lmao. I'll keep that in mind in the future dude.This one has promise. The only suggestion I have: adjust the lighting in scenes involving the dad/son. I know they're supposed to be black, but not "unlockable-playable-character-in-a-fighting-game" black...especially in the shadows.
I like the premise but I fully agree with many others. The stepmom's look is so much hotter without the clown makeup. I think maybe his "porn history" should just mention something like pale white chicks wearing black lipstick(we know he has the hots for Sal). That way she does not need to plaster her face with tons of makeup. She can say a friend bought her the lipstick and she is just trying it out.Resuming progress on Monday. I've gone ahead and planned in depth a load more of the story/scenes, as for a date. Not got one yet.
As for make-up. I won't be going 'clown'. What you saw in this was her idea of what he would like. As for the naming thing, I'm looking into it.I like the premise but I fully agree with many others. The stepmom's look is so much hotter without the clown makeup. I think maybe his "porn history" should just mention something like pale white chicks wearing black lipstick(we know he has the hots for Sal). That way she does not need to plaster her face with tons of makeup. She can say a friend bought her the lipstick and she is just trying it out.
Also, let us name the two main characters, for immersion.
Maybe he moved to Subscribestar due to incest bs going on (a huge assumption)
Doesn't seem like there is any incest. I mean the guy is going to bang his step-mom in the future (if the game keeps going).Maybe he moved to Subscribestar due to incest bs going on (a huge assumption)
afaik stepcest is also not allowed on patreonDoesn't seem like there is any incest. I mean the guy is going to bang his step-mom in the future (if the game keeps going).
Gotcha. Didn't know that. Thanks for the heads upafaik stepcest is also not allowed on patreon
Glad to hear the news! I hope you do well on there. I'll be waiting on an update on the game, hope it's soon
Got some things to inherently change, but rest assured I'm going to continue working on it!Glad to hear the news! I hope you do well on there. I'll be waiting on an update on the game, hope it's soon
There is more. There's an updated version on Subscribe-Star now of a Chapter Two. More pages coming this Wednesday too! It shows what went on in Detention. What the girls saw...Hey, I was wondering, I know this is off topic (I'm sure I'd love this game but this kind of interracial turns me off completely) but, does your comic Classroom Trouble end with the cliffhanger of the son about to learn where the girls in his class went or is there more after that?