RPGM Abandoned Briuna's Chronicles - HeroRise [v0.1.0] [BlackBarba]

[BlackBarba]

Overview:
The story takes place in the continent of Briuna, more precisely in the kingdom of Olaron. In this kingdom the Order of the Illuminated, the main religion there, foresaw that evil forces are rising to take over the world, so a young nun named Mivinna was given the task to find the choosen by the gods, which is Linnora, a young and skilled berserker, who likes to fight wearing almost nothing. Follow the adventures of these two in their quest to save the world (and maybe finding some clothes for Linnora).​

Thread Updated: 2019-03-10
Release Date: 2019-03-10
Developer: BlackBarba

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Version: 0.1.0
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[Papa Ernie]

Nice job on creating the thread. Good luck with your game!

 

[Boneca_S4B031r4]

Nice game

 

[xort]

I recall watching a video about pitching video games and what not to do.
1: We don't care about your world building or backstory.

"The story takes place in the continent of Briuna, more precisely in the kingdom of Olaron. In this kingdom the Order of the Illuminated, the main religion there, foresaw that evil forces are rising to take over the world "

I have no idea what Briuna is, I don't know the history of Olaron. The Order of the Illuminated is nothing to me.

How to write that as something someone cares about:

In the form of the buddy cop movie: She's a by the books nuns, (s)he's a wild and savage barbarian and together they are out to save the world. Watch as two cultures collide and a sexy adventure across a world torn apart by war.

Romantic Novel: A strong powerful warrior, a young and impressionable nun. In a world gone mad can they find their true feelings for each other? Will their love bloom on the battlefield? Can two girls love each other, or is that forbidden love?

An epic adventure: A brave barbarian warrior. A devote nun in service to god. Together they set out on a quest to save the world. Will the demon lord destroy them and the last chance of humanity to escape a million years of darkness?

 

[Almighty]

already a play for me just because of exhibitionist.

Yeah dev you got to have a sprite on screen pop up button in an exhibition game. Most games have it the A or Q key.

 

[Ginyu6789]

notice theres no sex tags lol

 

[myself]

please let there be tentacles/slime bestiality, futanari, and lesbian/yuri on it

 

[SuperMaxo]

Version 1.0 very short, basically the battle mechanics and the introduction of the two main characters. [Currently, battles are ridiculously easy, especially as potions (and heal spells) heal characters completely.] Some potential, although too early to see whether the game is destined for greatness or will forever stay average.

@BlackBarba it would benefit your game if you had someone proofread your game, even at such an early stage.

 

[Boneca_S4B031r4]

please let there be tentacles/slime bestiality, futanari, and lesbian/yuri on it

Interesting, I go by these scenes, in the game I stole

 

[march117]

Good luck with your game!

 

[kingofbrocoli]

Is that a female Guts?
bruh

 

[Cux]

please let there be tentacles/slime bestiality, futanari, and lesbian/yuri on it

Please let there be not

 

[ENF Master]

As long as there is lots of exhibitionism and public nudity, I am in. It would be good to allow the MC to go fully nude as well. Thinking about supporting this.

 

[ztai]

Please let there be not

Seconded. Just let the ravaging filth commence via slow corruption - You seem to have a good base and idea of the world building, just dont make it like every other rpg

 

[Xymma]

Haven't tried this one yet(Probably going to wait till closer to that V1.0 release, or till it is labeled officially abandoned.) but looking at the preview screen I have to say, the character models are impressive. These models are reminiscent of early modern JRPG ones, which I always felt were more beautiful and full of life than that of modern western character models. (this is the main reason I take a pass on most games using 3d models.)

Definitely going to keep an eye on this one, even if the writing turns out to be bland, just having good 3D models makes this one worth a look IMO.

 

[ILCjr]

I recall watching a video about pitching video games and what not to do.
1: We don't care about your world building or backstory.

"The story takes place in the continent of Briuna, more precisely in the kingdom of Olaron. In this kingdom the Order of the Illuminated, the main religion there, foresaw that evil forces are rising to take over the world "

I have no idea what Briuna is, I don't know the history of Olaron. The Order of the Illuminated is nothing to me.

How to write that as something someone cares about:

In the form of the buddy cop movie: She's a by the books nuns, (s)he's a wild and savage barbarian and together they are out to save the world. Watch as two cultures collide and a sexy adventure across a world torn apart by war.

Romantic Novel: A strong powerful warrior, a young and impressionable nun. In a world gone mad can they find their true feelings for each other? Will their love bloom on the battlefield? Can two girls love each other, or is that forbidden love?

An epic adventure: A brave barbarian warrior. A devote nun in service to god. Together they set out on a quest to save the world. Will the demon lord destroy them and the last chance of humanity to escape a million years of darkness?

Even with the grammatical issues of your suggestions, I would be more drawn in by one of them over the one that was used.

 

[Dan7777]

Actually, it looks like it has good potential, just write a good story with content according to players and the context of the story, and you get a good game.

Personally I love the textures, this kind of art is new to me, so keep it up and good luck with your game. As long as you can enjoy it too, you may not feel any remorse at all.

 

[PoyntFury]

The art looks rather nice, honestly would have rather seen them in a fully animated game, they feel a little wasted in rpgm.

 

[DrunkMonkGar]

Cute nudist barbarian and a hot nun, you've certainly got my attention.

 

[DeadHessian82]

I like. It's too short yet but omg i like the nude armor girl. If there gonna be more clothes for her and so on, i hope it will be optional so we can keep her in that nudist armor