RPGM Abandoned Briuna's Chronicles - HeroRise [v0.1.0] [BlackBarba]

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BlackBarba

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First of all I would like to thank you all for the words of support.
It`s really nice to see people enjoying the idea. :)
And I am kinda surprised that until now there was no comment complaining about the renders being made in Honey Select. :LOL:

I recall watching a video about pitching video games and what not to do.
1: We don't care about your world building or backstory.

"The story takes place in the continent of Briuna, more precisely in the kingdom of Olaron. In this kingdom the Order of the Illuminated, the main religion there, foresaw that evil forces are rising to take over the world "

I have no idea what Briuna is, I don't know the history of Olaron. The Order of the Illuminated is nothing to me.

How to write that as something someone cares about:

In the form of the buddy cop movie: She's a by the books nuns, (s)he's a wild and savage barbarian and together they are out to save the world. Watch as two cultures collide and a sexy adventure across a world torn apart by war.

Romantic Novel: A strong powerful warrior, a young and impressionable nun. In a world gone mad can they find their true feelings for each other? Will their love bloom on the battlefield? Can two girls love each other, or is that forbidden love?

An epic adventure: A brave barbarian warrior. A devote nun in service to god. Together they set out on a quest to save the world. Will the demon lord destroy them and the last chance of humanity to escape a million years of darkness?
Looking to the overview again I see what you mean. I had the story all in head and forgot the the rest of the world don`t.
I will definitely rewrite it.

already a play for me just because of exhibitionist.

Yeah dev you got to have a sprite on screen pop up button in an exhibition game. Most games have it the A or Q key.
I will put something like that, but since the game has two main chracters I still don`t figured out a way to put both on screen without losting a huge amout of the screen. I thinking in just display one chracter at time, and the player chooses wich one will be.

Version 1.0 very short, basically the battle mechanics and the introduction of the two main characters. [Currently, battles are ridiculously easy, especially as potions (and heal spells) heal characters completely.] Some potential, although too early to see whether the game is destined for greatness or will forever stay average.

@BlackBarba it would benefit your game if you had someone proofread your game, even at such an early stage.
I totally agree that a proofread would be helpful. I will try to find someone to do that in the nexts releases.
 
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Almighty

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I will put something like that, but since the game has two main chracters I still don`t figured out a way to put both on screen without losting a huge amout of the screen. I thinking in just display one chracter at time, and the player chooses wich one will be.
Yeah I don't think I've played a RPGM game where both characters sprite be up at the same time. I just recently played a game where you just choose which one pop ups. Hopefully the nun get naked soon enough. Perhaps you can make the nun like the game " " In that game when they get powered up certain level they lose more clothing.
 

xort

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Combat is slow. 4 hits to kill the first monster? Ugh.
If you want to put combat in the game make it fast. Remove as many pauses as you can. I should be able to grind trash mobs by holding down enter or hitting auto combat.
If you want to make combat a key game play mechanic then you need an deep in depth system with items augmenting powers, weapons with elements or anti enemy effects, skills that can be learned or bought.

I'd suggest looking at any of the Parallel Fantasy games or Noxian Nights.
For an example of what never to do try Chronicles of Leridia. Which is slow unrewarding and makes fights harder than they should be.
 
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Nerra

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A brunette MC with huge tits, and isn't afraid to show everything she's got. That's my type of girl.

I'll be keeping an eye on this game.
notice theres no sex tags lol
That doesn't bother me. Personally I would prefer it if games wouldn't get a tag until that content is ACTUALLY in the current game build, and not based on what the designer plans on doing in future versions.
please let there be tentacles/slime bestiality, futanari, and lesbian/yuri on it
PLEASE, no tentacles or slime!
 
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qudd

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I recall watching a video about pitching video games and what not to do.
1: We don't care about your world building or backstory.

"The story takes place in the continent of Briuna, more precisely in the kingdom of Olaron. In this kingdom the Order of the Illuminated, the main religion there, foresaw that evil forces are rising to take over the world "

I have no idea what Briuna is, I don't know the history of Olaron. The Order of the Illuminated is nothing to me.

How to write that as something someone cares about:

In the form of the buddy cop movie: She's a by the books nuns, (s)he's a wild and savage barbarian and together they are out to save the world. Watch as two cultures collide and a sexy adventure across a world torn apart by war.

Romantic Novel: A strong powerful warrior, a young and impressionable nun. In a world gone mad can they find their true feelings for each other? Will their love bloom on the battlefield? Can two girls love each other, or is that forbidden love?

An epic adventure: A brave barbarian warrior. A devote nun in service to god. Together they set out on a quest to save the world. Will the demon lord destroy them and the last chance of humanity to escape a million years of darkness?
using my first and probably only post on f95 to thank you for your god tier advice.

thank you.
 
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myself

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@Cux @Nerra husshhh a medieval female fantasy h-game without tentacle/slime is heresy!!! And if some of us has to endure the disgusting orc/goblin/"ugly guy" rape/sex scene (just hate those scenes), it should be ok for more variaty (in fact I only hunt for those scenes) besides it could perfectly be optional !!!
 
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Nerra

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OK, I've given this game a try. The only thing that I don't like is the camera zooming in and out on the monsters when you're in combat. I found the effect annoying.
 
