Good story, Great Premise and a good game overall, but if I were to rate it now it would only get 3 stars.
In my opinion the flaws are...
1) Poorly rendered and sometimes even ugly MC. Renders are grainy and low quality. I imagine this game would do much better if the MC model and renders attracted people to this title.
For instance the MC here
vs a good HQ render with a good looking MC
The render quality and the model desperately needs work. 12 pages of replies in 2 years is evidence people are not flocking here to see where the story goes. They see the MC and pass without even giving the story a chance.
The second flaw is the unknown outcomes to your choices, when you make choices they have an impact on the MC's life and changes her stats in Faithful, Submissive, Slut, and intelligence which is kind of cool. However, unless you religously follow the stat numbers in the stat ui, you can miss a ton of content.
For instance I found this game because it had a female protagonist and I was bored, so even though the MC was fairly unattractive I decided to give it a go. I quickly Fast forwarded through the choices, to get a rough idea of the story type. I saw Andrew getting a BJ after the carnival so I was happy it wasn't a slow burn BS game. When I started over to follow the story I tried 3 times to get to the same point in the game and could not duplicate the same choices that led me to the BJ scene.
I finally said fuck it and just edited my Save to get the outcome I wanted. The choices should be clearly and easily identified to show what stats are going to get boosted because some choices are not obvious. Some add an obvious Submissive boost but other choices may add a Submissive and Slut boost.
This is simply suggestions to the dev on how it may be possible to improve the game and get some more traffic driven to your Patreon. As it is now I overall LIKE this game but I like it because it has an interesting story so far and that's it.
No offense is intended or meant by my critique, it is simply a new players perspective that I hope helps.
Good Luck with your title and I at least will come back to check out the story as it is interesting.