want you to misunderstand this as a criticism to destroy your work, because I believe that if you have consistency with the game it can come out something very very good. I only hope that you are not one of many abandoned games for our misfortune and that you are very fortunate with the project.

Ps: Im not english maternal language, if u dont understand me or wrote as dummy so sorry.
That was an amazing read, thanks you so much for such a well done constructive review of what the alpha currently has.

Huniepop was a game I really enjoyed, because for me it felt really good being rewarded after a minigame where I had limited moves. I like it so much to a degree that I wanted to have the same minigame vibes.
But apparently those two mediums don't really get along from what I can see from the feedback.
But I am not against it at all!
I think people should be allowed to enjoy the game the way they want, that's why I decided to have it be optional.

I've also noted that sometimes people don't simply show up in the map(even though each individually has around 40-50% chances of appearing).
And for now with so little to do yet that isn't good. So we're definitely going to ramp up the numbers to make them show up more often!

Unfortunately I am the worst writer that exists in this planet to the point where I had to hire someone to write the stories and I am very pleased with the outcome.
He really knows how to give personality to the characters.
To the point that many people enjoyed blair's personality, but got disappointed that he ended up being male.
(For those don't you worry! There will be a female blair option down the line!)

Unfortunately I also worked on another project but that regrettably ended abandoned but not because I got tired of it or anything of sorts, I had lost all of what I had done until that point(The entire project became corrupted). The only thing I had backed up was the renders/animations(simply because I'd compressed them, so the originals always stayed), the problem was that it was 14 days of development between the last update and its corruption.
It was going to be a huge update. When that happened I really didn't want people to accuse me of ditching the project and giving out excuses to just end it. I reached out to many people to try and recover the files but in the end nothing could be done.
Really didn't felt like dealing with the pressure that my fans and everyone else that liked the game to feel ripped off, so I released every preview I had done to the public(those were for patrons at the time) including all scenes and everything that I still had.

Regardless of that, thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated and with that we can only make the game better! ♥
 

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To the point that many people enjoyed blair's personality, but got disappointed that he ended up being male.
(For those don't you worry! There will be a female blair option down the line!)
Blair is written so well that i didn't mind being a trap/male

(but it's me who main kinks are: Good Plots and everything in their vanilla-version...i can love everything if there is good writing behind it)

XD so don't worry, an important hint is: write what you want, not what the "population" wants. It's better to fail with your own creation than become filthy rich but hate what you created.
 

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Blair is written so well that i didn't mind being a trap/male

(but it's me who main kinks are: Good Plots and everything in their vanilla-version...i can love everything if there is good writing behind it)

XD so don't worry, an important hint is: write what you want, not what the "population" wants. It's better to fail with your own creation than become filthy rich but hate what you created.
But I really like what my current writer is doing, he's imho doing a wonderful job.
Can't wait to get more characters done!
 
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ok i tricked avira now and can play, but the puzzles annoy me too... without them it was really more relaxed... what's next? pulling roots? history questions that can only be solved with the help of google because you are not from the country where they are usually asked?
Blair is sweet. Whatever he is, I'd still kiss him.
 

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The public poll has been closed and we had a lot of participants!

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Rika will have their story started, and Raven her story continued.
Meaning Raven will have H CONTENT next update!
 

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The public poll has been closed and we had a lot of participants!

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Rika will have their story started, and Raven her story continued.
Meaning Raven will have H CONTENT next update!
and...this game is going to suck, it just became patreons' bitch

Man, quick advice(that you already ignored): it's too early for polls of this kind, you should at least made enough content that all the main characters have at least 1 H-scene and then ask what developing next...not mentioning the fact that making this poll a real thing, you're going to develop only one character and while the others will be at their first interaction with MC.

it happened with milfycity (everytime a poll was out, everyone voted Caroline, to the point that the other characters are so underdeveloped that the game should be called Caroline's City)
 

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and...this game is going to suck, it just became patreons' bitch

Man, quick advice(that you already ignored): it's too early for polls of this kind, you should at least made enough content that all the main characters have at least 1 H-scene and then ask what developing next...not mentioning the fact that making this poll a real thing, you're going to develop only one character and while the others will be at their first interaction with MC.

it happened with milfycity (everytime a poll was out, everyone voted Caroline, to the point that the other characters are so underdeveloped that the game should be called Caroline's City)
Please do not accuse anything without any knowledge or making baseless assumptions.
The next poll will not feature any of the already worked characters.

Meaning the next poll will have:
Sophia Viviana Etna for starters.
And Blair Lyra to start having H content.

The one after that will have the ones picked removed and so on, until we're left with none and we can reset everything.
No character is going to be left behind.

"it just became patreons' bitch"

This poll was public.
It was posted on discord and here on Page 3.
And this poll wasn't even posted on patreon to begin with.

And NO patrons DO NOT get extra votes.

I didn't ignore any advice, I had to start making H content and start developing the other characters, I am just letting them chose which ones.(In a way that NOT A SINGLE OF MY CHARACTERS GETS LEFT BEHIND.)

Edit: Sorry if any of this sounded rude, not my intention here.
(Just please do not clump me with anyone you may know, I will always put the game above the money.)
(I am making the game out of passion for it, not for the profits, 95% of the money I'm getting went for the writer( and as soon as I have more will start using it for art assets)
 

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Please do not accuse anything without any knowledge or making baseless assumptions.
The next poll will not feature any of the already worked characters.

Meaning the next poll will have:
Sophia Viviana Etna for starters.
And Blair Lyra to start having H content.

The one after that will have the ones picked removed and so on, until we're left with none and we can reset everything.
No character is going to be left behind.

"It just became patreons' bitch"

This poll was public.
It was posted on discord and here on Page 3.
And this poll wasn't even posted on Patreon, to begin with.

And NO patrons DO NOT get extra votes.

I didn't ignore any advice, I had to start making H content and start developing the other characters, I am just letting them chose which ones.(In a way that NOT A SINGLE OF MY CHARACTERS GETS LEFT BEHIND.)

Edit: Sorry if any of this sounded rude, not my intention here.
(Just please do not clump me with anyone you may know, I will always put the game above the money.)
(I am making the game out of passion for it, not for the profits, 95% of the money I'm getting went for the writer( and as soon as I have more will start using it for art assets)
Don't apologize, you're right to be mad or annoyed(and i was rude/pissed)...i simply saw so many games(good ones) deciding for the poll-route and ending poorly that it used to hurt me(bc i care for those games) and now i feel like some sort of "internet-war veteran" and i get mad and sad everytime a poll comes out
 

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Don't apologize, you're right to be mad or annoyed(and i was rude/pissed)...i simply saw so many games(good ones) deciding for the poll-route and ending poorly that it used to hurt me(bc i care for those games) and now i feel like some sort of "internet-war veteran" and i get mad and sad everytime a poll comes out
And I will always make polls public so people don't feel robbed out, or that character choices are behind a paywall.
So in that regard I will always have that stance.
And pretty much any feedback that I see as valid I'll add it to my to-do list.
 
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