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myself

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Well if it is like noxian 's night where it has a healthy amount of all type of fetiche i wont complain :D
 

RNDM

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Wait, this bitch fight with her tits and cunt bare? What the actual fuck...
That's exactly a single step removed from the average Fantasy Female Armour™ so I don't really see why you're so confused...
Not like there weren't for that kind of thing, anyway:
gauls.jpg

(And yes, even most contemporaries thought the Gaesatae were kinda weird and unnerving.)
 

TheSexinati

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That lady holding the sword in the image is pulling off the Ox ward, also known as Posta de fenestra in the Italian format... Niiiicceeee

Of course, there is probably hundreds of wards/guard positions in numerous other martial arts, but outside of this It was probably unintentionally done by the maker of this game by someone with no background in martial arts... but still... Niiiicceee

On another note. There is nothing quite like looking at some fine Celtic booty on F95zone! I doff my felted Petasos to them.

Overall, I have no sex boner. But my history boner... now that is very large and enflamed right now!
 
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goatwhisperer3

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shes already nude so there is no corruption possible..... sounds like wasted potential and nothing but a 0815 adventure left to me
( ' -')
 

BrokenRose

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That's exactly a single step removed from the average Fantasy Female Armour™ so I don't really see why you're so confused...
Yeah, but there's nudity - as in, completely naked - and then there's this nudity, where she deliberately leaves her breasts and vagina bare, while still wearing some clothes/armour.
 

RNDM

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Yeah, but there's nudity - as in, completely naked - and then there's this nudity, where she deliberately leaves her breasts and vagina bare, while still wearing some clothes/armour.
Decoration (and, obviously, added fetish factor); the aforementioned Celtic Gaesatae still wore the usual sword-belts and helmets too - already for practical reasons (need to carry your sword somehow) and because those were the symbols of a warrior.

Not like what little she's wearing has fuck-all protective relevance anyway.
 

Usokitsuki

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Tl;dr something like Unity would be better

There are exactly three reasons not to do 3dcg for the game made in engine, designed for 2dcg.
Reason one: waste of renders. The moment you turn a perfectly solid model into a 2d picture, you lose all the potential of that model. Animation, shading, environmental lighting (discrepancies in which affect viewer's impression way more than artists tend to think). It is especially true for the RPG Maker. Any attempt at animating anything in it can only be done via god-awful live-2d, spamming scripts that show pictures on screen in correct order (which is not only as tedious as building an egyptian pyramid all by yourself, but also affects performance — and it is already far from stellar in RPG maker), or the use of gifs with pre-rendered animations — at which point one should ask themselves if there is any point to even bothering with RPG Maker anymore, as the only plus side to putting 3dcg into it instead of just making a, say, animated game in unity, is that you don't need to animate shit and trouble yourself with model collisions and what-not.

Reason two: conflicting art-styles. Which is perfectly visible from even the op-post. Realistically rendered heroines just don't fit on the same screen with cutesy-drawn slime and cartoony grass background (it also shows perfectly what I mean by discrepancies in environmental lighting). Even if background and enemies can be swapped to renders as well, you are still left with map textures, character sprites, etc etc. Do bear in mind, that switching all the default assets to pictures of models still would require making models, rendering backrounds, basically doing all the things people usually try to avoid doing by choosing RPG Maker.

And then there are issues (resolveable, yes, but present and requiring work-arounds still, only further complicating the already over-complicated scripting on Every Single Map) with the engine itself, like combat AI that makes zero to no sense unless you spend your sweet time working on every single encounter, so that player doesn't run into a monster that spams its ultimate attack every turn.

RPG Maker just is not fit for large-scale adventures, and neither it is designed to accomodate 3dcg. It does not posses any unique qualities either, aside from having its internal features (combat, movement, inventory, menus) already inside without the need to code them yourself. Hell, the same functionality can be achieved in flash, Corruption of Champions be one example. Making epic porn adventures in Maker is already like hammering a nail with a microscope, and I would strongly suggest considering another engine, better suited for your needs, before time spent on scripting tiles in maker becomes so great, that changing engine is no longer viable as a choice.

I wish more people would realise, that while you certainly CAN do a lot of things in RPG Maker, the only thing it is GOOD for is small-scale rpgs. Witch House is a good example of what RPG Maker good for, and Violated Heroine (a trainwreck of bugs and unfinished, albeit interesting, features) is a shining example of what RPGMaker can be used to do, but should not — as properly do it will not.
 

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I like the concept you've got going here, but i'm gonna be honest with you chief: Having to manage 2 main characters can be kind of a drag, not to mention it probably doubles your work.

I'd like to suggest maybe, storyline/gameplay could be divided in sections where you go between the two main characters on separate missions, all working to a same goal. And this would all culminate into a team together climax once the small shit is taken care of.

So that inbetween area between major events gives players a sense of free-roam to play each character, before bottle necking into the next major event, and either achieves good ending or maybe things don't go as planned, they regroup and make new plan and adventure continues, etc ,etc

That aside, I think the Barbarian girl, as a concept is pretty neat. Her 'armor' though, looks too modern (?)
If possible, give her some horns and furs like something straight out of the Conan universe. Like, if you've ever seen the bikini armors mod for Skyrim, that in of itself would give a good idea how to 'armor' her.
I've yet to think of many H-Games where you got to play as a Barbarian outsider type that didn't give a shit about what other people think. That's gonna be a cool dynamic compared to either being a shy princess knight type we're all used to or just plain starting out as a turbo-slut.

Her claymore is perfect though! Isn't too over designed or too huge. Just straight up cool and all business.

p.s. Don't remove her bush, it adds character!
also p.s. tentacles and monsters are okay, variety is best.
 
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